A fatih in a higher Power

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A fatih in a Higher Power

A faith in a higher Powers Plot: I got inspiration to write this fan fiction from the CSI:Miami season six plots. This story is going to be about my fav guy: Horatio Caine and his woes. I am a big fan of the father son relationship develop on season six, Horatio has a son(Kyle) and I love it. Anyway this story is about a shooting and crimes that may or may not have similair consequences. A custody battle, with nothing off limits, a budding relationship put to the test, and a darker Lt. I will explore the aspects of Horatio and how protective he can get when family is threathened.

DISCLAMIER: I do not own or have ever owned the chracters and the name CSI:Miami. This story is meant for enjoyment and fun, I am not making any profit for it. Please do not confuse me with the real writers of the show. Thanks and enjoy :)

CHAPTER ONE: An Introduction and a Defeat

It was raining when Horatio went to go pick Mac up from the airport, it wasn't a usual Miami day, which caused him to believe that this won't be a usual day at all. Mack, was head of the CSI crime lab in New York and Horatio's good friend, he was coming to Miami to help this crime lab solve a string of crimes that mirror those in New York. Horatio was angst and could not wait to see his friend. Lost in his thoughts he did not see Mack walk up until he heard his voice:

"Caine" spoke Mac

"Mack" answered Horatio concealing his happiness to see his friend

"How's it going?"

"Well other then the strong desire to solve these crimes, things are going good."

"Well then lets not waste anytime." Responded Mack in an authentic New York accent.

Horatio helped Mac with his bags and the two climbed into the car.

Across Town

"Calleigh did you get the test back from Ballistics?" Asked Eric, a CSI and underwater diver extraordinaire.

"Nothing yet, the only things we have on these cases are eye witness accounts and bullets that have not come from ballistics." Replied Calleigh, all around southern beauty and Ballistics expert.

"Oh, yeah we need a break on these crimes before the killer or killers strike again."

"Yeah I know I'm hoping Horatio's friend can give us some good input."

"Yeah me too."

And with that Eric made his exit

Meanwhile in Horatio's Hummer

"So Caine anything new since the last time we saw each other?" Asked Mac

"Well, lets see, I got married and lost my wife, I have a niece and a nephew, but you know that and umm...I have a son his name is Kyle."

"Oh wow a son, how old is the little fella."

"Well the little fella is 16, I didn't know he existed until six months ago."

"Oh I see, how's fatherhood?"

"Fatherhood is wonderful, everyday I am learning new things about my son, everything from his looks to his mannerisms, mirror mine. The only bad thing is the boys mother: Julia Winston, she's the issue. Right now we cannot agree on anything concerning Kyle, everything down to school and his living situation, we argue about. She has no shame disagreeing with me in front of Kyle, and I keep telling her I will not argue with her in front of my son, but she doesn't care she does it anyway. Mac I tolerant her, because I have to go through her to get to Kyle, but to tell you the truth I can raise him without her."

"Wow, Horatio, sounds like you have more to deal with then just a crazy killer." Mack chuckled

Horatio looked at Mack and smiled.

BACK AT THE CRIME LAB

"Hey Ryan is my dad back yet?" Asked Kyle, Horatio's son.

"No not yet, why don't you go and wait for him in his office?" Answered Ryan, a CSI.

''Okay, well if he comes in tell him his son is waiting for him, we're supposed to go out for lunch."

"No Problem." Answered Ryan as Kyle made his way to his father's office.

IN ANOTHER PART OF THE BULIDING

"Eric we got the test back from ballistics and the bullet shell casings belong to a mister Robert Shaw." Calleigh began as she walked into one of the crime labs Eric was working in.

"Okay have Ryan bring Mister Shaw in for questioning and I will call Horatio about the lead."

"Okay Eric."

"Thanks Calleigh"

"You welcome."

ARRIVING AT THE CRIME LAB

Horatio and Mack walked into the crime lab and the first person they were greeted by was Ryan:

"Horatio, Kyle is waiting for you in your office, something about having to go to lunch later on today."

"Thanks Ryan. Ryan this is Mack, he's head of the CSI crime lab in New York."

