Here's part 2!! Yay!! Hope it's worth the wait, and it's fitting for the frame of discussion we've been in at the DuCaine thread! You'll see!! You're gonna love this! Songs belong to their artists, Sixpence None the Richer and Marvin Gaye respectively, no infringement intended. Enjoy!! Fade in: (Shot of Miami. Cue music of "Kiss Me".) Cut to: (Shot of the locker-room.) Fade in: (Shot of Calleigh brushing her hair. She looks in her compact mirror, smiling.) Kiss me, out of the bearded barley Lightly, beside the green, green grass (She puts on her lip-gloss, making kissy faces, and biting her lip shyly.) Swing, swing, swing the spinning step You wear those shoes and I will wear that dress Cut to: (Shot of a bedroom, and pan to Horatio standing in front of a full-length mirror, fixing his tie.) Oh, kiss me beneath the milky twilight Lead me out on the moonlit floor (He looks in the mirror, takes a breath and smiles.) Lift your open hand Strike up the band and make the fireflies Dance silver moon’s sparkling, so kiss me Cut to: (Calleigh walking out to her car. Her door shuts with the drum beat.) Kiss me down by the broken tree house Swing me upon its hanging tire Cut to: (Horatio taking dinner out of the oven.) He glances up at the clock that reads 8:20. He smiles.) Bring, bring, bring your flowered hat We’ll take the trail marked on your father’s map Cut to: (Calleigh in her car, tapping her fingers to a beat on the steering wheel.) Oh, kiss me beneath the milky twilight Lead me out on the moonlit floor (She purses her lips, taking in a breath. She giggles.) Lift your open hand (Camera moves out of the car, to a crane shot of Calleigh driving along the road.) Strike up the band and make the fireflies Dance silver moon’s sparkling Cut to: (Horatio lighting candles around the room.) So kiss me (During the instrumental break, Horatio waltzes around, spinning about and laughing. Camera follows Horatio as he puts the finishing touches to dinner.) Kiss me beneath the milky twilight Lead me out on the moonlit floor Cut to: (Calleigh pulling up in front of Horatio's house. She fixes her hair in the mirror.) Lift your open hand Strike up the band and make the fireflies Dance silver moon’s sparkling (Camera focus in on her eyes in the mirror.) So kiss me Cut to: (Horatio lighting the candles on the dinner-table.) So kiss me Cut to: (Calleigh walking up to the door and knocking.) So kiss me Cut to: (Horatio looking up. He walks up to the door.) So kiss me (Horatio opens the door, just as the music ends.) Cut to: (Shot of Calleigh from behind as Horatio opens the door.) HORATIO: Hi, Cal. CALLEIGH: Hey, H. (They laugh.) HORATIO: Come on in. CALLEIGH: Thank you. (She steps in, and Horatio shuts the door.) Cut to: (Shot of camera panning around the room, full of candles.) Cut to: (Calleigh putting her hands to her face with joy.) CALLEIGH: Oh, Horatio! It's beautiful! HORATIO: I thought you'd like it... (He takes her hand.) Come on. (He leads her to the table. She puts her hand to her heart. She turns to look at him.) CALLEIGH: Is this the surprise you were telling me about? (Horatio shakes his head.) HORATIO: This is part one. (Calleigh opens her mouth in protest, but closes it again. They sit down. Various dissolves of them talking and eating, and the clinking of wine glasses.) Short-time jump to: (Calleigh and Horatio finishing up. Horatio takes their plates, as Calleigh gazes into the candlelight. Horatio walks over to her, and stands behind her chair. Calleigh looks to her left, trying to watch him. Horatio gently puts his hands on her shoulders, and starts massaging her. Calleigh gives a sigh, leaning her head back.) HORATIO: Rough day? CALLEIGH: Hmm, yeah. I just wanted to scream... I got through it with the thought that I was seeing you tonight... (Horatio smiles, his hands moving to the back of her neck) HORATIO: Really? That's the same with me. Feel better? CALLEIGH: (sighing) Mmm, much better. (She opens her eyes, and look up at him.) You're really spoiling me... HORATIO: (leaning over her.) You ain't seen nothing yet. (Calleigh laughs. Horatio takes her hand, and leads her towarsds and up the stairs.) HORATIO: Can you close your eyes? (Calleigh looks at him, like 'no way!') Please... it's part of your surprise. (Calleigh rolls her eyes, and begrudgingly closes them. Horatio takes her hands, leading her down the hall. They go into a bedroom.) CALLEIGH: Can I open them now? HORATIO: No, no... not yet. (He leads her to the end of the bed.) Wait here. (He goes to his wardrobe, and takes out a clothes hanger. Camera