A Closer look on the Inside

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    Title: A closer look on the inside
    Author: Katelynn
    Characters: Horatio Caine, Ryan Wolfe, Eric Delko, Calleigh Duquesne, and Alexx Woods
    Summary/Plot: An attack takes place at MDPD building to Ryan Wolfe, while the team attempts to figure out what happened and who would do this.

    Camera above Horatio’s bed. Horatio tossing and turning

    Horatio’s cell phone begins to ring, close up of his face turning towards the cell.

    Horatio: Hello?
    Eric: H...
    Horatio: What is Eric is everything alright?
    Eric: I think you should come down here, it’s Ryan. We’re at the ER room.
    Horatio: I’m on my way.

    Location: Hospital
    Enters Calleigh

    Calleigh: I just heard, is everything alright? Do we know what happened?
    Eric: I’ve been waiting for the doctor. Unfortunately I don’t know what happened yet, I won’t know until we can see him.

    Enters Horatio

    Horatio: Delko, what’s up, do you know anything yet?
    Eric: H, I wish I did. We won’t know anything until we speak with the doctor and Ryan.
    Horatio: Let’s find the doctor.
    Enters Nurse
    Nurse: Are you with the MDPD?
    Horatio: Yes Ma’am. I am Horatio Caine, this is Eric Delko and Calleigh Duquesne.
    Calleigh: How is he?
    Nurse: He’s alright. He just had some test done he has a few fractured ribs and a broken collar bone. He has a mild concussion and it appears right now that there is no major memory loss.
    Eric: No major memory loss?
    Horatio: I think she means he doesn’t recall everything about the accident.
    Nurse: He is on Level 2 room 1425; you can go see him now. He’s conscious.

    Calleigh, Horatio, Eric walks towards Elevator. Door closes, and then opens on Ryan’s floor.

    Calleigh: Hey Ryan, how are you?
    Ryan: I’ve definitely seen better days
    Eric Smiles
    Eric: Could you tell us what happened?
    Horatio: Take your time.
    Ryan: All I can remember is walking towards my vehicle last night. I heard someone whistling and I took a quick glance around the parking lot and I didn’t see anyone.
    Calleigh: This happened at work last night?
    Ryan: Yes, but it was almost one in the morning.
    Eric: What were you doing there so late?
    Ryan takes a deep breath and looks at Horatio
    Ryan: H... I’m sorry.
    Horatio: Wolfe, don’t worry about it. Whatever it is I’m sure it will be fine.
    Ryan: I don’t want to lose my job again.
    Horatio: Were you gambling?
    Ryan: No, nothing like that. That case I was working on...
    Calleigh: The one I was helping you with, the shootout at the Athletic club?
    Ryan: Yes, that one. I was going to tag the gun to put it with the rest of the evidence but I ran into some trouble trying to locate it.
    Eric: Well that explains why you were there so late.
    Horatio: Did you find it?
    Ryan: No. I remember putting it on the table so Calleigh could exam it. I went to get coffee and it was gone. I... I don’t know what happened H.
    Eric: now Wolfe, how did this happen to you?
    Ryan: Well as I was saying I heard someone whistling so I took a look around the garage. I didn’t see anything. The last thing I remember is putting the key into my car to unlock it and next thing you know I’m in the hospital.
    Calleigh: So much for no major memory loss. Do you know who brought you here?
    Ryan: The nurse just said that I was dropped off in front of the ER.
    Horatio: You didn’t see who did this to you?
    Ryan: I wish I had, but I am able to go back to work.
    Horatio: Sit tight Ryan. Come back tomorrow. Calleigh, lets check the parking lots cameras to see if there is anything usable. Eric, go to the parking lot to see if there is anything usable.

    Location: MDPD building hallway

    Alexx walking into the building
    Calleigh standing on the inside of the door

    Alexx: Hello darlin’, no one ever beats me in.
    Calleigh: Yes I know. We had an incident here last night with Ryan.
    Alexx: Is he alright?
    Calleigh: Nothing to major, slight memory loss and a few broken bones but nothing too serious. Whoever did this to him just dropped him off in front of the ER.
    Alexx: My poor baby. That’s odd, someone just attacked him then just left him in front of the ER, something isn’t right.
    Calleigh: I know, it doesn’t add up. I’m about to go check the security cameras and Delko is out there now looking for something usable.
    Alexx: Let me know if you need something
    Calleigh: Will do, thanks Alexx.

