ISU: Investigation Special Unit (FICTION)

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  1. CSIMIAMI

    CSIMIAMI Hit and Run

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    Hey Guys! :)

    Sorry for the lack of introduction.(I finished my first chapter last night- too tired to add the intro.)



    This fiction writting was inspired by several ideas including the CSI series. ISU (Special Investigation Unit) and CSI(Crime Scene Investigation) are very similar- except in different states they give the forensic department different name. Furthermore, this story is based on a real case, however the names and specific events have been modified for entartainment purposes, and for protection of the real case. Characters & names are fictional. The development of the story is fictional, and does not pertain to the real case, or anyones involvement in the case.

    I hope you enjoy reading the story, feel free to leave comments/conserns- Thank You :)


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    ISU: Investigation Special Unit (FICTION)


    Written by: Evangeline Rose



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    SUMMARY: A Quadruple murder takes place in the heart of Miami. With little evidence ISU investigation specialists
    try to solve the mystery murder.
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    "Quadruple Murder"



    EXT. MIA.Downtown. High-rise buildings reflect the setting sun.


    South beach.


    High-rise buildings. Waves breaking the white sand beaches.


    Star Island.


    Pill shaped island. Large expensive houses. Pools. Gated driveways.The area is very up scale.



    EXTR. Pale yellow house. Lush palm trees.


    Police cars surrounded the building. The house is being taped up


    by a police officer.



    ISU van pulls up. ISU specialists enter the crime scene.


    INT.Inside the house.

    Blood is everywhere. Victims lying on the floor. No sign of the murder weapon.


    A ISU team (of 5) investigate the house; Marc Garcia, Nathan Waters,Emily Parker, and Sarah.

    The team separates into different rooms to further investigate the crime scene.


    Marc: This is definatly a mass murder. I've never seen so much blood.


    Emily: And I thought this was a peaceful city...


    Sarah (with sarcasm): Good luck with that theory....


    Marc(in a smaller room): Hey guys! I found three more bodies.


    Sarah: How is that there were five people murderd and no one noticed......?


    Nathan(Walks in): Any luck....


    Emily: Well, so far we we have five victims, blood, and no sign of the murder weapon,and no id's.


    Sarah: And we have to bring the bodies to the coroner for more conclusive results.


    Marc: No sign of gun shot wounds on all victims.


    Emily: So maybe this was a stabbing.


    Nathan: One knife and five victims.....clearly who ever was responcible for this wasn't alone.


    Marc looking around the house. He notices a family photo.Looks at the photo and at the victims.


    Marc: Looks like our victims are related. (Takes the photograph in his hands and shows it to the team.)


    Emily: Seemed like a nice family...


    Sarah: I guess we can rule out DNA testing.


    Nathan: Maybe not....Usually when the killer stabs the the victim - they cut themselves in the proccess.

    (Flash back to the murder scene)

    (A dark figure with a knife)

    (stabbing, blood dripping)


    Marc: so the killers blood has to be somewhere around here.


    Emily: So the question is - where did the stabbing begin?


    Nathan takes a flash light looks around the floor for foot prints.

    He finds a boody trail, follows it, he then finds a shoe print in a diffent rom with the other three bodies.


    Natan: I got a partial shoe print.


    Sarah: Ok lets get all evidence,and get it back to lab.


    Marc: That maybe difficult- there is a lot to proccess.


    Nathan: OK, I'll take trace.


    Sarah: I'll take DNA.


    Marc: I'll try figure out what happened to our murder weapon.


    Emily: And - I'll try to find id on the other three victims.


    Nathan: great, Lets get to work.


    EXT. MIA.Day turns to Night.



    ISU Crime lab.

    In the ISU crime lab the team is processing the evidence.


    INT. Trace Lab.

    Natan proccessing the shoe print.


    Emily walks in.


    Emily: hey, any luck with the shoe print.


    Nathan:Yeah, the shoe print belong to a man.But theres something weird......


    Emily: what?


    Nathan:...shoe print belongs to our victim.

    Emily: How is that possible?


    Nathan: maybe this is a murder suicide...........



    TO BE CONTINUED..............
     
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    CSIMIAMI Hit and Run

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    Back at the Lab……….

    Emily:That’s impossible.

    Nathan:Why not……

    Emily: How is that possible?

    Nathan: Maybe he walked on the crime scene…saw what happened…..and decided to commit suicide.

    Emily: Ok I can understand why he was upset, but why suicide.

    Marc walks in……

    Marc: Hey, guys.

    Both: Hey!

    Marc: Well I got the results from the coroner……this was defiantly a stabbing.

    Emily: Do we know what kind knife was used.

    Marc: Yeah, It’s from the same house.

    Emily: What? You’re kidding?

