Jade_Nolan
CSI Level One
so I haven't posted anything in this forum for over a year despite having written stuff (oops...), so I thought I'd pop over and post a couple of the stories I'm currently working on. So without further ado, here's Anthem of Angels.
Rating: T - mild language, violence, and innuendo
Synopsis: In one of Mac's first cases as a detective, he learns just how dangerous it can be crossing the wrong people.
Chapter 1
He heard footsteps behind him and turned just in time to see the handle of a gun smash into the side of his head. He fell to the ground, stunned, blood making its way down his face from a gash that instantly opened. As he tried to regain his orientation and stop the world from spinning, the wind was knocked out of him as a boot connected just under his rib cage with enough force to throw him sideways. He gasped for air, and his already hazy vision blurred even further.
Then blows came from every direction as he was surrounded and beaten.
He instinctively covered his head, tried to protect his midsection and twist out of the way. But there were too many, and it wasn't just fists and boots that were used. A tire iron crashed into his arm that was across his face. He would have cried out as his arm broke if it hadn't have been for a following blow to his side, breaking ribs and knocking the wind out of him again.
He was hit again and again.
The beating seemed to last forever. He managed to ward off several strikes, but they came fast and furious, hitting his already damaged ribs, back and extremities. Eventually they proved too much and too many. He stopped feeling individual pain, and his whole being became one giant sheet of dull agony as there became hardly an un-hit part of him. He felt his strength eek away, and gradually stopped trying to evade the blows.
His body shuddered as they continued to rain down.
"That's enough," a voice said. It was the first time anyone had said anything. "We don't want him dead. Not yet anyway."
The assault stopped.
He lay still, face down, unable to move, his broken arm still draped limply over his head. Pain coursed through him as he fought to catch his breath and his hazy semi-conscious awareness seemed distant and surreal.
"Pick him up," the same voice said.
Hands ruthlessly grabbed his battered body, and he let out a choked cry as they wrenched on his broken arm and unstable ribs. The man who had spoken walked towards him. Unable to support his own weight, Mac hung limply between the men holding him up, head drooped forward.
He winced as the man grabbed his hair, jerking his head up and back so he could look him in the face. It was covered in blood from a multitude of cuts and his vision was very nearly obscured, but he could make out who it was: Rivera. He should have known. Then he felt the cold metal of a gun barrel press against his exposed neck, and he tensed, going even stiller.
"We told you to stay out of our business," Rivera shook his head, "But you just don't listen, do you?"
"I'm not good at obeying thugs," Mac choked out between short, painful breaths. His tongue felt thick and his words were slurred.
"No, I can see that," Rivera replied, as Mac's cell rang. The unexpected sound made everyone freeze momentarily. Pushing the gun even harder into Mac's neck, Rivera let go of his hair and fished in his jacket pocket pulling out his phone. Mac angled his gaze down to see who it was. It was Claire. He closed his eyes and felt an overwhelming sense of grief. He wasn't afraid to die. Hell, he'd given his life over to borrowed time a long time ago, but the thought of Claire opening the door to a grim Harris telling her he was dead, and seeing her face and her pain, made a new agony tear through him.
Rivera caught the look that flashed across Mac's face. "It's your wife isn't it," he asked with a devilish half-smile.
Mac glared at him.
Rivera flipped open Mac's phone, his thumb hovering over the 'answer' button. "Maybe we should let her hear what happens when you don't do as we instruct."
Terror flooded through Mac, and his throat constricted with near-panic at the thought of Claire being forced to listen to his murder. That was beyond cruel.
"No. Please." he managed, his voice shaking.
Rivera just smiled at him without a trace of humour in the expression. His thumb pushed the 'answer' button, then 'speaker'. Mac could hear the faint sound of Claire's favorite CD in the background. There was a pause as Claire obviously waited for him to answer. Mac swallowed hard, and blinked back the hot tears that had formed.
"Mac?" she said after a few moments, "Mac? Are you there?"
Mac couldn't speak.
"Mac?"
"Answer her!" Rivera hissed in his ear, pressing the gun painfully into his throat. "Answer her, or I'll shoot you right now while she can hear."
"Claire?" Mac managed, his voice tight.
"Mac? Mac, are you ok?"
"Yeah, I'm…I…something's come up at work," Mac said, trying to keep his tone as even as possible. He coughed in a vain attempt to keep blood from trickling down the back of his throat.
"Is everything alright? Shall I call you back later?" Mac could hear the instant concern in her voice, and emotion threatened to take him over.
"Yeah," he said, his voice not much more than a strangled whisper.
"What's going on? Are you sure? You don't sound good honey. You've got me kind of worried." She had turned the background music off.
Rivera shoved the gun into Mac's throat again. He choked, and Rivera released some of the pressure.
"Yeah," he managed. "Look, I'll…I'll talk you later, ok?"
"Okay," Claire replied reluctantly. "I love you baby."
His heart threatened to explode into a million pieces at the thought of her trying to call him later, with no hope of an answer. He squeezed his eyes closed as tears escaped him, mixing with the blood that still dripped off his chin.
"I love you too."