    Location: Employee Parking lot

    Horatio: [/b] Delko, find anything?
    Eric: [/b] Not yet H. I don’t see any blood or any shoe prints.
    Horatio: [/b] Wait a minute. There is a dent on Ryan’s car. The paint is missing, do you see that?
    Eric: Yes, that would mean who ever did this to Ryan could possibly have that paint chip somewhere on him.
    Horatio: Let’s get too that, but first let’s open the trunk
    Eric: The trunk?
    Horatio: Yes. I have a feeling something will be in there Delko. Open the trunk.
    Eric opens the trunk
    Horatio: Well would you look at that Delko, It’s unlocked.
    Eric: and there’s the gun Wolfe was trying to find, but why would it be in here?
    Horatio: Someone is playing us.
    Horatio’s cell phone rings.
    (On the phone) Calleigh: H, I think you need to see this.

    Location: Lab
    Horatio: What is it Calleigh, did you get anything?
    Calleigh: Yes and no. We can see Ryan being attacked but not the attacker. He did a good job at staying out of the cameras view.
    Horatio: I can see that.
    Calleigh: The gun that ryan was trying to find...
    Horatio: is in the trunk
    Calleigh: Yes, but the best part of it is the way the camera angle is you can see the attacker opening the trunk and even though we can’t see his face,
    Horatio: He isn’t wearing gloves.
    Calleigh: Exactly.
    Horatio picks up cell phone dials Eric’s number
    Horatio: Eric, the attacker wasn’t wearing gloves. Print the gun.
    (on the phone) Eric: Alright H, I’ll do that now.
    Horatio: good work Calleigh.
    Calleigh: Thank you Horatio.

    Enters Ryan

    Ryan: H...
    Horatio: What are you doing here Wolfe; I thought I told you to come in tomorrow?
    Ryan: Sitting in that hospital will do nothing to help you. We need to find out who did this, someone else could get hurt H, and I can’t have that in my head.
    Calleigh: It’s probably best Horatio; Frank is on vacation for another 3 days. We can’t wait that long.
    Horatio: Alright Wolfe, here’s what I want you to do help Delko process the gun...
    Ryan: The gun?
    Calleigh: The gun was in the trunk of your car.
    Ryan: That’s weird. What would it be doing there?
    Horatio: The attacker obviously wanted us to find it, and they weren’t wearing gloves.
    Ryan: Well that’s just stupid, but a plus for us.
    Horatio: You’re telling me.
    Horatio leaves.
    Calleigh: I’m glad you’re okay Ryan. Keep me posted.
    Ryan: Thanks Calleigh.

    Location: Print lab

    Ryan: Hey there partner
    Eric: Ryan, what are you doing here?
    Ryan: You know me, just can’t stay away.
    Eric: Here, glove up and help me.
    Ryan: Sure thing.
    Eric: Do you think it’s someone you know that could’ve done this?
    Ryan: It’s possible, but it’s more possible it’s someone from the case or someone who doesn’t want us on to them.
    Eric: They weren’t wearing gloves; it’s almost as if they wanted us to catch them.
    Ryan: That might be so, less work for us.
    Eric: Always the easy way Wolfe.
    Ryan: What are you saying; I can’t do my job fully?
    Eric: Whoa, take it easy Ryan. I was only...
    Horatio enters quietly listening to them continually bickering and fighting.
    Ryan and Eric lift prints off the gun.
    Horatio: Boys, this isn’t the time or the place. What do you have for me?
    Ryan: We found some partials and one useable print.
    Enters Alexx.
    Alexx: Hey there hunny, how are you feeling?
    Ryan: Never better, Alexx.
    Alexx: Did you catch who is did this?
    Eric: We are running the prints now.
    The computer finally stops processing the prints.
    Horatio: That can’t be right.
    Ryan: What does that mean? I don’t believe that. He wouldn’t do this.
    Horatio: No he wouldn’t.
    Alexx: What, what is it?
    Eric starts dialing a number on his cell phone
    (On the phone) Eric: Hey, listen. I know this is a little inconvenient, but we need you to come here. We have something to ask you.