    Marc: Evidence doesn’t lie. The first victim was stabbed 12 times, the second Vic has 16 and scratch marks…

    Nathan interrupts

    Nathan: Sign of struggle….the guy was a fighter.

    Marc: He may be, but he didn’t survive the attack. And neither did his family.

    Emily: So what, now we have a dead end. No way can we tie the killer to the murder.

    Nathan: Not that we know who that is………

    Sarah joins the team in the lab

    Sara: Not anymore…….Nathan was right. The Killer left a small gift on the way out. A blood drop, which we were able to process.

    Marc: so who’s the guy?

    Sarah: Michael Brynn

    Emily: ok, lets get em’.

    Sarah: All ready got patrol to pick him up.

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    "Interrigation"


    Sarah:Mr.Brynn, why did you kill Dan Shelby?

    Michael Brynn:Told you already- I didn't kill anybody.

    Sarah: That- is a lie. We found your blood inside his house along with his family.


    Michael Brynn:
    Ok. I visited the guy, but I didn't kill him.

    Sara: Our evidence tells us otherwise.

    Michael Brynn: The guy owed me. I mean first he wrecks my car..and then takes off. WTF??

    Sarah:Car Accident. Which took place in April.

    Michael: Yeah! He wrecked my car, insulted me and took off. Didn't even try to conpensate for the damage.

    Sarah: So you decided to kill him?

    Michael: The guy had to pay, and wasn't gonna let get away!!

    Sarah: You know what...in my line of work it's called MOTIVE.



    Sarah:: We also found out you tried to start a fire..

    Michael: What? I didnt start a fire....I was angry but not crazy.

    Sarah:You tried to start a fire to cover the murder, but it didn't work did it......
    [PAUSE]

    As soon as the police arrived you fled the scene....leaving you trail behind. You din't count on them to finding the killer, figured it would take them a while -which gives you enough time to escape....RIGHT?????

    [SILENCE]

    Michael: I was just carrying out justice - justice which he deserved!!!

    Sara: It's not up to you to carry out the justice- and because you did you will serve your own.

    Officer take him!



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    TBC...........................
     
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    sissi59100 CSI Level Three

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    I'm wondering why you want me to delete your first post?

    Thanks
     
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    CSIMIAMI Hit and Run

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    ITS A KEEPER. NVRM. DON"T DELETE THIS POST.
     
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    CSIMIAMI Hit and Run

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    INT. LAB.

    Sarah finishing paperwork...

    Marc walks in....


    Marc: Hey! Herd you got the guy.

    Sarah(with a smile): Were a team. We got em'.

    Marc smiled back.....



    Meanwhile.........


    In the Trace Lab Nathan & Sarah got a dispach.
    They made their way to the other lab where Marc and Sarah were.


    Nathan:Hey!Congradulations on the closing of the case.


    Sarah:Were a team. So right back at ya!


    Emily(with a serious look on her face):Yeah, um, not to rain on your parade, but we just a got dispach.


    Theres been another murder, and of the suspects is on the run.........


    Go, Go , Go , Go , Go , Go
    Keep runnin' homie
    Go, Go , Go , Go , Go , Go
    They on the trail
    Go, Go , Go , Go , Go , Go
    Keep runnin' homie
    Go, Go , Go , Go , Go , Go
    They on the trail


    With so much drama in the industry
    Hip Hop Police are listening
    Be careful or you'll be history
    Looks like another unsolved mystery
    It's murda, murda, murda
    Ah it's murda, murda, murda
    Yeah it's murda, murda murda
    Somebody tell em it's murda
    Murder was the case and they blamed me


    No cooperation is exactly what you would get
    Til I talk til my lawyer, you get no reply
    (You've obviously been watching too much CSI
    I'm not a crash dummy so don't even try
    To talk your dirty trash to me, no BFI
    If you are not guilty of anything, then why did you run?)
    Cause you the police and plus I saw you cocking your gun
    And the chamber wasn't empty, it was obviously one
    (If you think I'm believing that one, your obviously dumb)
    Huh? (I know that you heard the sirens, you dived in
    To the vehicle you was driving and ridin
    And you shouldn't be whining about abidin
    By the law, nah it's obvious your lying


    (Stop lying to me boy, it'd be best you confess
    I can smell the BS on the scent of your breath
    Saw the ??? while I was inspecting your deck



    Look at this pic here, he standing beside you
    Tell me his name now, I heard he was piru
    Confiscated the CD's at one of your homes

    I coulda sworn he said he had a pocket full of stones
    Am I wrong?) Hell yeah, I don't know who that is

    With so much drama in the industry
    Hip Hop Police are listening
    Be careful or you'll be history
    Looks like another unsolved mystery
    It's murda, murda, murda
    Ah it's murda, murda, murda
    Yeah it's murda, murda murda



    THE END.....
     

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