CSI:Miami - "Road Trip *puts on shades* Number Nine."

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  1. Anni Grey

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    And that would do what exactly, Carly? ;) Just keep that vicious cycle going,lol. What we need , as bird of flame so eloquently put, is a sit down between RT Katie and RT Anni. Everyone needs to be on the same page :lol:...either that or more and more tension....hmmm such a decision...:lol:

    I still think you are a genius :)
     
  2. saraholic

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    OMG! I swear I didn't post what was posted by me above...This is creepy...lol Yay! Storyine! Thanks Geni! Update soon! :D
     
  3. bird_of_flame

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    See, I don't think Eric was ever in Boy Scouts, so he thinks he can get away with it. We're on to you and your evil scheme, Eric! :p Oh man, I just got an image of grown Eric wearing the full Boy Scouts uniform (brown shorts, khaki shirt, goofy looking hat like Smoky the Bear), and showing off his new badge, "Bravery Against the Wubba". :rolleyes: :lol:
     
  4. Finch

    Finch Funnier in Enochian Super Moderator

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    Thanks for the fantabulous reviews everyone. :D :D

    Anni, like I always say, you can't spell 'genius' without 'Geni' but...Well, it's a fact. :lol: Still, there are better authors than me in here.

    *passes Carly cookies* I hope you have your boots on! :D

    bird_of_flame, even if he was in the Boy Scouts, I don't think he did very well...He was probably kicked out, lol. Aw, I can imagine little Eric running after the...Man Scout leader man (*lifts brow*) because he thought he was a bear. :p

    I'll try to get another chapter up before I leave this afternoon, but if not, keep checking back!
     
  5. Hunter

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    Eric said "boy scouts armor". *shrugs* Whatever. At least we know he KNEW how to sew sometime in his life. :lol:

    Ooo yay! Update soon! Looking forward to it Geni! :D
     
  6. Finch

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    I'm looking forward to it too. :p

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    Katie's room, Hummerhome, 2pm

    Anni: *walks in* Can we talk?

    Katie: Sure.

    Anni: *sits down* You probably heard the argument, right?

    Katie: Yeah.

    Anni: I'm sorry, I didn't mean to have everyone hear that.

    Katie: You get angry. You're human.

    Anni: Yeah. Look, this whole thing needs to stop.

    Katie: I know. I was an idiot. I'm really sorry. He married you, we've been over for years.

    Anni: I'm glad you finally realized that.

    Katie: I just couldn't seem to let go. I mean, he's really all I have.

    Anni: Hey, you have all of us.

    Katie: Sometimes it doesn't feel like it. I mean, I really feel comfortable around him, y'know?

    Anni: I know.

    Katie: I just thought that maybe if I held onto him, that I wouldn't have to do anything on my own anymore.

    Anni: You're not alone.

    Katie: Yeah Horatio keeps telling me that.

    Anni: He's usually right.

    Katie: Of course he is. If he wasn't right, his name wouldn't be Horatio.

    Anni: *laughs* Yeah.

    Katie: Look, we've been friends for a long time. I don't want to lose a friend over something so stupid as what I've been doing.

    Anni: Well you did shoot me.

    Katie: Yeah I know.

    Anni: You know, I was going to come up here and yell, scream, throw things, but...What's it going to solve? Nothing.

    Katie: So why bother coming up here?

    Anni: Because the common denominators left are us.

    Katie: *nods*

    Anni: *hugs Katie* I forgive you.

    Katie: *lifts brow*

    Anni: *lets go* There.

    Katie: *starts to cry*

    Anni: What? What did I do?

    Katie: *crying* No one ever forgives me.

    Anni: *laughs*

    TBC...............
     
  7. Hunter

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    Aww...*starts tearing up* "No one ever forgives me." Aw MAN that's actually touching!! :( *grabs kleenx* Nice one Geni.

    *sigh* So do Anni and Katie have a truce now? Katie's forgivin now, so i guess so. :) Finally. I have a feeling we won't get any bad drastic things from Katie soon. Eh maybe we will. It's Katie.