    Location: Interrogating room

    Calleigh: Where were you early morning, Frank?
    Frank: Excuse me? You called me back to work while I was on vacation and now I’m a suspect?
    Horatio: Listen Frank. We found your prints on a gun that was used in a shoot out but, we know you weren’t involved with that.
    Frank: What am I doing here then Horatio?
    Ryan: Your prints were on the gun that I was trying to locate, I was attacked with the gun and we have surveillance videos showing you putting the gun in the trunk of my car.
    Frank: That’s a load of crap, now why would I do that?
    Calleigh: We were hoping you could tell us Frank.
    Horatio: Did you, or did you not attack Ryan?
    Frank: Alright, Alright. I was there, but I didn’t attack Ryan. When I got there Ryan was already on the ground. I found the gun and put it in the trunk. I didn’t want anyone to know I was back early from vacation.
    Ryan: What were you doing there then Frank?
    Frank: Listen Wolfe, I’ll get to that in a minute. Let me finish explaining...
    Calleigh: Go on Frank...
    Frank: I didn’t think I had to put gloves on since I didn’t do anything, and I didn’t know that the gun was a part of evidence to a shoot out until now.
    Horatio: Did you take Ryan to the hospital?
    Frank: Yes, I did.
    Ryan: Why did you just leave me out in front of the ER?
    Calleigh: Did you see who did this?
    Frank: Whoa hold on now. The only reason I left you there was someone phoned my cell threatening me. They had some kind of voice disguiser machine. No, I didn’t see who did this. If I did I would have went after him myself.
    Ryan: Thank you
    Frank: For what?
    Ryan: Taking me to the hospital, without you who knows what could’ve happened.
    Calleigh: Sorry for all of this, you know it’s just protocol.
    Horatio: Alright, so here’s what we do now. Go back to the shoot out case, question every suspect that new Ryan was working this case. We get that, we may find our attacker.

    Location: interrogation room 2

    Ryan: So, Michelle...
    Michelle: Whoa what happened to you, it looks like you got hit by a truck?
    Calleigh: I’m sure he appreciates that. Now I’m going to get straight to the point. Your boyfriend David was involved with the shoot out last week at the Athletic club, correct?
    Michelle: Yes, but you already put him away for that... What else could he have done?
    Ryan: Well, for starters... attack me.
    Michelle: Wait, you think I did that? No way.
    Calleigh: Be honest with us. You knew Ryan Wolfe was working this case and we just locked away your long time boyfriend. That had to upset you.
    Michelle: Well yeah, of course it upset me I loved him.
    Ryan: So you have to try to kill someone who is trying to do the city a favour?
    Calleigh: Where were you around 12-1:30 this morning?
    Ryan: the truth would be nice
    Michelle: Don’t accuse me of lying, I haven’t even said anything yet.
    Calleigh: I think he was referring when you lied about the where about of David. Just answer the question.
    Michelle: I was at home around that time. I couldn’t sleep so I was watching a little bit of television.
    Ryan: Can anyone clarify that for us?
    Michelle: Well no, you took the only man away from me. No one else lives in that house but me.
    Horatio knocks on the glass door of the interrogation room.
    Ryan: Excuse me.
    Calleigh: Sure.
    Ryan walks out towards Horatio
    Horatio: Anything yet?
    Ryan: She says she was at home watching television at that time. There’s no one to clarify the truth to that, but I think she knows something.
    Calleigh waves for the both of them to come into the room
    Horatio: What is it Calleigh?
    Calleigh: Well Michelle here has a friend who has been missing since Davids conviction. They were really close and dated in the past. According to Michelle they were inseparable. Now what do you make of that?
    Ryan: Does his friend have a name Michelle?
    Michelle: Yes, HER name was Anita.
    Horatio: Last name please Michelle.
    Michelle: Scarlett, Anita Scarlett.
    Calleigh: I’ll start making some phone calls.
    Ryan: Thanks Michelle, you can go now but stay in Miami.

