Re: CSI LV fic "A sick man's game" Greg centered drama/suspe Ack fix it fix it! Or I'll have to get out my pitchfork rofl
Re: CSI LV fic "A sick man's game" Greg centered drama/suspe Thank you guys so much for the reviews , I really really love them ! So here is the next chapter , shorter than usual . Is more about Grissom’s reactions and feelings and there is a little about Hodges . Please read and review ! Feelin’ better “What ?” Catherine asked in horror “what do you mean ?” “Well his heart stopped and if we give him the antidote it probably won’t help him . He’s in a coma now , we don’t expect for him to wake up .” “So what ? Give him the cure , miracles happens ” “Well I don’t think …” “Can you just shut up and make the injection ?” Grissom yelled for the first time since Greg had been kidnapped . The doctor did what he was told . He bent over the bed and inserted the needle in his arm . After a second he pulled it out , while the nurses were listening to the instructions he was giving . One of them started to perform CPR , while the other was helping him breath . But the machines showed that his heart was ‘working’ again . Hopefully , the doctor , even if he was an idiot and an ass , will probably tell them things are fine . That thanks to the antidote he’ll wake up and be with them again . Catherine didn’t know what to think ; neither one of them knew probably . But there was hope , lots of hope that would keep them smiling . Taking the cure meant that Greg was out of pain so when he’ll wake up he’ll feel much better than he was when he fell asleep . A very good point . Nick returned to his old self ; poor guy changed a lot since the explosion . The same for Warrick . What the doctor told them , that he can’t do anything for Greg annoyed and scared at the same time . This guy looked like he didn’t want to save their buddy and that was the thing that made them angry ; he was an idiot . Greg’s doctor was in a surgery and he couldn’t go check on him so he sent this one , who was a dumb person and who was acting like he had no feelings . Such a bastard . How could he be so indifferent to Greg’s sufferance ? An idiot , a bastard , how could a guy like that became a doctor ? Even a janitor could have done a better job than him . “Your friend is a little better” “See ? Greg’s not dead yet , why the hell you didn’t want to give him the cure ? What’s your problem ? I’m angry enough to beat you up here ” “Sorry , sir … I am new here and I didn’t know the rules … ” “What the hell is this ? ” Grissom said again , he was now yelling “you don’t know that a human life , or any other life is more important than anything ? When they gave you the degree , they didn’t even look on how good you were in the job ? How can someone think that is no way out ,I mean , you knew Greg was alive and you weren’t going to help him . What are , a sadistic that like to see human suffering ? ” “Mr. Grissom…” the young doctor interrupted . “Don’t take me with things like this , please . I’m way too experienced to even listen to you , you should be the one listening to me, okay ?” he looked straight into that man’s eyes , scaring the shit out of him “this guy whose life you weren’t willing to save have been through so much that I doubt you’ll ever survive . You understand ?” The young doctor had on his face that look that was saying “I don’t believe you” “So , you don’t thing I’m saying the truth ? fine then , let me tell you something . You were about to let to die a guy ; okay , you’re a doctor and didn’t want to save your patient , it might be a motive , I understand and not judge you .But you heard about a big kidnapping that happened three weeks ago , right ? ” “Yeah , of course I heard , but where’s the connection ? I know I did a stupid thing , and I’m sorry , but you really have to tell me a story here ?” “Listen , I forgive you just because you’re a kid ,but because you heard about the kidnapping , you didn’t know he was the victim ,right ? ” “He was the vic ???” “Yes , and if it was for you he’d be dead by now . Listen to me carefully , you know what had he been through ? Let’s tell you . Or ask you something . You survive a beating , or a whipping ? Or you’ll be able not to scream while you’re stabbed to death because you don’t want to scare your friends ? I really don’t thing so . I doubt you will even survive . But …I see I let you speechless . “ “I never knew …” “Okay , so Greg is a great guy and I don’t even know why I am telling this to you , because you didn’t give a shit on him . So I hope you’ll remember and not do again the mistake ” He nodded and let them alone . to wait . The best part was that they knew everything was going to be okay . So they entered slowly again the same room Greg had been for last two days and waited for him to wake up . Because ,now , finally , it was no doubt : Greg was going to wake up and be okay . Finally . Brass left the hospital to go to the police station to visit Hodges . He just wanted to tell that guy that he was wrong , because Greg was going to be fine . He wanted that guy to know . … “Hey , Hodges , how are you doing ? Are you comfortable there ? ” “Fuck you !” the ex lab tech answered , anger obvious in his voice , thing that made Brass more happy than he already was . He wanted to make this bastard feel powerless , feel a piece of shit , like he made him feel when Greg was in danger . Hodges had to be glad it wasn’t Warrick , or worse , Nick who was doing this . “Me ? Why me ? I an not a psycho that is killing people without a reason ” “So what ? I’m not crazy and I didn’t kill anyone without a reason , I had a very good reason” “Yeah , and I should be the idiot who believes you , right ? Bad choice , David “ “Ha ha ha” Hodges laughed . “By th way , I have to tell you the good news , I bet you’ll be as happy as I am “ “Good news ? What, is Greg dead ?” “Au contraire , David , he’s going to wake up and be okay . They gave him the cure ” “What ? How ?” But Brass left , leaving Hodges more angry than he already was . God , he loved so much teasing jerks . He should make a job from this . … Well , I really don’t want this story to finish , but I can’t stop it . There are three or four more chapters to go !