Rivera snapped the phone closed. "Well wasn't that sweet," he said mockingly. "Can't say I never did anything nice." He grinned evily.
Mac glared at him with nothing but pure hate. "Why don't you shoot me already and get it over with," he spat.
"Because if I wanted to shoot you, I would have done it from the start." Rivera held out his hand to one of the men who was standing behind him. The man walked forward and handed Rivera the tire iron he had. Rivera took the gun from Mac's neck and stepped backwards, swinging the iron in his hand. "And this gets the point across just as well. Better, in fact. Besides," he continued, his anger growing rapidly and pacing back and forth in front of Mac, "You cost me. You cost me dearly, and now you gotta pay."
He took a couple of running steps towards Mac, bringing the tire iron back with both hands. He swung it full force at Mac's unprotected belly.
Pain like Mac hadn't known exploded through his midsection, and despite being held on each side, he folded over. Rivera hit him again and again. Mac choked on blood in the back of his throat, and through the white sheet of agony, he knew he was really severely injured.
Rivera tossed the tire iron aside and paced in front of him again, breathing hard with the rage and adrenaline that had built up.
"No one crosses and humiliates me!" he shouted. "No one!"
Mac was now completely limp and aware of almost nothing except the excruciating pain that tore through him.
Rivera crossed the small distance between them. He grabbed Mac's blood matted hair, yanking his head up and pressing his gun back into his neck. "You hear me?" he all but screamed at him, spit flying. "NO ONE!"
He released Mac and turned his back on him, taking a couple steps away. He paused, hand tightening and clenching at his side. Then in one motion, he turned with a yell and hit Mac across the side of the head with his gun. Already almost-unconscious, Mac's head snapped to the side and back front. Blood poured down his face as the laceration from the earlier blow opened wider, and Rivera could see the life escaping with it. His white-hot fury subsided and he straightened his shirt. He regained his cold, authoritative anger.
He motioned to the two men who still holding Mac up. "Leave him, he's as good as dead. Let's go."
They dropped him unceremoniously and left.
Mac crumpled to the ground. He lay motionless and barely breathing. He was in so much pain his brain didn't even know how to register it anymore. Somehow though, he retained enough presence of mind to push the little orange emergency button on his radio. He heard the dispatcher say something to try to reach him over the open mic channel that was now keyed to his radio. But he couldn't even understand what she was saying, let alone hope to answer.
His final thought as he stubbornly struggled to breath despite the darkness that crashed over him, was of Claire. He wanted nothing more than to hold her, and feel her arms around him one last time.
His eyes closed despite his efforts, and he lay alone, unconscious, his blood tracing a path along the pavement of the alley.
Three days previously…
Rating: T - mild language, violence, and innuendo
Synopsis: In one of Mac's first cases as a detective, he learns just how dangerous it can be crossing the wrong people.
Chapter 1
He heard footsteps behind him and turned just in time to see the handle of a gun smash into the side of his head. He fell to the ground, stunned, blood making its way down his face from a gash that instantly opened. As he tried to regain his orientation and stop the world from spinning, the wind was knocked out of him as a boot connected just under his rib cage with enough force to throw him sideways. He gasped for air, and his already hazy vision blurred even further.
Then blows came from every direction as he was surrounded and beaten.
He instinctively covered his head, tried to protect his midsection and twist out of the way. But there were too many, and it wasn't just fists and boots that were used. A tire iron crashed into his arm that was across his face. He would have cried out as his arm broke if it hadn't have been for a following blow to his side, breaking ribs and knocking the wind out of him again.
He was hit again and again.
The beating seemed to last forever. He managed to ward off several strikes, but they came fast and furious, hitting his already damaged ribs, back and extremities. Eventually they proved too much and too many. He stopped feeling individual pain, and his whole being became one giant sheet of dull agony as there became hardly an un-hit part of him. He felt his strength eek away, and gradually stopped trying to evade the blows.
His body shuddered as they continued to rain down.
"That's enough," a voice said. It was the first time anyone had said anything. "We don't want him dead. Not yet anyway."
The assault stopped.
He lay still, face down, unable to move, his broken arm still draped limply over his head. Pain coursed through him as he fought to catch his breath and his hazy semi-conscious awareness seemed distant and surreal.
"Pick him up," the same voice said.
Hands ruthlessly grabbed his battered body, and he let out a choked cry as they wrenched on his broken arm and unstable ribs. The man who had spoken walked towards him. Unable to support his own weight, Mac hung limply between the men holding him up, head drooped forward.
He winced as the man grabbed his hair, jerking his head up and back so he could look him in the face. It was covered in blood from a multitude of cuts and his vision was very nearly obscured, but he could make out who it was: Rivera. He should have known. Then he felt the cold metal of a gun barrel press against his exposed neck, and he tensed, going even stiller.
"We told you to stay out of our business," Rivera shook his head, "But you just don't listen, do you?"
"I'm not good at obeying thugs," Mac choked out between short, painful breaths. His tongue felt thick and his words were slurred.
