Address In The Stars

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  1. beautifuldisaster

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    Ok this is a songfic and the song is called "Address In The Stars" by Caitlin and Will! It's an amazing song!!!! This is an EDeN songfic! And I think the song fits them very well! Or at least it fits Natalia very well!!!! The story is from her point of view! So I hope you enjoy! I just threw it together within 5 minutes! So hopefully it's not to shabby!!! I do have a video comin from an amazing person on Youtube to this song and will post it as soon as they get done with it! Enjoyyyyy!!!!


    (Natalia is lookin in a drawer for something and finds a picture of Eric)
    "I stumbled across your old picture today"

    (As she lets out a sigh)
    "I could barely breathe"

    (As she smiled down at the picture)
    "The moment stopped me cold, grabbed me like a thief"

    (As she picked up her phone and starts dialing his number)
    "I dialed your number but you wouldnt be there"

    (Closes her eyes and closes her phone to end the call)
    "I knew the whole time but its still not fair"

    (As she rests her head on her dresser)
    "I just wanted to hear your voice"

    (As she starts to cry)
    "I just need to hear your voice"

    (As she goes to get a shower)
    "What do I do with all I need to say"

    (As she lets the water run down her body)
    "So much I wanna tell you everyday"

    (As she splashes water on her face to wake her up)
    "Oh it breaks my heart"

    (As she starts crying)
    "I cry these tears in the dark"

    (As she turns the water off and gets out of the shower)
    "I write these letters to you but they get lost in the blue"

    (As she gets ready to go to work)
    "Cause there's no address in the stars"

    (As she's drivin to work)
    "Now I'm drivin through the pitch black dark"

    (As she's singing at the top of her lungs to a song on the radio)
    "I'm screaming at the sky cuz it hurts so bad"

    (As she pulls in and gets out of the car and sees Calleigh and Calleigh walks over to comfort her as she sees she's been cryin)
    "Everybody tells me all I need is time"

    (As she walks in and...)
    "Then the mornin rolls in and it hits me again"

    (Sees Eric standing there at the front desk and she lets out a sigh)
    "And that ain't nothing but a lie"

    (As she's waiting on some DNA results and Eric walks in)
    "What do I do with all I need to say"

    (As she thinks about things she wants to tell him as he's talkin to her)
    "So much I wanna tell you everyday"

    (As she gets the results and watches him leave)
    "Oh it breaks my heart"

    (As she goes to the break room and cries)
    "I cry these tears in the dark"

    (As she starts writing him a letter)
    "I write thses letters to you but they get lost in the blue"

    (As she crumbles up the piece of paper and throws it away)
    "Cause there's no address in the stars"

    (As she leans back against the couch)
    "Without you here with me"

    (As she closes her eyes and lets out a sigh)
    "I don't know what to do"

    (As she sits up to the sound of the door opening and finds Eric stading right there in front of her)
    "I'd give anything just to talk to you"

    (As she looks deep into his eyes)
    "Oh it breaks my heart"

    (As he looks deep into her eyes)
    "Oh it breaks my heart"

    (As she gets up and walks over to him)
    "All I can do is write these letters to you"

    (As he pulls her into a hug and kisses her head and she cries into his chest)
    "But there's no address in the stars"

    The End
     
  2. GregNickRyanFan

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    I've never heard any of their songs, but I do know they're the ones that won on Can You Duet. :lol:

    Good fic. At first I thought Eric was dead cause that's what I figured "no address in the stars" meant, but I guess I was misinterpreting the lyrics.
     
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    I think the song does mean that but I don't like the thought of him dying so I did it this way! It was alot easier too!
     
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    Yeah, it does sound like he's gone, but I like this version much better. :D Wonderful job.
     
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    Thank you! And the song is about someone dying but...MJ I love your icon and signature!
     
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    Wow this was amazing!! Great Job!!
     
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    Thank you! =D After thinkin about it, I thought about re-doin it to where he gets shot and dies. But I just don't really have time right now!
     
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    ^^^ Oh, please don't! It's much nicer this way. :lol:
     
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    Haha ok :lol: I'm glad you like it this way! It would've been hard to do it the other way! I'm workin on another songfic right now! It prob won't be up until Mon or Tues cause I'm leavin for Miami tomorrow. But I'm gonna work on it!
     
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    YAY!! Another song fic!! I can't wait.

    Your so lucky! Going to Miami with out MJ and I. Oh well if you see Eric can you package him and bring him back and then send him to me please!!:lol: Anyway Have fun on your trip!!:)
     
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    Oh I'm goin lookin for them!!! Me and my friend are!!!! lol But I will bring him back so everyone can share! I think I would die if I actually found them! But who knows! I'm sorry ya'll couldn't come! I'm goin for softball so....
     
  12. GregNickRyanFan

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    :lol: I'll take Ryan. :D

    Seriously, have a good trip. Hope you have lots of fun!

    Maybe being in Miami will give you some new fic ideas. :D
     
  13. beautifuldisaster

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    Haha I'll try and bring them both back! I'll bring Natalia too! =D Maybe I can find out some things while I'm down there! If I can even find where they do film it! Does anyone have any suggestions????? And thank you everyone!
     
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    The show is actually filmed in California, but they used to go to Miami to film parts or premieres and finales for each season. But according to Emily Procter, they will not be doing that this year due to budget problems. I'm not sure if they'll still have the Miami aerial shots though.
     
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    Awww dang it! O well! It's ok! Thanx for letting me know! =D I should have the new fanfic up tomorrow!
     

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