Re: CSI LV fic "A sick man's game" Greg centered drama/suspe hahaha go Brass Can we take turns beating Hodges up?
Re: CSI LV fic "A sick man's game" Greg centered drama/suspe Can't wait to see what going to happen next.
Re: CSI LV fic "A sick man's game" Greg centered drama/suspe A happy waking “Oh , Grissom , you really enraged the doctor !” Sara smiled . “So ? I think he understood he was an idiot , so it was worth it , wasn’t he ?” “Guys , guys , hey” Brass entered the room “how is he ?” “He’s much better but he was About to die because of that idiot doctor who didn’t want to give him the cure . Bastard ….” “But , he got the cure so he’ll live !?” “Yeah , and he is going to wake up soon from the coma , so there is nothing to be worried for . But where have you been ?” “To the station . Informing Hodges about Greg’s condition” he smiled and the team started laughing “take a guess , what reaction did he had ?” “He swore to kill you ? ” Nick tried . “No” “He attacked you ?” Catherine asked . “No” “Then tell us , don’t keep the suspense up , it’s annoying !!!” “He was dazed , I mean he really thought his poison was the best , it was really funny , I think I laughed all the way here . He asked things like why ? what , but I left without answering . He’s such a jerk !” “Yeah he is !” “But …” Nick laughed “he’s funny , because he always thought he was good and he wasn’t . He wasn’t ! And he’ll never be !” “Yes , just a little bastard . I can’t wait for Greg to wake up , can you believe that he was close to death because of that doctor ? I mean , a doctor is supposed to save people , not let them die !” “Calm down , Sara , Greg is okay now .” … Greg’s face wasn’t death pale any more , he was feeling much better and they saw that . Greg’s official doctor was taking care of him and informed them about the improvements and they were happy . But the news they were told a couple of minutes ago made them even happier : Greg was going to wake up . To be okay and to be with them again . The only bad part would be the trial , where he had to testify and remember all the horrible experiences he’s been through . And to see Hodges’ face . But there was a lot of time until the trial , so they shouldn’t think at hat yet . They should think at the surprises they will make him , the party , the welcome back party that the poor guy never celebrated . The gifts and all that , the friends and the reason to live . They were staying in the room , starring at Greg’s still closed eyes and praying for him to open them faster . But the doctor told them it was a possibility that he wouldn’t want to wake up , because he still thinks about the pain that his body is suffering when he’s awake . “Hey , Greg ,I really hope you can hear me” Sara started “please wake up for me , for us , we miss you , we need you so much . I can’t want to see you , to talk to you , all of us are wanting this . “ “Yeah , man , for God’s sake , open your eyes , I am so bored when you’re not around , I can’t wait to hear you , to listen to your stupid jokes , please , if you are listening , just … just make a last effort and look at us !” Nick continued . “Listen , I know you may don’t want to open your eyes , but don’t be afraid , is over , the pain , the sufferance , everything is over . There is no more pain , sweetie” Again the silence filled the room . They were waiting for the reaction , Greg’s reaction . … “Hey , Greg … wake up ” … “just make a last effort and look at us …” …”I can’t wait to see you ” … “if you are listening ” …”we need you ” …“I miss your stupid jokes …”…“I know you don’t want to open you eyes …”…“the pain , the sufferance is over ”…“There is no more pain sweetie” “Wake up Greg , wake up for us ” … He heard them , he heard all the words they said , and he regained his hope ; their voices made him strong and willing to come back on Earth . On real world , not in the world of dreams he had been for the last days . He had to show them his will . He had to show them he had a little strength left . “Guys !” Sara saw the first sign . “Look” she pointed to his hand “he’s waking up !” They hugged each other tightly and happy , looking at his eyes all the time . In one second they were closed , but in the other …. Greg’s eyes were wide opened . Once and forever . “Hey , Greg !” Catherine smiled . “Cath … guys … hi ” he mumbled . “Do you need a doctor or something ?” Nick offered. “No … thank you … just some water ” “Here you go ” Catherine poured some in the glass and helped him drink . “How are you feeling ?” “Better … than … remember …” They knew what he was talking about . But they didn’t want to upset a man that just woke up from the dead . The should make him happy . “Everything is okay now , Greg , everything is okay thankfully ” “You … you are feeling okay ? “Yeah , fine > You were the injure one , not us !” “Well … whatever , is good to see you guys” “I know , I’m so glad you decided to wake up !” “Yeah … where is he ?” He was talking about Hodges , probably . “H …?” “Yeah ” “Prison ?” “Perfect . He looks good in black and white ” They laughed at the , that help them understand Greg was back to his old self . Finally . “Do you like my stupid jokes , don’t you Nick ?” … Another chapter and the final chapter is getting closer day by day ! Please read and review ! Love u all
Re: CSI LV fic "A sick man's game" Greg centered drama/suspe Thank god Greg a live and a wake. keep going.
