CaRWash- Thanks babe, you're fantastic!

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  1. dstined4gr8ness

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    ooh! I'm really loving this fic!! Can't wait till the next chapter!
     
  2. Need4Speed

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    hey guys!! *waves* i'm back! and i had loads of fun with the three look a likes!! anyways here's what you guys have been waiting for!!

    *a few weeks later*
    Calleigh:eek:ohh Ryan!! you naughty little CSI! :devil:
    Ryan:eek:h you like it! :devil:
    *they were enveloped in each other and talking flirtatiously with one another when the phone rings*
    Ryan:damn. *he picks up* this is Wolfe. what!? *his voice became sad and concerned* when?! how!?! no this can't be happening! *he hangs up the phone*
    Calleigh:Ry, babe, what's wrong!?
    Ryan:they found my uncle Ron murdered in his apartment this morning.
    Calleigh:*she put her hands over her mouth in shock* oh Ry, i'm so sorry! *she hugs him* well according to protocol, you can't work the case.
    Ryan:i know, but they n-need me t-to i-identify him. *Ryan began to sob into Calleigh's shoulder*
    Calleigh:eek:h babe, it's going to be ok. we'll get the guy who did this.

    *at the lab*
    *Ryan and calleigh arrived and walked out of the elevator*
    *immediatly he was greeted by Eric, Alexx, H and Natalia*
    Alexx:*she hugged him* oh baby i'm so sorry.
    Eric:yeah, man. i know how you feel. wasn't he the uncle who taught you how to crack safes?
    *Ryan was so upset and distressed that his was crying*
    Ryan:y-y-you actually remembered me telling you that?
    Eric:eek:f course i do
    Ryan:i had the feeling you never listened to anything i said.
    Eric:no. i listened to everyu detail of your life you ever shared with me because you're one of my best friends.
    Ryan:r-realy? i thought you hated me for rplacing Speedle.
    Eric:no i don't hate you i never did. i care about you more than you know. you've been like a brother i never had and all i did was treat you like dirt. I'm sorry. i never really hated you. and i hate my self for not seeing that you were only trying to do a good job. Ryan, i'm so sorry.
    Ryan:Eric, it's ok. i forgive you.
    Eric:great, and i'm really sorry about your uncle.
    Ryan:t-thanks.
    H:so uh how are you holding up?
    Ryan:n-not as well as i thought. Alexx:don't worry baby, we'll get the guy who did this.
    Ryan:first my mom and dad, then my younger, only sister and now my uncle! the only family i had left! *he sobbed into Calleigh's shoulder*
    Natalia:eek:h Ryan i had no idea!
    Eric:i never knew that you lost you're whole family. i'm so sorry. i was out of line when i told you you don't know what it's like to lose someone close tou you. but now i know you do.
    H:Calleigh, i think it would best to take Ryan home.
    Calleigh:eek:k. *to Ryan* come on babe, lets just go.
    Ryan:eek:-o-ok. *Calleigh manages to get him home*

    *at Ryan's condo*
    Calleigh:come on. i'll make you some coffee.
    Ryan:nah, that stuff'll rot out your stomache.
    Calleigh:you sound like Speed. he used to say the same thing. ok. tea then.
    *she came back with two cups of tea*
    *Ryan took it*
    Ryan:thanks
    Calleigh:no problem babe.
    *he took a sip and put his cup down. he didn't look well at all. he stood up. he felt like he was going to be sick so he ran to the bathroom adn made it just in time. he was on his knees as he began to vomit* *Calleigh came running in*
    Calleigh:Ry, babe. it's going to be ok. *she rubbed his back. he looked at her and smiled, but then he turned his head back and began to vomit again. calleigh sat there rubbing his back. she figured him getting sick was due to the shock and stress of losing his uncle, to whom he was very close to* *when Ryan was finally done vomiting she cleaned hgim up adn helped him into bed then she clmied in it next to him. holding him close and gently whispering in his ear*
    Calleigh:babe, everything is going to be ok, i'm here and i'm never going to let you go.


    TBC...............

    next chapter:will H and the others find out who killed Ryan's uncle Ron?
     
  3. hahaguy

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    awesome story
     
  4. CSIMiamiGurl1988

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    that's a good story keep going!!
     
