Poetry, Anyone?

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  1. MiaCharlize

    MiaCharlize Coroner

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    She makes no sense
    She has no direction
    She stares at the mirror
    At her dishevelled reflection

    She makes no sense
    She has no ideals
    She spits at the mirror
    She hates how it feels

    She makes no sense
    She has no will
    She closes her eyes
    Until the world stands still
     
  2. Jorja_Rain

    Jorja_Rain Lab Technician

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    I love your poem :D


    This is for you, Mia:

    I hear your thoughts like they were words
    Softly spoken to my face.
    Behind blue eyes m y heaven lies,
    Your mind is still my favorite place.
     
  3. MiaCharlize

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    Aww, baby. Love you :D (and your poem of course)

    Okay, this one's old. Hope I haven't posted it before :p

    You stare into her eyes full of intensity
    So intense infact that it scares you
    She is longing desperately
    For something
    The sparkle betraying her neutral expression
    Her stonecold face
    Lighting up with a flicker of life
    And passion
    And the need to be seen
    Reading her has always been hard
    Keeping you wonder
    Who it is her longing is directed at
    What it is her hope yearns for
    And for the blink of an eye
    You dare asking yourself if it’s you
    And whether you could give
    Everything
    Take
    Everything
    To chance the opportunity
    For both of you to become happy
     
  4. Patricia

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    Awesome thread!!
    I love poetry!!
    I've write quite a lot of things myself...it helps me actually, I tend to think more than I should so writing helps me putting my thoughts in order...
    My first language is Spanish so I probably have some mistakes but somehow I like writing in English more than writing in Spanish ...I just love the language! :)


    Perfect Day
    Today can be a perfect day
    Just if you want it to be
    Don’t blame others for your sorrow
    If you make it count for you, it can be

    Sometimes it looks impossible, unreachable
    Well, it isn’t, nothing you need really is
    Close you eyes, make a wish
    I you believe in yourself you can make it real

    Don’t waste time, don’t waste hope
    Time will run unless you make it go slow
    Open you eyes, let the sun come in
    Life is yours, own it and make it live

    Never loose tears for something lost
    You would get tired, you would not see
    Don’t look back to the things you’ve done wrong
    That won’t change, ,so really, think about it, what’s the point?

    Life is wonderful, life is good
    Don’t fool yourself you know is true
    Make it happen, it deepens on you
    Who cares if you don’t have a clue?

    Don’t waste happiness, don’t waste dreams
    The world would disappear if you are controlled by your fears
    Open your wings if you want you could fly
    Beauty would be gone if you don’t admire
    Nothing is going to happen just by chance
    You’ve gotta work for what you want

    Just need to believe just need to let yourself go
    Time will run unless you force it to go slow


    I hope you like it! :) *blush*
     
  5. CSIdoglover54

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    Wow, really good poems everyone! I write tons of poetry but at the moment I don't have time to put any up here. At some point I will.
     
  6. Kit4na

    Kit4na CSI Level Two

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    Well I've only written one poem so far. I attend a poetry competition with it and I won so I suppose it's pretty decent :p To be honest I'm surprised that I still have it..

    Statement of Love

    Love, it's impossible to ignore nor to describe.
    It brings sorrows but with the right person by your side these sorrows become bearable.

    Without regret or remorse I look into your beautiful soul and make a promise to myself to never let anybody hurt you.

    Love me for me who loves you, just the way you are.

    From a devil, soon to be falling down earth, resting in your sweet arms.

    :devil:
     
  7. MiaCharlize

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    ~ For Rainy ~

    I watch as you sleep
    silent and beautiful
    And I stir you to smile
    with tender kisses
    while I wait for you
    to come to your senses
    I watch as you turn
    to let me see
    the child-like expression
    you wear when you're sleeping
    with your pouty lips
    and your uncombed hair
    You are perfection
    you are my heaven
    The image I want to wake up to
    Every day
     
  8. Patricia

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    ^^That was cute! I like it! :)

    Another one of mine...it's not good but ...oh well


    Here I am, crying
    I can’t seem to stop
    Tears just keep falling
    From my eyes, from my heart

    I can’t forget that image
    And it’s killing me inside
    Why did I have to see it?
    Why does it hurt so much?