Re: CSI LV fic "A sick man's game" Greg centered drama/suspe Ch 33Finally “Hey Greggo , ready to go out ?” Nick smiled ”to escape from this hospital ?” he joked . “Hell yeah ! I miss my home !” All the team was there when Greg got out . They were happy to see him again feeling good and help him forget about the things he’s been through . But he looked different , even if he was trying to hide it , he was scared of guns , knives , fire , and all the instruments that were used to torture him . He hated that he had to go testify against Hodges at the trial , he had to remember all that and he’ll see the criminal again . But he should see that his friends were going to help him . He smiled at the thought he had such good friends , that suffered so much for him and were by his side no matter what . “So … Grissom “ “Something wrong , Greg ? Do you need something ?” “When .. ”he swallowed “when is the trial ?” “In three weeks .” he nodded at the young CSI “you’ll be fine , Greg , I promise” “I really hope so ” ….. “Are you okay ?” Sara asked her younger co worker “Yeah , let’s go , let’s make that criminal pay for all that he did !” Greg decided suddenly , for the first time . “Perfect then . The first will be Warrick , me ,Catherine , Grissom , Nick , Brass , Jimmy, Hodges and then You . It’ll be over soon “ “Yeah … and he’ll go to jail for life , right ?” “Of course !” … “Mr. Warrick Brown , right ?” the defense attorney asked . “Yeah . ” “You are one of the officers that investigated the case , right ? What’s your job at the crime lab ?” “I am a CSI Level three , sir .” “Yeah , right . Mr. Brown , could you describe your relationship with Mr. Sanders , the victim ?” Greg’s head was spinning . He just hated to be called victim . “Mr. Sanders is my co worker . We work together for more than five years . ” “Okay , so you want to say that you and Mr. Sanders are not friends ?” “Yes we are ” “Objection , your honor ? What is this relevance ?” “Objection accepted . To the point , Mr. Jollier ” “Mr. Brown , what did the accused do to you ? ” “He threatened to kill me . And my friends . ” …. After Sara’s testimony , followed by Catherine , Grissom , Nick and Brass , Jimmy ws the next witness . They hoped that his statement will be the one to put Hodges behind the bars for the rest of his stupid life . “Mr., Jim Bull , right ?” the prosecution attorney asked him . “Yeah .” “Mr. Bull , I see you was an accomplice of Mr. Hodges ” “I was , yeah , sir” “Can you describe me what you did for him ?” “Yes . I cut the breaks to Mr. Sanders’ car , helped by Dean Mercury , who died shot by …” “We know this , continue what you started . You cut the brakes and ?” “He told us to see if Mr. Sanders will still leave after the accident ; if he did we were supposed to take him and bring him to a house .” he confessed . “So , you just followed the car until it reached to an accident , or what ?” “That’s right . They couldn’t stop the car , we walked and saw Mr. Sanders in the front of the car , we took him and took care not to be seen by other people . ” ”You didn’t take a look at Mr. Stokes or Ms. Sidle , that’s correct ?” “Yes , sir . We didn’t care about them , all I know is that they were unconscious” “So this is all you did for Mr. Hodges ?” “No , sir , we were paid to go undercover and listen to everything that the team will find out about Mr. Sanders and tell this to Boss . We did as we were told ” Sara put her hand on her mouth ; she remembered seeing Jim as a janitor , but didn’t pay attention then ; now it was all clear . “O fuck …” she whispered . “And that’s all ?” “No sir , I kidnapped