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    Spreadin thick w/ the CHEEZ WIZ - very cute!
     
  6. Need4Speed

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    *Ryan awoke that morning, still not feeling well*
    Ryan:Cal?
    Calleigh:yeah babe?
    Ryan:you guys are going to find the guy who did this aren't you?
    Calleigh:yes. yes we are. don't worry babe. you just stay here and rest some more. i've got to get to the lab.
    *She gets ready and is about to leave*
    Ryan:Cal, when you find him. i want to see his face. i want to see the face of the person who killed the only family i had left.
    Calleigh:eek:k. *she kissed him and headed to the lab*

    *at the lab*
    H:eek:k Eric, Calleigh. you teo process Ryan's uncle's apartment. Natalia, i want you to go over his phone records and bills and anything else of that sort. Alexx, i need that autopsy done. we need a cause of death.
    *everyone follows orderes. Eric and Calleigh go to Ron's apartment*
    *they arrive there*
    Calleigh:eek:k. i'll start in here.
    Eric:alright, i'll check the bedroom.
    *they process his apartment from top to bottom*
    Calleigh:i found a plastic gun frag. probably from the handle.
    Eric:and i found some fingerprints on the door. won't know if they're the killer's until i analyze them.
    Calleigh:eek:k. lets hurry. i just want to find the jerk who did this to Ry.
    Eric:yeah
    *they head back and analyze their evidence*
    *in the mourge*
    H:so Alexx, CoD?
    Alexx:Cause of death is a gsw to the right ventricle.
    H:eek:k what Calliber round?
    Alexx:you'll have to ask Calleigh.
    H:eek:k thankl you Alexx.
    *in the fingerprint lab*
    Eric:no way. it can't be. got a hit on AFIS?
    Eric:no. county employees.
    Calleigh:who?
    Eric:Stetler
    Calleigh:no!
    Eric:fingerprints don't lie. *he shows her the monitor*
    Calleigh:eek:h my god.
    *H walks in*
    H:Calleigh what caliber round di you get out of Ron?
    Calleigh:standart police issue nine mil.
    H:eek:k. now do we have a suspect?
    Eric:yeah ,but you won't believe it. *H looks at the monitor*
    H:Rick?
    Eric:yeah. now why would Stetler's prints be in his apartment?
    H:why don't we ask him.
    *Calleigh calls Ryan*
    Ryan:Wolfe.
    Calleigh:Ry, babe. we know who did it. come and and see for your self
    *they bring in Stetler for questioning*
    Stetler:Horatio, what is this about?
    H:eek:h i think you know Rick.
    Stelter:what about?
    H:about why your prints were inside Ron Wolfe's apartment.
    Stetler:i have no idea.
    H:don't lie to me Rick! we have sufficient evidence that places you in his apartment at the time of the murder. and we found a bullet with striations that match your gun, loged in his right ventrivle. and this plastic frag fits perfectly in your gun. so i know you did it. i just want to know why?
    Stetlr:yeah i did it. i did it to get back at Ryan. because of his screw up i had to work overtime to over see his case work review.
    H:that is a lame excuse Rick. Give me your badge and gun. you're under arrest for the murder of Ron Wolfe.
    *an officer takes Stetler away*
    *Ryan walks out from behind the glass*
    Ryan i can't believe Stetler killed Uncle Ron. the only family i had left!
    Eric:no. not the only family.
    Ryan:what?
    Eric:we're your family. all of us. Me, H, Alexx, Calleigh. we all care about you.
    Ryan:thanks guys.

    *Calleigh and Ryan go home*
    Calleigh:now why don't you just let me relax you.
    Ryan:eek:oh. i like that idea. hey i know. why don't we take this into the bed room.
    Calleigh: :devil: ooh. good idea. that is exactly what you need to relax and forget all this horrible stuff :devil:
    *they head into the bedroom...strippind clothes along the way :devil:*
     
  7. hahaguy

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    pretty good story it's funny tat stetler got arrested
     