    By the way, what happened to the 40 000 ring Speed got for Katie in thread...2? I forget. She still have it or what?

    Anyways, thanks for the update Geni. Nice way to wrap up my day. :D
     
  8. speedmonkey2

    speedmonkey2 Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Hahaha its true isn't it. No one ever forgives me. They just call me insane and leave it at that.

    Seriously no throwing vases? No kicking, scratching, pinchin, slapping, calling eachother a biatch? Ah man. Oh well I suppose an 'I forgive you' and a hug is ok.

    But did I really mean what I said? Or was it just a ploy to get Anni off RT Katie's back. Because I don't think some one can just shut off there feelings like that. *snaps*

    Anyways, I'm intrigued. (ohhh big word. lol sorry) Update soon please!
     
  9. calleighspeedle

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    Geni, that chapter was fab, very touching. It makes me wonder just how long this so called truce is going to last though. I mean if I were married to Speed (I can only dream) if another woman were to have the feelings towards him that Katie still has for him, I would tear her apart. It's very clear that Katie is still in love with him so how long is it going to be before both of their feelings take over? because Speed is still in love with her and he knows it deep down.

    update soon Geni :D
     
  10. cainesugar

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    So sweet, Geni. No matter how short it was that was a great chapter, the tension has been somewhat resolved, and it was very touching. So glad Anni and Katie are friends again, they're great as friends.

    Aww. poor Katie. No one ever forgives her. *raises hand* I forgive you, Katie! You shot me and I forgive you! *hugs* Thanks Geni, can't wait for more!
     
  11. CSI_Trainee

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    awww i am glad that anni was able to forgive katie... it will hopefully make things so much better... gosh I love the RT great to get away from RL.... great work as always geni lol.... i was re-reading the fisrt RT again and I laughed so hard I almost fell off the chair.... ah good times good times.
     
  12. Anni Grey

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    Aw... that was so awesome! Just when did RT Anni grow up? :lol: I agree, a truce was in order, and gladly, it happened just the way it should. I have to admit, I teared up at the entire exchange, but this got me the most:


    Compassion is my middle name! ;)

    As always, Geni, fantastic!
     
  13. that_girl1

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    i laughed when Katie said
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  14. Finch

    Finch Funnier in Enochian Super Moderator

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    Hee. Thanks for the reviews. :D

    ************

    Miami, three weeks later

    Ryan: *looking at folder*

    Tripp: *walks over* New case?

    Ryan: Old case.

    Tripp: What about?

    Ryan: One of the first cases that I worked solo, this guy, Barry Mendez was a suspect in the murder of his wife. Apparently whoever it was, walked up, shot her in the head and walked away. She'd just come home from grocery shopping.

    Tripp: Why's it re-opened.

    Ryan: His lawyer said PD found new evidence at the wife's house.

    Tripp: They were divorced?

    Ryan: *shakes head* She worked in a different county so she bought a house there.

    Tripp: What's this new evidence?

    Ryan: Burned clothing with trace amounts of blood.

    Tripp: Maybe the guy doused his clothes after shooting his wife.

    Ryan: Clothes belong to a woman.

    Tripp: How can you tell?

    Ryan: It was remenants of a skirt and low-cut top.

    Tripp: Oh.

    Ryan: I'm supposed to be meeting with the prosecuter in the case *looks at watch* Right about...*looks across room*

    Tripp: Isn't that Lori?

    Ryan: Excuse me. *walks away*

    Near elevator

    Ryan: No more undercover work?

    Lori: I applied in Miami before I left.

    Ryan: Applied for what?

    Lori: Did I ever mention I spent three years in law school after I left the first time?

    Ryan: You were a lawyer with the foreign affairs department.

    Lori: I couldn't divulge that information but I'm no longer working there so, yes I was.

    Ryan: Why are you here.

    Lori: I'm assigned to the Mendez case. Where's your friend Lilly?

    Ryan: I don't know. I haven't seen her in almost a month.

    Lori: She skipped out on you, that's classy.

    Ryan: I'm supposed to be meeting with you on this case.

    Lori: Mhm. I need all the evidence PD collected.

    Ryan: Why?