one of the CSIs at his demand and kept him hostage , threatening to kill him ” he pointed to Nick “but I surrendered , I didn’t want to die that day “ “Okay Mr. Bull , prosecution doesn’t have anything more to ask “ “Okay , Mr. Logan . Defense ?” “No Sir .” … “Mr. Hodges , why did you do it ? Why did you kidnap and torture Mr. Sanders and tried to kill him ?” “Why ? Ask them why !” he pointed to the team “because they are murderers , because they killed Holly !” “Holly Gribbs ?right ? ” “Yeah , sir , they let her there to die , they didn’t care about her, they just let her there alone so that bastard could kill her ! ” “Correct me if I’m wrong . Mr. Warrick Brown was the one that let her , right ?” “Yes your honor , I just wanted to make them feel like I did , powerless !” “Defense has nothing more to ask .” “Alright .prosecution ?” ”Yes , Sir ” “Proceed” “Mr. Hodges , why did you poisoned Mr. Sanders ?” “I didn’t poison him , Dean did . Ask him if you don’t believe me !” he laughed inside knowing that they couldn’t . “How did Mr. Mercury manage to prepare the antidote ?” “I dunno , ask him !” “Why did you put Jonathan Wilder and Bobby Dawson to kidnap and torture Greg Sanders ?” “I ? I didn’t even know these guys ! ” his face was so natural that annoyed the attorney . “You said to Mr. Grissom that you found them and enraged them against the team ! “ “No I haven’t say that !” “Yes you did !” “Prove me , because I really don’t remember !” “Objection , your honor !” the defense attorney jumped “he’s harassing my client !” “Objection accepted ” “Why did you tried to kill Mr. Grissom ?” “I didn’t even shoot him ! I didn’t hurt him , I think he hurt me more than I did !” “He hurt you ? You pointed a gun to his head , he defended himself !” “He kicked me !” The attorney closed his eyes angrily . This guy was such a bastard , he hurt all the team but he just couldn’t help nailing him . He turned for a second to look at the team and then saw that his questions were helping Hodges instead of accusing him , so he gave up . He just hoped Greg’s statement will nail David Hodges forever . “I am out of questions , your honor” “We’ll take a break for three hours . After this we are going to hear Mr. Sanders’ testimony and the verdict . ” Greg couldn’t wait to get out of there . When Hodges saw his wet eyes laughed . “I am going to win this too , Sanders . I am not going to jail , you’ll see ! I don’t even think you’re man enough to testify against me , are you ?” he smiled “you’re just a poor victim who’s crying for himself … and you’re so pathetic , Sanders , God , I wish you would be dead ! You’re such a child . I think I can beat you even with my hands tied !” “Really ? Well , I think your just a bastard and a criminal , let’s see what the jury is going to say after I tell them everything , I want you to die in jail , to live your life like a criminal deserves to , you hear me ? And I ” the team approached him “we are going to take care you’ll pay for all that you did . And , by the way , you’re such an idiot !” Then he turned to them and smiled , letting them see the satisfaction in his eyes . “I just had to tell him that” he defended himself . “Good , now we have some hours to get ready for the finale , are you okay ? ” “Oh yeah !” he laughed . … I can’t wait to see what is Greg going to say at the trial ! What do you think ? Please read and review !
Re: CSI LV fic "A sick man's game" Greg centered drama/suspe I wanna see too what he's going to say. More more!
Re: CSI LV fic "A sick man's game" Greg centered drama/suspe Keep going, I hope Hodges goes to Jail for what he did.