  8. Need4Speed

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    *Several Months later*
    Ryan:Hey Cal.
    Calleigh:hey babe. i'm looking forward to dinner tonight.
    Ryan:me too.
    Calleigh:well i've got to get these results to Horatio, but i'll see you later.
    Ryan:eek:k *they kiss. Calleigh leaves to give her results to H and Eric comes over*
    Eric:hey man. how's it going?
    Ryan:great. and i can't wait to see Calleigh's face when i show her the surpirse i got her.
    Eric:eek:h really? and that would be?
    Ryan:this *he takes a small velvet box from his pocket and shows Eric the beautiful Silver engagement ring with a saphire stone set in the middle*
    Eric:you're going to propose?
    Ryan:yep, right after i take her out to dinner.
    Eric:that's great. and it's going to make Calleigh happy. i'm glad for you. she's a beautiful woman and don't make the mistake of letting her go, hold onto her and never let her go. i know you're going to make her very happy.
    Ryan:thanks man.
    Eric:hey i'll see you later. i've got to get down to the mourge and help Alexx with the autopsy.
    *Eric pats him on the shoulder and walks away*

    *Later*
    Ryan:hey ready to......wow. you look beautiful. *Calleigh was wearing a light blue halter top dress that went just below her knees. black sandal type high heels. with a matching blue hand bag*
    Calleigh:you're looking pretty handsome yourself.
    Ryan:ready to go?
    Calleigh:yeah.
    *they arrive at the restaurant, and get a table*
    Calleigh:Ryan, this is wonderful. i love you so much
    Ryan:i love you too.
    *The waitress comes over and they order their meals. 15 minutes later thier food arrives and they eat and chat. once they were done and Ryan paid Ryan told Calleigh he had a surprise for her*
    Ryan:before i give you the surprise i have to take you somewhere first
    *Ryan takes her to the beach. Calleigh and Ryan both take their shoes off and walk down the beach aling the ocean under the full moon*
    Calleigh:is this the surprise?
    Ryan:part of it. now here's the rest of it. *He pulls out the black box and gets down on one knee* Calleigh, will you marry me? *He opens the box to reveal the ring*
    Calleigh:eek:h Ryan!! it's beautiful!! yes. i'll marry you!
    *Ryan places the ring on her finger. gets up and kisses her*
    Ryan:Calleigh, i love you so much. and i want us to stay together forever
    Calleigh:me too.
    *They kiss*

    *The next day Calleigh adn Ryan share the good news*
    H:i'm very happy for you.
    Eric:yeah. you two are perfect for each other.
    Alexx:eek:h this is so exciting!
    Natalia:congrats
    Calleigh:thanks guys.
    Ryan:yeah.
    Alexx:eek:h can i help plan the wedding?
    Calleigh:eek:f course.

    *Later that night*
    Calleigh:well we're alone. we have a house to oursleves. want to have some fun :devil:
    Ryan:eek:ooh. i like that way you think :devil:
    *They head to the bedroom. stripping clothes along the way. and before they knew it they were completely enveloped with each other :devil:*

    TBC............
     
  9. CSINicole

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    Need4Speed...Im loving this story!
    This stuff would make a few great Eps!!!
    Cant wait to read more!
     
  10. _Suzy_

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    awesome story....
     
  11. hahaguy

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    can't wait for the next section
     
  12. Need4Speed

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    *Four Months later*
    Ryan:Eric, leave it alone! it looks fine!!
    Eric:eek:k chill man. i just want you to look good.
    Ryan:it's fine!
    Eric:eek:k, ok.
    Ryan:hey Eric...
    Eric:yeah?
    Ryan:thanks for being my best man.
    Eric:hey no problem, you're my best friend. it's the least i could do.
    Ryan:thanks.
    *H came in*
    H:hey.
    Ryan:hey H.
    H:nervous?
    Ryan:a little.
    H:it's natural.
    Eric:eek:k man, ready?
    Ryan:yeah.

    *Ryan walks out and stands infron of the priest*
    *He's nervously watching as Eric and Natalia walk up the asile, followed by H and Alexx. then the music starts and Calleigh is walking down the asile. in her bautiful white wedding gown. she stands next to him and the preist begins the ceremony*
    Priest:we are gathered here today to join these two in holy matrimony.....

