CaRWash Fic - Slow Dancing

Disclaimer: Don't own anything to do with the show or the song, Slow Dancing In A Burning Room except some merchandise and the CD of John Mayer's Continuum. Which I recommend listening to a live version of this.
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In a bar, off the beaten path, mostly unknown to tourists, it was on the outskirts of town. The room smelled of stale beer and smoke. A person with a broom swept around the dance floor, his head down to mind his business. It was too early in the day to make any money, but the bar had its first customers.
Two people standing close together, close enough to wonder where one ended and the other began, slowly swaying to the tunes the jukebox bellowed out.

Her head was against his chest, listening to his heartbeat that kept rhythm with tune of the moment.

This time was theirs, having to answer to no one, just basking in each other’s presence. Her arm matched his that stuck out to the side to clasp hands as the danced.

No words were needed to be spoken; they knew what the other was thinking.

They couldn’t be bothered here.

They shouldn’t be together.

But holding out can only last so long before the temptation becomes to great, and the secret becomes your lifeline, something cannot be told no matter how many times it’s about to come out.

Late night visits.

Secret dates to places they would never go just so they wouldn’t be seen.

Like this bar.

Who would think either would come here, to a biker bar?

They had done it all.

He breathed in her scent and closed his eyes filing it away in his head for later, when he needed to be with her but couldn’t.

He would think of the way she smelled and it would tide him over until he made the visit to her apartment.

Where two would become one again.

Where all that mattered was each other.

Where no one could tell them dating a co-worker could jeopardize their career.

It was just two people existing.

In a world full of others.

Together.
 
That was absolutely BEYOND perfect. I could literally see them dancing in my head. Great job! I really hope that Ryan is going to be the new "boyfriend" of Calleigh in Season 5. Who do you think it's going to be. Keeping my fingers crossed.
 
If it's not Jake, then I'm thinking it's someone new that no one knows about, they wouldnt do another Eric and Natalia just yet. But it would be fantastic if it did happen to end CaRWash.

Thanks for the review.
 
Great story. Calleigh's new boyfriend is gonna be Jake Berkeley (if you ask TPTB).

But yeah CaRWash would be better.
 
obsessedTWCSIfan be careful, you had double posting: you know you can use the EDIT button within 24 hours, this way you can edit your post instead of posting several times.

That's one of the board rules

PS: i also liked the story!
 
Wow, I know I must sound incredibly stupid asking this, but I have absolutely no idea whatsoever about who or what “TPTB” is. Would you care to shed some light on the subject?

God, I really do hope Jake doesn’t end up being Calleigh’s new boyfriend. In the last episode that he guest starred in, he came off to me as a “bad boy/player/pervert.” I mean seriously, CaRWash all the way!

Lastly, a couple weeks ago, I had come up with an “ingenious” plan that would surely win over the cast, crew, producers etc. of CSI: Miami and make them realize that Ryan is the only man for Calleigh. If anyone has read the "Ryan Wolfe" article on Wikipedia recently, they'd see that "someone" had added in a part about there being "something going on between Calleigh and Ryan." If you haven't already guessed, that was actually I in a desperate ploy to convince everyone at CBS that CaRWash is meant to be! The way I pictured that everything would “go down” was to have the writers "randomly" stumble upon the article, read that little “stub” about Calleigh being Ryan’s girl, and realize that "Wow, that clever (as well as beautiful girl who deserves to guest start on CSI: Miami :p) has opened our eyes to the truth that Calleigh Duquesne and Ryan Wolfe should totally be a couple on the show!" Sadly, as of yet, my plan isn't working that well… actually, not at all. They’re still pairing Calleigh with that stupid ditz and leaving Ryan alone and miserable. Hopefully they'll come to their senses soon!
 
Hey ryancaleighRluv, I think you're new, so nice to have you here. However, this is the fanfiction thread and a reply to a story someone wrote. As for your plan, you might wanna post it in the CaRWash thread, which is where the discussions take place. You will find the link here. Hope to see you there! ;) And for TPTB, it means 'the powers that be' and with that we mean the writers of CSI:Miami.
 
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