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    Chronicles of Las Vegas (FanFic Series)

    I'm loving the new DNA tech! Superbly opposite of Wendy which works well against Hodges and the moment with the finger had me crying with laughter!:guffaw: Nice to see a reference to a certain well-loved bugman too! Hopefully he'll make a cameo or two later in the series.;) Great work as ever...
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    Aren't we both British? Or have I misunderstood your tea quip on your profile perhaps? In fairness to the spellings I may have thought of some as errors because my spellchecker refuses to stay set to the UK dictionary; also I am myself a bit of an obsessive when it comes to good grammar and...
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    Chronicles of Las Vegas (FanFic Series)

    Good stuff as always Crumbs, but this one seems a little messy. Quite a few spelling and grammatical errors and I couldn't help but notice that the car repeatedly changes from a Focus to a Fiesta and back again (maybe that's why it blew up? :D) Also, and this is just my opinion so don't take it...
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    Great as ever crumbs! Can't wait to see what happens with Greg. With regards to my comment about Langston, I meant I wasn't sure if it was something I missed on an episode as I didn't pay much attention to the last episodes of season 11; I didn't realise it was something you had come up...
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    Chronicles of Las Vegas (FanFic Series)

    Brilliant as ever crumbs! Though I'm confused about Langston's 'condition', but this may be something I've missed previously on the show (correct me if I'm wrong). One suggestion and it's just niggly little thing, but I feel you use 'urr's and 'urrm's maybe a little too often, although this may...
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    Chronicles of Las Vegas (FanFic Series)

    Aww how could you hurt Greggo like that? Still keeping me gripped as always, heh heh.:thumbsup:
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    Fantastic as ever Crumbs. Oh and I got the Spongebob reference!;) I'm looking forward to reading more of this story!:thumbsup:
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    Chronicles of Las Vegas (FanFic Series)

    Great ending - kept me guessing the whole time! I noticed though that we never found out what the letter was that Greg got? Future plot maybe? Definately gonna keep reading these stories and I agree with the first post that there isn't enough like this on the forum, most of them being...
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    Chronicles of Las Vegas (FanFic Series)

    Great! Can't wait for the next one!:thumbsup:
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    Chronicles of Las Vegas (FanFic Series)

    fantastic second part and great to have a bit of Hodges! Everyone loves our favorite lab-rat. And with regards to Morgan Brody - it's understandable considering she's only been in one episode so far. Just hope she doesn't get rammed down our throats like Ray was.
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    Chronicles of Las Vegas (FanFic Series)

    Wow! Read through the first part and I can't wait for the next one! One thing though and ignore it if you want to, but because Ray isn't coming back next season why not use the new female CSI, Morgan Brody (Ecklie's daughter from 'Cello and Goodbye') instead? It'll allow you to keep continuity...
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