"Hello Mack how's it going?" Said Ryan as he extended his hand to shake Macks.

"Hello Ryan, I'm doing fine, the flight was long, but other then that I am ready to find this creep." Mack replied, looking around at his surroundings

After everyone was introduced Mack and Horatio made their way to Horatio's office were his son was waiting for him:

"Dad, your back." Kyle was the first to speak

"Son, I want you to meet my good friend Mack"

"Hey Mack"

"How's it going Kyle?"

"Fine Mr. Mack; dad are we going to lunch or not?"Asked Kyle

"Yeah, let me just get Mack situated and up to speed on a case we are working on, then we can go anywhere you want to go, okay."

"Yes dad."

"You know Horatio, I can catch up with another CSI you can take your son out to eat, he looks a little hungry."

"Mr. Mack if you only knew." Joked Kyle.

"Mack, are you sure about this?"

"Yeah, Horatio I'll be fine, take your son out to lunch."

"Okay Kyle let's get ready to go to lunch."

Kyle and Horatio made their way to the door, as they walked out of the building, Horatio in front Kyle following behind, gunshots were fired.

Horatio takes out his gun and begins to fire back as fellow police officers duck for cover, sensing a problem Horatio turns around to check on his son. Kyle looks up at his father clutching his stomach, Horatio runs to his son as Kyle drops to the floor, he has been shot.

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CHAPTER TWO: A Hit and It's Misses

As shot’s were heard outside, the others and Mack raced to the door to come to Horatio’s aid. As they reached outside,they were greeted by the shocking image of Horatio kneeling before Kyle. Blood was everywhere, Horatio was covered in blood as he held on to Kyle, Kyle was breathing, but in a pained and slow manner; the image of Horatio clinging on to his son, was enough to make any person's heart break. As the CSI'S approached Horatio, Mack was the first to speak.

“Horatio, the medics, have they been called? Are they on the way?

“Yes or course their on the way, don’t you think someone or myself would have called them?" Snapped Horatio

“Horatio calm down, everything is going to be alright.”

“Mack, how do you suppose I calm down? What do you suppose I do to calm down, my son's dying and the EMTS are taking their sweet time coming, so what do you want me to do? Be patient and wait patiently as my son dies?"Horatio seethed

Mack did not have a chance to respond, the blaring sound of the ambulance was in the distance. As the driver and his partner jumped from the truck, Horatio yelled for them to hurry up, barely concealing his anger:

“What took you so long?” Horatio demanded

“Sorry Lt. we tried to get here as fast as we could, traffic was holding us up.” Replied the EMT

Grabbing their gear, they approached Kyle and Horatio; Eric and Mack had to pull Horatio away from Kyle. Noticing that Kyle was shot in the chest instead of the stomach the EMT'S worked faster, gearing him up to be placed on the stretcher. Kyle at this point had went into complete shock and passed out. Horatio, refused treatment from the other ambulance and simply stating, "My only concern is my son." As Kyle's ambulance was about to leave, Calleigh offered to ride with him, saying to Horatio: "You are to distraught to go." So the ambulance left, leaving Horatio with Kyle's bloody book-bag.

ACROSS TOWN

Ron Saris waited across town for news about the hit he had taken out on Horatio Caine. Ron, had taken out the hit for his wife Julia Winston, in order for her to gain full custody of her and Horatio's son, Kyle. Ron loved Julia, and would do anything for her, or shall I say anything for her money. Julia was a billionaire and his marriage to her allowed him to do things being broke would never let you do, like order a hit. Horatio Caine, to Ron, was a pest who deserved everything he got coming to him. Ron, has disliked Horatio ever since he first met him. In their first conversation Horatio threatened Ron by saying" "If anything ever happens to my son in your care Ron, I will kill you, do you understand me?" Never mind about Julia's safety, the only thing Horatio cared about was his precious Kyle, never-mind the women that brought Kyle into this world. Horatio's lack of concern for his wife's feelings and emotions, made Ron want him dead even more then Ron's desire to be with Julia, and that was saying alot. Ron,was thinking so much that he almost missed the hit-mans phone call:

“Hello”

“Yeah it’s done, the blond has been shot.”