    I can’t stand it, I don’t know
    Why would anyone do such thing?
    Don’t they know,
    She’s a blessing in this world?

    People talk, talk without knowing
    Her eyes shine, her soul burns
    And just a few seem to see
    She’s an angel from above

    It’s so hard to see her suffering
    It’s so hard to see her tears
    Whenever that happens
    It’s impossible not to bleed

    Look at her, lightening everything up
    Beyond words, beyond human
    Smiling every day to life
    Perfection made into a woman

    So keep talking, keep whispering
    I don’t care can’t you see?
    If she’s not worth of admiration
    I don’t know who would be
     
  9. Jorja_Rain

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    ^^I think that would make great lyrics for a song. :)

    @Mia: You brought tears to my eyes when you read it to me, but you already knew that :)
     
  10. gsrLOVE

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    Chills

    It's like a soft breeze crossing through my face
    if only to chill me for a second through the hot day that won't seem to fade
    to cool me down as i'm getting heated
    allowing me to stand there and loose my thoughts

    Then it rings, and I have to run
    to the other end
    so far from that cold chill
    and i want to burst
    with tears as i wipe that beat of sweat from my forehead
    but they don't understand
    that breeze won't leave

    I want to stand in that position for all of eternity
    and smile as I see all those children run across the street
    and laugh at those girls over there laughing for no apparent reason
    and stop, think, and listen to the all noise of the day.

    But you don't know what this is about
    and you never will
    you don't understand what this poem means
    only i do, in my heart, in my mind

    as I lose it when you're near.


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    That was.. a poem that had no meaning, but as I finished it, it ended up having a meaning to me. Something so deep that I just don't know how to explain it.
     
  11. MiaCharlize

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    Agreed, I like it, Patricia.

    gsrLOVE, I like the vibe of your poem.

    Keep writing, everyone.

    ~~~~

    I just wrote this one. It was intentionally written for the fanfic poetry thread but since I didn't include names or specific situations it could just as well be a regular poem, hence I decided to post it here, too.

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    When I sleep alone at night
    I see you in my dreams
    I wonder what you're thinking of
    and what my heartache means

    I wish that you would hold me
    I wish that you were here
    You might not even miss me
    and that is what I fear

    What we shared was brief and sweet
    but was there more to it?
    I'm afraid I fell for you
    and I can not forget

    You are always on my mind
    Your beauty so devine
    This should have worked out differently
    but I can't turn back time

    So here I lie in bed alone
    with memories of your smile
    If only we had had more time
    If only for a while
     
  12. SaraSidle_girl

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    MiaCharlize I really like this one! Its wonderful!
     
  13. Depth-Of-Love

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    Whore (am I aloud to say that???)

    The girl that all the Guys talk about
    The other girls despise her
    Yet they all want to be her
    The one the guys want more than anything
    She gets noticed
    She gets all the attention the other girls want
    She not pretty
    But she wears enough make up
    She’s too skinny
    But her short skirts distract the eye
    Jealousy in the eyes of the girls
    Lust in the eyes of the boys
    She walks in, all eyes on her

    ..What is she hiding?
    What secrets infest her heart?
    Why is she SUCH a whore

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    Sorry if thats terrible, i wrote it awhile ago, and i just found it!
     
  14. SaraSidle_girl

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    To my soon to be wife

    The gentle touch of sunlight
    Stroking my skin
    The warm glow filling my body
    That is how you make me feel

    You're the thunderstorm
    That makes my heart go wild
    And your're the wind
    That takes me into heaven

    The raindrops are the tears
    I now finally dare to cry
    Opening myself and showing you
    But most of all, tears of missing you

    You're a force of nature
    That has overwhelmed me so
    Nature is wild and pure and true
    As is my love for you.
     
  15. MiaCharlize

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    Aww, that's so cute :)

    Love is such a beautiful thing.
     

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