    *later in the ceremony*
    Priest:do you Ryan Wolfe take Calleigh Duquesne to be your lawfully wedded wife?
    Ryan:i do
    Preist: and do you Calleigh Duquesne take Ryan Wolfe to be your lawfully weded husband?
    Calleigh:i do
    Preist:now by the power invested in me, i now pronounce you husband and wife. you may kiss the bride.
    *They kiss. everyone claps*

    *at the reception*
    DJ:eek:k now it's time for their first dance as husband and wife....
    *the song 'Blessed the broken road' by Rascal Flatts comes on.....they met on the dance floor. and held each other close and began to dance....

    I set out on a narrow way many years ago
    Hoping I would find true love along the broken road
    But I got lost a time or two
    Wiped my brow and kept pushing through
    I couldn't see how every sign pointed straight to you
    Every long lost dream lead me to where you are
    Others who broke my heart they were like northern stars
    Pointing me on my way into your loving arms
    This much I know is true
    That God blessed the broken road
    That led me straight to you

    I think about the years I spent just passing through
    I'd like to have the time I lost and give it back to you
    But you just smile and take my hand
    You've been there you understand
    It's all part of a grander plan that is coming true

    Every long lost dream lead me to where you are
    Others who broke my heart they were like northern stars
    Pointing me on my way into your loving arms
    This much I know is true
    That God blessed the broken road
    That led me straight to you
    *the song ended and they kissed*

    Calleigh:i love you
    Ryan:i love you too.


    TBC..............
     
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    *on their honeymoon*
    Ryan:I love you so much
    Calleigh:i love you too, now shut up and kiss me!
    *Ryan pulls Calleigh into a deep passionate kiss*
    Calleigh:hey babe...are you thinking what i'm thinking? :devil:
    Ryan:eek:h yeah! :devil:
    *they soon become enveloped with each other...:devil:*


    *Later*
    Ryan:I love you
    Calleigh:i love you too.
    *She lays her head on his sexy muscled chest, placing a hand on it next to her head. he begins to stroke her hair gently and they drift off to sleep*

    *A few weeks later*
    Eric:hey. so how was the honeymoon?
    Ryan:great.
    Eric:eek:h i'm sure :devil: *winks*
    Ryan:Eric! you dirty little cuban!
    Eric:what? i'm just asking if you had fun....and not just sight seeing :devil:
    Ryan:yeah we did :devil:
    Eric:you naughty little CSI!
    Ryan:well you wanted to know :devil:
    Eric:eek:k..i got to get these prints analyzed. see ya man
    Ryan:see ya.

    *Calleigh walked over. not looking well*
    Ryan:Cal, are you ok? you don't look so well.
    Calleigh:it's my stomache. it's been bothering me all morning. i feel like i'm gonna...oh god *she ran over to a trash can and began to vomit. Ryan immediatly went over and held her beautiful, long blonde hair back. H noticed Ryan holding her hair and came to see what was wrong*
    H:Ryan? is everything ok?
    Ryan:*sounding worried* no. Calleigh's sick. i don't know what from.
    H:eek:k lets get her to Alexx and have her check her out. *H goes to the supply closet and gets a bucket and hands it to Calleigh. they bring her down to Alexx*
    Alexx:hey guys what's...*she sees Calleigh* what happened?
    Ryan:i don't know. she was complaining about her stomache bothering her and then she ran over to a trash can and began to puke.
    Alexx:*to Calleigh* oh poor baby. ok let me take a look at you.
    *Alexx examines Calleigh*
    Alexx:well i can seem to see a problem. i run some tests.
    Ryan:eek:k
    Alexx:could you two give us a minute?
    Ryan:sure
    *H and Ryan leave the room*

    Ryan:H i'm worried about her
    H:don't worry Alexx will figure out what's wrong.
    Ryan:i hope so.
    H:she will.

    *alexx calls them back in*
    Ryan:Alexx, what's wrong with her?
    Alexx:i think she should tell you herself. we'll give yoy a moment. H and Alexx leave the room*
    Ryan:Cal, what's wrong?
    Calleigh:Ry, babe, I'm pregnant.
    Ryan:seriously!? OMG!! this is great!!! i'm really going to be a father?
    Calleigh:uh-huh. *she smiles*
    Ryan:how far along?
    Calleigh:a month.
    Ryan:this is just great! *They kiss*




    TBC...........
     
  14. hahaguy

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    awesome
     
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    Great story. POST OR DIE!
     

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