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    An All Out Brawl

    Here is a new story, i hope everyone like it, this only the first part. An All Out Brawl! Written By: Matthew Jason and his friend's, Sam, Jeff and Mike, were all hanging out over at Hampton Park. Sam said,"guys I brought my football, lets play one for all!" Mike then looked over at Jason...
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    Quick reason for what went wrong on Saying GoodBye

    After spending several hours and trying to fix up Saying Goodbye I realized that, 1. the story line was not all that great to start out with. 2. Spelling mistakes were made that should have never been made in the first place. The best I can do right now is go back and try and rewrite the...
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    Help

    if any one one can help me with saying goodbye and how to make it better please let me know thanks. the story is called Saying Goodbye
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    Saying GoodBye

    SAYING GOODBYE! Written By: Matthew Tiffany and her best friend , Katie were walking home from school. Katie said , hey Tiffany lets take a short cut through the woods. Tiffany replied , I don’t about this Katie it doesn’t look like there is a trail anywhere? Katie then showed Tiffany where the...
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    The Full Virsion of Pool Of Body Parts

    POOL OF BODY PARTS! WRITTEN BY: MATTHEW It was a hot and stormy night , the winds where blowing north west. Max and his younger brother where sleeping down stairs under the new ceiling fan that there father had just put in that afternoon. Max woke up in a shock , he looked out the window...
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    Thanks for all the tips

    Thanks for the tips , actually right now the story is at my friends house being looked at by a MacMaster Professor. So as soon as i get the story back I will post the hole story, with in the next few days or so.
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    Part 2 Pool Of Body Parts

    In part 1 of poll of body parts Max and Steven were about to take a swim in there pool. When the two brothers went out side to have a swim Max find the pool littered with several different body parts. Capton Brass went back to Nick and Sara and said , hey guy's there has been another lead in...
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    A Pool Of Body PARTs

    On hot summer's night Max and his brother Steven were changing in to the bathing suits to go have a night swim in the family pool. Max said to his Brother Steven hey diving is no big deal it's really easy to do when you get the hang of it. Steven then replied " yeah! thats easy for you to say ...
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