“Thanks you can pick up the money at the respected spot,” then at that moment the hit mans words came back into play the blond has been shot. Ron immediately remembered that Kyle was supposed to have lunch with Horatio today, Ron became nervous, “Wait what do you mean the blond has been shot?”

“Didn’t you say blond hair?” replied the shooter

“ You stupid moron, I said red hair, Horatio the father had red hair, you shot the man’s son.”

“No man you shot the mans son, and if I go down you and your wife are going down with me.” And with that the shooter hung up the phone, leaving Ron lost for words. Horatio's words were not echoing in his mind.

Hope you guys enjoyed this chapter :)

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The one little note I want to make is that Mac's name doesn't have a k in it. Good start though :)
 
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I like it! This would have been so much more a shocking season finale than what we got on the show. Not that I want Kyle hurt, but it would have been more dramatic and less whatever it was on the show. :lol: Good job! :thumbsup:
 
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I just want to take the time and thank everyone who has been commenting on this Fan Fic

Chapter Three:pressure

After the ambulance left and everyone went back to their respected areas, Horatio and Mac stayed in the front of the station. Horatio sat thinking about todays events, and Mac stood wondering how he was going to comfort Horatio:

“Horatio you want to tell me what happen?” Asked Mac
“Mac, I just want to go to the hospital and see how my son is doing, that’s all I am concerned about right now.”

“Horatio, I know this is not the time to start talking about the incident, but I want to piece together what happen so we can find out who did this."

"Okay, this is what happened:

"Me and Kyle were walking to the car, He was walking behind me playing with his game boy. I told him to stop walking and playing with the game and pay attention, but you know sixteen year olds, they don’t listen to their parents. We got halfway to the car, when gunshots began to ring out, I told Kyle to get down, I ran from him, shooting my gun in the direction of where the shots were being fired, in the mist of everything, I happened to turn around as Kyle was dropping to the floor. I dropped my gun, and ran towards my son," Horatio stops and looks up at Mack," Mack, I should have stayed near him, I should have been more careful, if I was near him, I could have prevented this from happening." And with that Horatio grew silent."

“Horatio, this isn’t you fault.” Said Mac trying to comfort Him

“Well Mack, tell that to my heart, tell that to my son.” Horatio stammered

“I’m sure Kyle knows”

Horatio looked at Mac for a minute, wanting to believe him, wanting to believe everything is going to be okay.

“Well, Mac I just want to see my son,” Said Horatio

“I’ll drive.”

ACROSS TOWN AT JULIA WINSTON’S MANSION

“So Hun is the task done”

Ron Saris was just walking through the door when his wife greeted him. Julia was a beauty, young looking for her age, smart, and conniving, just the type of women he liked. Ron, could not bring himself to tell his new wife that her son might be laying in a hospital bed dying, but he had too:

“Honey, I need you to sit down, I have some bad news.”

“What do you mean bad news, what’s wrong Ron.”

“Julia, the shooter shot the wrong target.”

At this moment, Julia began to worry, Kyle's lunch date with his father, creeping into her mind

“Ron what are you trying to say?” Said Julia beginning to cry

“Julie, the shooter shot Kyle by accident, right now he is laying in a hospital bed.”

Julia sat there for a moment staring into space, Ron did not know whether to comfort her or sit in silence with her. They sat there for a few moments in silence. Letting their thoughts get the best of them, then Julia sprang to her feet:

“Ron you bastard, how could you let this happen? No, no I have to go see my son, I have to go see if he is alright.” Screamed Julia, racing to go grab her purse and car keys.

“Julia we have to wait until Horatio calls us so it doesn’t seem like we know something.”

“So your telling me I can’t go see Kyle right now?” Julia at this moment was distraught

“No,” Ron said quietly, "you have to wait until he calls.”

“What if he never calls ,and my son dies Ron? What if my son dies? Julia can no longer speak, her emotions got the best of her and she fell to the floor, sobbing.

Ron tried to comfort Julia, but she moved away from him

“Baby, don’t worry, Horatio will call." Spoke Ron, trying to convince himself more then he was trying to convince his wife.

Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoyed the chapter :)
 
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Chapter Four: Life and Death

Arriving at the hospital, Horatio and Mac rushed to the receptionist to find out where Kyle was, Horatio was the first to speak:

“Hello, Ma’am I am looking for a Kyle Harmon.” Horatio literally demanded

“Are you family?” Asked an annoyed nurse.

“I’m his father."

“Kyle Harmon?” The receptionist began looking in the computer for Kyle’s room or floor. “Kyle Harmon is still in surgery, he's on the 10th floor.

“Thank you” Horatio managed to get out, before walking hurriedly towards the elevator.

Arriving on the 10th floor, Horatio and Mac were met by Calleigh, who had a worried look on her face:

“Horatio, Kyle is in surgery right now, the doctors and surgeons are doing all they can, but…”

“What do you mean but”

“Well, the doctors are saying the injury was serious.”

“How serious?”

“I don’t know they would not go into depth being that I am not Kyle’s parent, but I know they will update us with more information.”

Horatio, upon hearing calleighs news, sat down, burying his head into his hands. Mack and Calliegh sat with Horatio is slience, waiting for news, until callieghs phone rang:

“Hello” Spoke the southern beauty

“Calleigh, this is Eric, there has been another shooting. Ryan, Tripp, and myself are heading to the scene at this very moment. I’m not too sure this is information Horatio would want to hear right now, but let him know."

“Oh my goodness, where has the shooting taken place?”

Upon hearing calleighs words Mac and Horatio tuned in to the conversation

“Near the docks.”

“Oh okay, after we're done here I’ll head to the docks to help process the scene.”

“Okay, hey how is Kyle?”

“Things aren’t looking to good.”

“I understand, I’ll keep Kyle in my prayers”

“Okay, talk to you later Eric.”

“Bye.”

“Bye.”

Calleigh hung up her phone, turning around; calleigh noticed that both Mac and Horatio were staring at her with knowing looks. She did not need to utter any words.

ACCOSS TOWN

Arriving at the crime scene, Eric noticed Alexx Woods, the medical examiner, was already there. Walking up to Alexx, Eric twisted his face as he looked at the gruesome scene before him:

“Hey, Alexx any Id on the victim?”

“Yeah, her name is Alicia Moore, 25 from North Carolina.”

“North Carolina?"

“I had the same reaction. She must be visiting or on vacation.”

“Did you recover anything usual?”

“Yes, if you call a note I found attached to her shirt, weird.” Alexx responded, stroking Alicia’s head.

Alexx reached into her M.E bag and pulled out the note, handing it to Eric. Eric reached out and took the note from Alexx, reading it intently. After finishing the note, Eric looked up, almost as if he’s seen a ghost.

“Alexx, Horatio has to see this.”

“I know, I had the same reaction.”

BACK AT THE HOSPTIAL

Mac left, heading to the crime scene, it was just Calleigh and Horatio. Calleigh walks over to Horatio, who was sitting staring into space:

“Horatio I know you don’t want to hear this right now, but you have to call Julia.”

Horatio looks up at Calleigh with a knowing look,"I know I have to call her Cal, but I was just hoping I can have some alone time with my son, before I called her."

"I understand Horatio," Calleigh said, kneeling down to sit next to him, "Horatio, I just wanted to say, we are going to find whoever did this." Calleigh took Horatio's hand and continued, "And I know this is a trying time for you, but we will get through this together."

Horatio, looked down at Calleigh's hand then at her face, "Cal, I know I will get through this because I have you and the team."

"Yeah, me and the team."

These moments were the only moments Horatio and Calleigh could really express the obvious attraction they have for each other.

Thanks for reading this chapter and I hope you enjoyed :)
 
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GregNickRyanFan said:
I like it! This would have been so much more a shocking season finale than what we got on the show. Not that I want Kyle hurt, but it would have been more dramatic and less whatever it was on the show. :lol: Good job! :thumbsup:
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Yeah I agree with you, I mean I knew Horatio was going to get shot before they even like showed the espiode, I think if they would of had Kyle get shot, I would have been on the edge of my seat, the final was good but it wasn't great. But it was way better then season five's final, just saying:)
 
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