close-up of Horatio holding a pair of leather chaps. He grins, trying to conceal his glee.) CALLEIGH: Horatio, are you laughing at me?! HORATIO: (chuckling) No, of course not! Excuse me a minute, I'm just going to use the bathroom. CALLEIGH: What! And me standing here with my eyes closed!? You are being so mysterious, and I won't stand for... (While she's speaking, Horatio creeps past, and goes into the bathroom.) CALLEIGH:... can I open my eyes now? HORATIO: (inside the bathroom) No, not yet. Just a little while longer... CALLEIGH: Horatio, this had better beabsolutely fantastic if you've kept me waiting all day... (Camera pans out of the room.) CALLEIGH: (v.o) You sure keep the suspense going... (Camera pans down the stairs.) CALLEIGHv.o) Now can I open them? (Camera pans outside. Sound of door opening.) HORATIO: Okay... now you can... (Silence for several seconds. Camera focuses in on the house from the outside.) (From inside) CALLEIGH: Oh my Lord!! Horatio!!! HORATIO: Well, you once said, 'Leather chaps... and nothing else...' CALLEIGH: What else can I say except, "Hellooo Handsome!!' (Cue music of 'Let's Get It On'. Camera moves away from the house, amid laughter and a creak of bedsprings.) I've been really tryin', baby Tryin' to hold back this feelin' for so long And if you feel like I feel, baby Then come on, oh come on CALLEIGH: Oh, Horatio! You animal!! Let's get it on, oh baby Let's get it on Let's love, baby Let's get it on Sugar, let's get it on (Music plays out.) (FADE TO BLACK.) Come on, I had to!! :lol: It just came to me!! *blush* *girly giggles* Just tell me what you think!! Be gentle!! :lol: :lol:
I soooo wish this wasn't PG-13! *giggles insanely* Awesome! LEATHER CHAPS! *squee* Thank you! Upsate sooon.
oooohh......... :devil: ^^LEATHER CHAPS! yess! oh my god....... I am so happy now, if I end up writing stuff about a very sexy .... *dozes off* whoops sorry about that! Like I said earlier, if I end up writing and/or sketching horatio in nothing but leather chaps....... I'm gonna get in so much trouble :lol:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! Emerald you are killing me and I really mean that! I have a heart condition and my heart is going- Pitter Patter right now! Way too fast right now!!!!!! I went and canceled my Docs appt today. Now if I would have known I was going to be reading this, well, I WOULD HAVE WENT!!! :devil: :devil: :devil: :devil: AWESOME, I LOVED IT! You are amazing my friend and yes I do understand the bit where... You just had to do it. :devil: I'm glad it was you and not me! :devil: :lol: :lol: :lol: Thanks for the huge smile on my face right now!!! HCrazy
EXCELLENT!!! I loved how it started out all cute with the classic Sixpence song, then it got oh so kinky with the chaps. You are fantastic!!!
Oh My GOD!! I laughed so loud when the Chaps were mentioned. This line quite killed me CALLEIGH: Oh, Horatio! You animal!! I had vivid images of this scene unfolding. Personally I own a pair of chaps and they are so fun. I just love the way you wrote this. I am gonna have to read all these now. Emerald, you do a really good job writing in the script style. Nice job!! I was wondering if you could email me the special V Day story you wrote? That would be GREAT. Email * parrot_feathers@yahoo.com. THANKS!! The Good Rebecca
Here's part 3! And sorry for killing you, HCrazy!! I didn't meant it! I will give a warning next time!! :lol: Thank you again to everyone for the amazing support! Enjoy!! [INT - CRIMELAB - EVENING] Fade in: (Shot of Horatio walking through the lab, a tape recorder in his hand. He walks briskly, really smiling. Horatio laughs to himself quietly.) Cut to: (Calleigh in the break-room, stirring coffee as she writes down various notes on her report. She sits with her back to the door. Her eyes nearly close, but she takes a quick drink of coffee. Camera focuses in on her as she takes a sip. Suddenly, 'that' song starts playing, and Calleigh nearly sprays her coffee. She puts down her mug, wiping away coffee trails from her mouth, giggling madly.) CALLEIGH: (mockingly) Oh no!!! Cut to: (Horatio holding the tape player, his eybrows raised and a massive smile on his face.) HORATIO: Oh yes!! Cut to: (Calleigh laughing, covering her eyes. Horatio walks over, and puts the tape player on the table next to her. He stands behind her, looking down over her.) CALLEIGH: Horatio, we are at work... HORATIO: Everyone's gone, and graveyard shift's not due for another half hour... we have time alone... (Calleigh puts her face in her hands in mock embarassement.) CALLEIGH: Point taken... I don't think I'll ever get used to such special treatment... (Horatio leans in to her left, his hands on either side of her on the table.) HORATIO: You deserve it... (He whispers this in her ear. She laughs, turning to face him, but he moves to her right.) CALLEIGH: Quit moving, let me look at you. HORATIO: I'm looking at you... from every angle... you're beautiful... (He kisses her hair. She smiles.) CALLEIGH: Oh, you're a big ol' teddy-bear! (Horatio chuckles.) HORATIO: Well, you did say I was an 'animal' last night... (Calleigh whips her head around to her right, but Horatio's looking over her head now.) CALLEIGH: You were! I found myself thinking, 'Ooohh, tiger! Rarr...' (Horatio leans in over her. She looks up, meeting his eyes.) HORATIO: I'll take that as a compliment... (She sighs happily. He presses a kiss to her forehead.) HORATIO: Now... (He turns her chair around to face him.) Up for a dance? (Calleigh's eyes widen, her smile broadening.) CALLEIGH: Well... in a private setting, I'd jump at the chance, but... HORATIO: But what? There's no one... CALLEIGH: ... here, I know. But I... (Horatio looks at her intently.) Well... (She pulls on his loosened tie.) A little closeness never hurt anyone... (Horatio takes her hands, pulling her up and out of her chair. Calleigh automatically wraps her arms around Horatio's neck, and Horatio wraps his arms around Calleigh's waist. They stand there for a minute, the song still playing. Calleigh sighs contentedly.) CALLEIGH: You know... I'm never going to stop smiling whenever I hear this song. HORATIO: Hmmm, me either. (Calleigh looks up at him.) CALLEIGH: Is this always your choice of track when setting the mood? (Horatio chuckles.) HORATIO: No, actually. It was always one of those Caruso arias or stuff like that... That never, quite frankly, set the mood I was hoping for... (Calleigh laughs, dropping her head to his chest, her shoulders shaking with laughter.) No, this song's for you. (He strokes her hair. He leans in and whispers something to Calleigh. She snaps her head up , her eyes open wide in disbelief. She gives a mock gasp of shock.) CALLEIGH: Horatio Caine!! (He raises an eyebrow, smiling.) You've got a mouth on you... I am so sorry, but I'll have to decline... (She makes as if to pull away, but Horatio gently pulls her back to him. She shakes her head, still smiling.) CALLEIGH: Try all you might, Handsome, no dice. You've coaxed me this far, and there's nothing you can do... (He suddenly dips, leaning close to her face. Calleigh exhales slowly, her arms around his neck.) You're smooth... really smooth. But all the... (Horatio raises her back up, and now they're inches apart.) CALLEIGH: All the smooth moves and smooth talk in the world couldn't convince me otherwise... at least, not at work. (Horatio sighs in defeat, dropping his head to her shoulder.) CALLEIGH: You can't win 'em all. (Horatio looks up.) HORATIO: I did win something today... (He puts his hand on her cheek.) I saw you smile... (Calleigh's smile grows bigger.) CALLEIGH: Now, I've got so much paperwork, it's scary, so you and your friend Marvin skidaddle, ya hear? (Horatio laughs shutting off the tape player.) You know, I might return the favour and fulfill your fantasy, Horatio. (Horatio stops at the door, and turns back to her.) HORATIO: You do, Calleigh... everyday you wear black. (Calleigh smiles.) CALLEIGH: Well, you know when I wear all-black... (She steps up close to him, leaning close to him against the door and whispering.) I wear 'all'... black. (She stares up at him, smirking devilishly Horatio leans closer to her.) HORATIO: I... will remember that. CALLEIGH: You do that... and I... (She pulls at his tie.) Will remember last night for all my life, Handsome. You can count on that. (Horatio nods, giving her a quick kiss. They share one last look, before they turn away from each other. Horatio leaves the room, heading down the corridor, and Calleigh returns to her coffee.) (Cue music of 'Let's Get It On'.) Cut to: (Horatio humming the song in his office.) Cut to: (Calleigh humming the song in the break-room.) Cut to: (Split-screen, as Horatio and Calleigh dancing, singing, and laughing.) Let's get it on, oh baby Let's get it on Let's love, baby Let's get it on Sugar, let's get it on (FADE TO BLACK.) There will be an update hopefully sometime next weekend. I'll be going off-line for an extended break, but I'll be writing like mad!! DUCAINE FOREVER!!
:lol: I love this so much... :devil: I am so gonna be thinking about this all day when I go to school