    Lori: So I can make my case. It is standard practice to get a hold of the CSI in a case, correct?

    Ryan: In court.

    Lori: I want the information.

    Ryan: You'll have to wait until trial.

    Lori: Just tell me what was found.

    Ryan: Burned fabric.

    Lori: Where was it found?

    Ryan: That's none of your business.

    Lori: You'd tell a defense lawyer.

    Ryan: ....Behind the house under the barbeque.

    Lori: Good. I want to see it.

    Ryan: You'll see it at trial.

    Lori: No, I want to see it right now.

    Ryan: *frowns* Trial.

    Lori: Now.

    Ryan: Are you being an ass because you left, or are you always like this?

    Lori: *laughs* Ryan, learn to let things go. Stay professional for your sake, please.

    Ryan: Fine.

    Lori: May I please see the evidence?

    Ryan: The guy's innocent.

    Lori: I'm afraid you can't make that determination.

    Ryan: The clothing is from a woman.

    Lori: Maybe the guy likes to play dress-up.

    Ryan: You ever think of maybe joining IAB? They'd love you.

    Lori: I don't want to be a cop.

    Ryan: Believe me, they're far from cops.

    Speed: *walks over* Something wrong here?

    Ryan: Look who's back.

    Speed: Well the beauty of being a higher rank than you is I get aprised of everything first.

    Ryan: *rolls eyes*

    Speed: So what's the problem?

    Lori: Ryan here was just about to show me to the evidence.

    Ryan: And I told her to wait until the trial.

    Speed: Both sides of the table get to see the evidence against the accused whether it's defense or prosecution.

    Lori: *smiles*

    Speed: When we're finished with it.

    Lori: *smile fades*

    Speed: Take a number.

    Lori: *frowns*

    Speed: *walks away*

    Ryan: Looks like he's got the whole 'professional' thing down to a science.

    Lori: If there's one thing you should know about me is I don't lose so cool your heels.

    Ryan: Good luck on the case.

    Lori: *looks down hall*

    Ryan: *steps in front of Lori* Get back in the elevator and leave the building.

    Lori: Mind if I speak to your boss for a minute?

    Ryan: Get a visitor pass.

    Lori: *nods*

    Halls

    Lori: *hands over folder* Guy has a history of assault and battery. Wife claims he was dangerous, which is why she bought the second house in a different county. She had a restraining order out on him two years ago which was lifted because they had resolved their conflict, so he says.

    Speed: You talk to the family?

    Lori: I spoke to officers who responded to several domestic disputes in the area, all related to Mendez.

    Speed: What do you want me to do about it?

    Lori: Shadow Wolfe.

    Speed: It's his case.

    Lori: I want the evidence processed properly.

    Speed: He is just as capable as I am.

    Lori: *stops walking* A murderer is going to be out on the streets by supper time while CSI is taking their time processing pieces of fabric found under a barbeque.

    Speed: You wanted it done properly.

    Lori: Ever find the murder weapon?

    Speed: No.

    Lori: *hands over paper* Mendez registered a .45 last December. The shot that killed his wife was a .45 calibre gun. Interesting that a warrant was never served on his house.

    Speed: The guy confessed.

    Lori: Exactly. So why's he getting out?

    Speed: We found new evidence to suggest a third party was there and we don't have a murder weapon.

    Lori: Because CSI stopped looking after he signed the confession.

    Speed: Yeah.

    Lori: He killed his wife.

    Speed: I don't have the luxury of agreeing or disagreeing with you.

    Lori: *shakes head*

    Speed: *reading folder*

    Lori: *crosses arms*

    Speed: *flips page*

    Lori: You finished?

    Speed: Patience isn't exactly one of your virtues, is it?

    Lori: *grabs folder*

    Speed: *looks at Lori*

    Lori: ...

    Speed: You're lucky mine is.

    Lori: *stares at Speed*

    Speed: Don't ever do that again.

    Lori: Yes sir.

    Speed: Go see Wolfe about the case. *walks away*

    Lori: *angry sigh*

    TBC...............
     
  15. that_girl1

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    yay! Lori's back!:)
     
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