"No, I can see that," Rivera replied, as Mac's cell rang. The unexpected sound made everyone freeze momentarily. Pushing the gun even harder into Mac's neck, Rivera let go of his hair and fished in his jacket pocket pulling out his phone. Mac angled his gaze down to see who it was. It was Claire. He closed his eyes and felt an overwhelming sense of grief. He wasn't afraid to die. Hell, he'd given his life over to borrowed time a long time ago, but the thought of Claire opening the door to a grim Harris telling her he was dead, and seeing her face and her pain, made a new agony tear through him.
Rivera caught the look that flashed across Mac's face. "It's your wife isn't it," he asked with a devilish half-smile.
Mac glared at him.
Rivera flipped open Mac's phone, his thumb hovering over the 'answer' button. "Maybe we should let her hear what happens when you don't do as we instruct."
Terror flooded through Mac, and his throat constricted with near-panic at the thought of Claire being forced to listen to his murder. That was beyond cruel.
"No. Please." he managed, his voice shaking.
Rivera just smiled at him without a trace of humour in the expression. His thumb pushed the 'answer' button, then 'speaker'. Mac could hear the faint sound of Claire's favorite CD in the background. There was a pause as Claire obviously waited for him to answer. Mac swallowed hard, and blinked back the hot tears that had formed.
"Mac?" she said after a few moments, "Mac? Are you there?"
Mac couldn't speak.
"Mac?"
"Answer her!" Rivera hissed in his ear, pressing the gun painfully into his throat. "Answer her, or I'll shoot you right now while she can hear."
"Claire?" Mac managed, his voice tight.
"Mac? Mac, are you ok?"
"Yeah, I'm…I…something's come up at work," Mac said, trying to keep his tone as even as possible. He coughed in a vain attempt to keep blood from trickling down the back of his throat.
"Is everything alright? Shall I call you back later?" Mac could hear the instant concern in her voice, and emotion threatened to take him over.
"Yeah," he said, his voice not much more than a strangled whisper.
"What's going on? Are you sure? You don't sound good honey. You've got me kind of worried." She had turned the background music off.
Rivera shoved the gun into Mac's throat again. He choked, and Rivera released some of the pressure.
"Yeah," he managed. "Look, I'll…I'll talk you later, ok?"
"Okay," Claire replied reluctantly. "I love you baby."
His heart threatened to explode into a million pieces at the thought of her trying to call him later, with no hope of an answer. He squeezed his eyes closed as tears escaped him, mixing with the blood that still dripped off his chin.
"I love you too."
Rivera snapped the phone closed. "Well wasn't that sweet," he said mockingly. "Can't say I never did anything nice." He grinned evily.
Mac glared at him with nothing but pure hate. "Why don't you shoot me already and get it over with," he spat.
"Because if I wanted to shoot you, I would have done it from the start." Rivera held out his hand to one of the men who was standing behind him. The man walked forward and handed Rivera the tire iron he had. Rivera took the gun from Mac's neck and stepped backwards, swinging the iron in his hand. "And this gets the point across just as well. Better, in fact. Besides," he continued, his anger growing rapidly and pacing back and forth in front of Mac, "You cost me. You cost me dearly, and now you gotta pay."
He took a couple of running steps towards Mac, bringing the tire iron back with both hands. He swung it full force at Mac's unprotected belly.
Pain like Mac hadn't known exploded through his midsection, and despite being held on each side, he folded over. Rivera hit him again and again. Mac choked on blood in the back of his throat, and through the white sheet of agony, he knew he was really severely injured.
Rivera tossed the tire iron aside and paced in front of him again, breathing hard with the rage and adrenaline that had built up.
"No one crosses and humiliates me!" he shouted. "No one!"
Mac was now completely limp and aware of almost nothing except the excruciating pain that tore through him.
Rivera crossed the small distance between them. He grabbed Mac's blood matted hair, yanking his head up and pressing his gun back into his neck. "You hear me?" he all but screamed at him, spit flying. "NO ONE!"
He released Mac and turned his back on him, taking a couple steps away. He paused, hand tightening and clenching at his side. Then in one motion, he turned with a yell and hit Mac across the side of the head with his gun. Already almost-unconscious, Mac's head snapped to the side and back front. Blood poured down his face as the laceration from the earlier blow opened wider, and Rivera could see the life escaping with it. His white-hot fury subsided and he straightened his shirt. He regained his cold, authoritative anger.
He motioned to the two men who still holding Mac up. "Leave him, he's as good as dead. Let's go."
They dropped him unceremoniously and left.
Mac crumpled to the ground. He lay motionless and barely breathing. He was in so much pain his brain didn't even know how to register it anymore. Somehow though, he retained enough presence of mind to push the little orange emergency button on his radio. He heard the dispatcher say something to try to reach him over the open mic channel that was now keyed to his radio. But he couldn't even understand what she was saying, let alone hope to answer.
His final thought as he stubbornly struggled to breath despite the darkness that crashed over him, was of Claire. He wanted nothing more than to hold her, and feel her arms around him one last time.
His eyes closed despite his efforts, and he lay alone, unconscious, his blood tracing a path along the pavement of the alley.
Three days previously…