The Bachelor (CSI Gameshow fanfiction)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by CSINEWYORK000, Mar 23, 2008.

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Choose your Bachelor:

Poll closed Mar 31, 2008.
  1. Nick Stokes

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  2. Warrick Brown

    0 vote(s)
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  3. Greg Sanders

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  4. Ryan Wolfe

    12.5%
  5. Eric Delko

    12.5%
  6. Tim Speedle

    12.5%
  7. Jake Berkeley

    12.5%
  8. Don Flack

    25.0%
  9. Danny Messer

    25.0%
  10. Sheldon Hawkes

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  11. Adam Ross

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  1. CSINEWYORK000

    CSINEWYORK000 Lab Technician

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    Hello everyone!



    We've all seen popular shows such as Elimidate,The bachelor,
    Bachelorette.Now we can have the same opprotunity with our favorite CSI guys.


    The idea is similar to original show; A bachelor is courted by 25 women.
    The show follows the bachelor as he goes on a series of dates with the
    women,some of them group dates, some one-on-one dates. On each episode women are eliminated,generally during the rose ceremony at the end of the episode, but sometimes on the dates (during what are called "elimination dates"). The process culminates towards the end of the season with a few of the women going on overnight dates and meetings between the bachelor,
    the women, and their respective families. The program is a roller coaster ride of emotions for both the Bachelor and the women. At the end of the show,
    the bachelor is to pick one woman with whom he would like to continue a
    relationship. Sometimes he proposes marriage and sometimes other levels of commitment.

    But to make things interesting you guys can vote for your Top 5 bachelors!


    From CSI:

    Nick Stokes

    Warrick Brown

    Greg Sanders



    b]From Miami:[/b]

    Ryan Wolfe

    Eric Delko

    Tim Speedle

    Jake Berkeley


    From New York:

    Sheldon Hawkes

    Don Flack

    Danny Messer

    Adam Ross



    At the end the bachelor with most votes will be entered into the
    competition.The bachlorettes will be chosen from differents states in U.S.



    The deadline is March 29th...

    So hurry and cast your vote!










    Side Note: Although, this resebles the original show -it is FICTIONAL.
    Activities in this version will be different, including dates, etc...
     
  2. sissi59100

    sissi59100 CSI Level Three

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    :lol: Can't wait to see how it will work :lol:
     
  3. CSINEWYORK000

    CSINEWYORK000 Lab Technician

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    Alright everyone


    Its great to see participation, but we need a little more enthusiasm:thumbsup::thumbsup:




    More details will be available after Top 5 bachelors are choosen.





    Keep those votes coming!:):thumbsup:
     
  4. CSINEWYORK000

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    Alright, seeing as our votes are not very strong, I will now count bachelors with the most votes, and those who came close (bare with me).

    Here are your finalists:

    1. Don Flack

    2. Danny Messer

    3.Eric Delko

    4.Tim Speedle

    5. Ryan Wolfe



    Alright, This program will take place in a beautiful mantion, surrounded by
    majestic nature. This is where the all events will take place.


    To Introduce minor characters; Producer(P), Producer Assistant(PA), Manager(M) as well as other employees withing the mansion butlers, maids etc..



    Our first meeting will take place on March 30th at 6:00 p.m sharp.
    In this meeting our Top finalists will choose their bachelorettes, as well as
    go over the rules.




    Thank You to those of you who voted!





    See you all there!
     
  5. Jenna_Caine

    Jenna_Caine Police Officer

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    Uhm... 6 pm in what time zone? Cuz some of us are in different time zones... Lol
     
  6. SpeedsDaughter

    SpeedsDaughter CSI Level One

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    This should be fun... :lol:
     
  7. CSINEWYORK000

    CSINEWYORK000 Lab Technician

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    Well, the great thing is about internet is that you can log in anytime
    Plus : This is just a gameshow - its not 4 real, so just roll with the punches, LOL:lol:


    The most important thing is that you enjoy the show.............
     
  8. Jenna_Caine

    Jenna_Caine Police Officer

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    I know, I know. I was just checking... :lol:

    Anyway, it's 6:00 now for me, so... I'm here!!! XD
     
  9. CSINEWYORK000

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    EXT. Mantion. Sunset.
    INT. Mantion. Inside a large room with warm furnishings.

    A group of guys are sitting in the middle on a large couch.
    A young hostes is near by.

    Host: Good Evening everybody! Welcome to our show.
    Guys applaude

    Alright, after long days of voting our Top 5 bachelors have been chosen.....Lets meet em'
    I 'll start from the left..........Don Flack

    Danny Messer

    Tim Speedle

    Ryan Wolfe

    and Eric Delko!


    Alright, all of our bachelors have a common proffession - they are CSIs,

    which means they have to deal with grusome crimescenes, as well as act as

    police officers and catching criminals.


    Alright can you guys explain in a little more detail what you do, what would a typical day be like..?

    Guys turn heads looking at each other.........they all laugh

    Don Flack : You guys wanna start.........

    Eric Delko : Basically what happens is when someone commits a crime they leave something behind,

    so we look for clues as to what happened.