Re: CSI LV fic "A sick man's game" Greg centered drama/suspe The testimony “Hey , guys ” Brass saluted them , walking over to see what they were doing “if you could see what face all of you have … what happened ? something wrong ?” “Huh ? A , no , just that we have emotions , we want to see the verdict faster . “ “Come on , you heard Hodges’ testimony , they can accuse him just because of that ! Stay calm , Grissom , stay calm . ” “I must , but hell I’m scared . And that fuckin’ lawyer Hodges has is a pain in the ass , I just hate him , he’s annoying ! But he’s smart , damnit , too smart !“ “He is , but Greg is smart even more ; he’ll never survive if he would not be smart . I feel proud , I’m proud of him !” “Yeah , me too . He’s such a hero and the beautiful thing is he doesn’t even know it ; it’s enough that he’s not crying for himself and he is able to testify today . Hodges’ statement was too … original . ” “Yeah . ” The team didn’t hear any part of the conversation . They were too busy talking to Greg , powering him . Giving him power to fight in there . “Greg !” Grissom said “let’s enter , is time !” “ ’kay boss !” He saw the doors opened and stepped in the court room . Again , hoping it was the last time . “Prosecution is calling the next witness : Greg Sanders .” He heard his name he saw that everyone was looking at him . He had to go and tell them everything , all that happened two months ago . It was a nightmare for him to remember all that , but it was important to catch the killer . He took a deep breath and started walking to the place he had to stay . But it seemed like his feet weren’t listening him . They didn’t want to move but , after taking more deep breath , trying to forget that in the next hour he’ll remember that horrible torture and sat on the chair . “I’m ready ” he said . “Okay , Mr. Sanders , defense may begin . Order in court room !” the judge yelled . “What is your name ?” “Greg Sanders ” “Mr. Sanders , where are you working ?” “At Las Vegas crime lab ” God are you so idiot ! “Greg smiled for himself . “What’s your job at the lab ? ” “I’m a CSI Level One . Been like this for one year .” “Aha , okay then . Mr. Sanders , I want you to tell him so that everyone here can hear …” “Hell , what if I don’t want to tell ? I’m scared ” he thought “to remember everything? ” “… what happened with you three months ago .” “One day , at a crime scene , after processing the scene I stepped out of the room , my wish was to so to the lab . But then I felt a hit in the head and probably passed out . I woke up some time after and saw that I was tied to a ceiling probably and the person who kidnapped me , his name was Jonathan Wilder I think , said that he’ll have him revenge . Then he called my colleagues and made them hear me ” a lightning went through his body while he remembered “yelling while … he used a whip on me .” “Why did you stop ?” “For nothing .” That guy knew that was disturbing fore Greg and wanted to make it more disturbing , to a point he couldn’t control it . “I think I passed out then .. because I couldn’t hear anything . Then ….” He told all that happened , the beatings , the stabbing , the shots . He didn’t know anything about the explosion , he was unconscious . “Good , and ?” “I woke up in the hospital with no memories of why I am there and I didn’t know anyone . But I recovered easily , in two weeks and I remembered everything , all that happened …. ” He again told all the history with the amnesia . “And , how did you get yourself kidnapped the second time ?” “I was kidnapped . I didn’t get myself kidnapped !” “Yeah , whatever , tell us .” “Me and my friends were going to a crime scene ” he smiled “not really a crime scene , but …” “But what ?” “…but a party , a secret party my friends did for me . Can you let me tell a whole phrase without interrupting ?” “Yeah , sorry .” “Well , we were waiting to get there , my colleague Sara Sidle was driving and when Nick told her to slow down she didn’t because she said it is impossible . ” “Why ? Why it was impossible ?” “Because ” Greg said annoyed “the breaks weren’t working . That’s why ! ” “Okay . So what happened ?” “I think the car hit something , I really don’t remember well . All I know is that I woke up in a house that smelled awful . ” Again he said all the history . “What did he gave you ?” “From what I heard , a combination of arsenic and thallium . ” After finishing the story , after making a mind trip through all that awful memories he wanted to keep hidden , he just couldn’t wait for the verdict . Hoping it will be guilty and Hodges will receive like twenty years at least . There was another break when they will decide what to choose . He knew there was another trial he had to assist to , Jimmy’s but he wasn’t afraid and wanted to save the guy . … “Congrats , Greg ” the team said to him “you did great in there” “You think , guys ? I don’t and I’m fuckin afraid of what’s going to happen !” “What ? Hodges=Guilty ! guilty , he’ll pay for what he did to you , for what he did to us , you mist not have a doubt ” “If you say so Sara ,I believe you ! ” “Of course you do Greg !” … They entered the court room for the last time that day and just hoped things will be as they wanted . … Look , I know the accused is the last to testify , but I didn’t want this ; this is fic so I can do what I want , right ? Please read and review !
Re: CSI LV fic "A sick man's game" Greg centered drama/suspe awesome story! that would be unbelieveable if it was actually an episode!
Re: CSI LV fic "A sick man's game" Greg centered drama/suspe I can't wait for the ending...post soon!
Re: CSI LV fic "A sick man's game" Greg centered drama/suspe It's great so far and I can't wait till the ending. Post soon. It would be cool (and not cause Greg gets hurt) if that was an episode on the show.