    Location: Interrogation room 1

    Eric: Anita, I’m Eric Delko
    Anita: Hello Eric. I’d introduce myself, but it seems to me as you already know my name.
    Ryan: Ha-Ha.
    Anita: And who might you be?
    Ryan: Ryan Wolfe, I’d thought you’d recognize me.
    Eric: Ryan...
    Ryan: I know Eric, Sorry.
    Anita: But he’s right sugar.
    Eric: What do you mean, you know him?
    Anita: Not personally no, but I know of him.
    Ryan: Well that’s just great. (with a smile on his face)
    Eric: So I understand you once were involved with...
    Anita: David.
    Ryan: Oh, how quickly they catch on.
    Eric: Where were you between the time of midnight to 1:30 in the morning?
    Anita: Where do you think I was sugar?
    Eric: Cut that out please, we’re just trying to get to the bottom of this.
    Anita: My, my... looks like you finally got your share there Ryan.
    Ryan: What does that mean Anita, were you involved?
    Eric: Listen Anita, now is your chance to say what you know or else we can’t help you.
    Ryan: Let me see your shoes.
    Eric: Her shoes, why?
    Ryan: Horatio believes that the paint chip from my car will be somewhere on the body. Where else would be a better place to start?
    Eric: No you’re right, let us see your shoes please.
    Anita: If I must, could you please remove them for me?
    Ryan: You have two hands; it looks like you’re capable of doing that yourself Anita.
    Anita hands Ryan her shoes.
    Ryan: What is that?
    Enters Horatio
    Horatio: that to me looks like a piece of car Ryan. Thank you gentlemen, I would like to have a word with Anita.
    Anita: Bye, bye boys, keep in touch.
    Ryan: Will do Miss. Scarlett in a 6x6 cell.
    Horatio: Ryan
    Ryan: alright H... I’m going.

    Eric and Ryan leave the interrogation room

    Anita: The famous Horatio Caine.
    Horatio: At your service.
    Anita: Seriously? I should’ve spoken to you earlier.
    Horatio: That isn’t very becoming. Now, I want to know your involvement in all of this.
    Anita: Why, couldn’t Michelle tell you all of this?
    Horatio: It’s not up to her Miss. Scarlett.
    Anita: Fine. David paid me 10, 000 dollars to kill a guy that put him behind bars.
    Horatio: Ryan Wolfe...
    Anita: Exactly sugar. I was watching Ryan after everyone left. He had no idea that I was in the same room as him. I can be quiet, you see...
    Horatio: That’s enough, just get to the point Ma’am.
    Anita: When Ryan left the room, I took the gun that linked David to the shoot out. I watched him struggle to find it. I had to wait for that perfect moment. I needed the money, so I knew what I had to do. I followed him to his car, hit him on the head with the gun and watched him fall the ground. I kicked him just below the neck with my heels and then took them off and stood on the roof of his car and jumped on him.
    Horatio: Well Miss. Scarlett, I hope the money was worth it.
    Anita: Every penny.
    Horatio: Take her away officers.

    Location: Outside MDPD building

    Calleigh: Wolfe, we got her.
    Ryan: Thank God. So it was Anita?
    Calleigh: Yes. After Horatio got her confession we re-examined the car and confirmed her story.
    Enters Horatio
    Horatio: Well Ryan, (puts on sunglasses) Bright and early?
    Ryan: Bright and Early H.

    The orange-lit sky silhouettes Calleigh and Ryan as they walk back into the building to prepare for another day.
     
  2. MacsGirlMel

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    nice story. LOL at the MIss Scarlett nickname
     
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    Thank you.
    hahaha, i was trying to think of something that we haven't seen on the actual show yet... haha.. i'm not very good with coming up with names!
     
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    very nice story I really like it. I'm glad you took it easy on RYan and didn't hurt him too bad. I liked the attitude Ryan had through out it. Very nicely done!
     
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    I really liked this story. Great job and keep writing! :)
     
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    Thank you everyone; it honestly means a lot!

    There is another version of this but it is a little more explicit not in a sense where it's over done or anything, but just past the PG13 mark so i had to edit/take things out.

    but im glad you like it regardless!!

    Thanks so much :)
     

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