    Danny Messer : Stuff like blood or finger prints....

    Eric Delko : Yeah, were lucky that criminals are not smart enough to clean up afterwards.

    Ryan Wolfe: Yeah, but even if they do they still leave something behind for us to find................
     
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  10. CSINEWYORK000

    CSINEWYORK000 Lab Technician

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    I apologize to everyone , I'm having technical difficulties............


    I'll have to continue tomorrow....................


    I apologize.....again.



    Tune in tommorow same time.



    Thank You.
     
  11. CSINEWYORK000

    CSINEWYORK000 Lab Technician

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    Continuing from yesterday.................


    Host: Alright guys let's go around, so you guys can tell us a little bit about yourselves...

    Guys are looking around at each other......

    Flack: Alright , I guess I'll go first...My name is Don Flack - I'm 30 years old. I'm from New York, Yonkers.Icame from a long line of police officers,and I really like the job. Its a dangerous job - without a question,but,I can't really see myself doing anything else.

    Host: What about hobbies outside of the job?

    Flack: (Laughing) Well,I like watch Letterman at night, or hockey,occassionaly.

    All Laugh

    Host: Ok. lets move on......

    Danny: Hi, My name is Danny Messer, I'm 35 years old, I'm from Staten Island, New York. I also come from a long line of police officers.Hobbiesoutside of my job..um...would be sports...(smiles) I guess.

    Tim Speedle: Hi, My name is Tim Speedle. I work for Miami Dade police, specifically -Trace and Impressions. My outside hobby would be motorcycles.

    Laughs

    Eric Delko: Hi, name is Eric Delko, I work for Miami Dade police. I work around fingerprints and drug identification, but do other things as well such as recreating the crime scene.On my free time I like to go out, socialize.

    Ryan : Hi, my name is Ryan Wolfe. I work for Miami DAde police. I usually deal with suspects, and work around crime scenes.And on my free time I like to hang out with my friends.


    Host: Alright, well, now that we know, a little about you, It's time to go over some rules.Each of you will choose 10 woman each from overall 50 (from all states).You will go on dates,and at the end of each week you will elimate one of them.To those woman whom you choose to go to the next level will each recieve a red rose. And you will have an opprotunity to discuss the things that happened with your team mates, If you wish. After each elimination we hold a meeting to adress anyquestions or conserns.

    Our bacholerettes will be arriving tommorow night,in a limousine, so guys you will need to wear your suits. And we will again tommorow.......Bye.
     
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  12. Jenna_Caine

    Jenna_Caine Police Officer

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    Cool... So, one question that I'm still not quite sure of...

    Who exactly are the bachelorettes? :lol: Just wondering...
     
  13. CSINEWYORK000

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    Basically there will 50 woman from all states (50), th guys will meet them for the first time tommorow, and then they will have to choose 10 (each).

    I hope that clarifies things:thumbsup:
     
  14. CSINEWYORK000

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    BEHIND SCENES


    INT.Lounge.Modernly decorated roo, plasma TV, video games, kitchen,couch, and a few plants.



    Don Flack : So, anyone excited about tonight ?

    Danny Messer: Flack, you player...(laughs)

    Don Flack : Yeah, whatever, I'm not the one with the player status.

    Besides this would be a nice vacation from our job.

    Eric Delko: You guys don't get out much in New York, huh?

    Danny Messer: Were usually too busy trying to catch the criminals,
    Although, everyonce in a while we get to meet people - but their are either the victim or they are
    involoved in a crime one way or another.

    What about you guys in Miami?

    Eric Delko: We got plenty of Hot girls, in a club,at the beach....

    Tim Speedle goes over to the minifridge.......

    Tim Speedle : We got cold beer, anybody want one ?

    Don Flack : Yeah, I'll have one

    Tim Speedle : Corona or Heineken ?

    Don Flack : Heineken.

    Tim took one can for himself and throws the other can to Flack.

    Eric Delko: What about you Rayn, what do you think......

    Ryan Wolfe: Alright, I guess, I just don't favor the idea of getting
    dressed up.

    Eric Delko: Well, if you wanna end up with a nice girl - thats the only
    way to go.

    Don Flack : What time is it?

    Tim Speedle : 6:30 p.m.

    Don Flack : Well better start getting ready...


    ===============================================

    One and a half hours pass... it is now 8:00 p.m.

    EXT. Night.The mantion is lit by many lights.It's beautiful night.

    Ouside of the mantion all 5 guys are waiting for the bacholerettes to
    arrive.


    Host: Good evening, gentleman.
    Ok, so as you tonight will the night when you will choose your 10 bachelorettes.

    The first limousine will be arriving shortly - each of the women will exit one by one and will introduce herself, then she will move forward into the the ballroom.


    After you have met everyone, you will join them in the ballroom for the"elimination".


    Good luck guys.
     
  15. MacsGirlMel

    MacsGirlMel Mac's Personal Assistant

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    This should be interesting :) Hey wouldn't it be funny if one of the bachelorettes was one of the female CSIs? lol
     

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