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Thanks Linda for all the great tips. I have Just started writing Murder One.

POOL OF BODY PARTS! WRITTEN BY: MATTHEW It was a hot and stormy night , the winds where blowing north west. Max and his younger brother where sleeping down stairs under the new ceiling fan that there father had just put in that afternoon. Max woke up in a shock , he looked out the window...

Thanks for the tips , actually right now the story is at my friends house being looked at by a MacMaster Professor. So as soon as i get the story back I will post the hole story, with in the next few days or so.

way to go hope to read more soon keep the stories comming

In part 1 of poll of body parts Max and Steven were about to take a swim in there pool. When the two brothers went out side to have a swim Max find the pool littered with several different body parts. Capton Brass went back to Nick and Sara and said , hey guy's there has been another lead in...

It does get better in part two. Here is a little sneak preview for you , in part Nick finds out that the print is linked to someone in the lab.

Hey way to go that was really good , wish mine was that good , but then again im not use to writing Csi stories. Hey Linda guess i found my username some dont ask me how but some it didnt get deleated. see you tom Matthew Volanteer

On hot summer's night Max and his brother Steven were changing in to the bathing suits to go have a night swim in the family pool. Max said to his Brother Steven hey diving is no big deal it's really easy to do when you get the hang of it. Steven then replied " yeah! thats easy for you to say ...