Shattered Dreams (GSR)

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  1. Ashes86

    Ashes86 Dead on Arrival

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    I just started reading this today and I have to say it is one of the best I have ever read! This is so good. I can't wait for the next chapter!
     
  2. ilvelvegrissom

    ilvelvegrissom Hit and Run

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    LOL... Bet you say that about everyones storys!!! :)
    Only kidding!
    Thanks a million, It means alot!!!!

    Update soon!! :)

    XxxxxxxxX
     
  3. Ashes86

    Ashes86 Dead on Arrival

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    I really rarely respond to stories so that is a MAJOR compliment. Please update soon. I love it.
     
  4. SA_Kate_937

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    That was an awesomely good chapter and I am begging you *falls down on knees* to carry on. :p

    Thanks Kate. :)
     
  5. ilvelvegrissom

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    awwwww thanks, sure will...!!!!
    very soon!!!
    XxxxxxxxxxX
     
  6. CSIWillows

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    Wow! What an awsome story, I can't wait for more!
     
  7. ilvelvegrissom

    ilvelvegrissom Hit and Run

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    Update For Kate........... Well for all my loyal readers actually!!!!!!!!
    I'm so glad you guys like it, hope this lives up to your
    standards.... Its all for you guys.. XxxxxxxxxxxxxX




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    'Sara, he began... I've been thinking about you all day,
    I do that so often it seems,
    but I just can't help it,
    you're in every one of our dreams.....'

    'I think meeting you was fate, it was choice becoming your friend...
    This relationship between us,
    I really hope it will never end.. But when it came
    to falling in Love, that was way beyond my control....
    There is no way to stop
    all these feelings deep inside my soul....
    he paused and then started again'


    'I can't explain how much I love you, no matter how long I try...
    At night, I close my eyes, and in my dreams all I see is you,
    My only regret is that these dreams have not yet come true,
    My deepest wish is that they soon will be......'

    'I love you, without know how, or why, from where... For once I am listening to
    my heart and it is saying you.... I believe my heart and it believes in you......'
    If you let me love you, I promise to give you all I have to give, I'd do anything
    for you as long as I live.....'

    'But even though "I love you" can't express the depth of my feelings for you,
    I hope you now know what is in my heart....
    Because loving you means more
    to me than anything in the world and it always will....'

    He paused again, looking at Sara, She hung her head - avoiding his eyes....

    Stepping close to her, he reached out and gently tilted her face up to look him in the eye,
    her eyes were breaming with unshed tears,
    and as he watched they began to silently slid down her cheeks, he pulled her into a tight embrace,
    not knowing what to say, after speaking so much,
    he now had no idea what to say...

    Sara had her face buried in his chest, shaking with sobs...

    'Sara, I am so sorry, I didn't mean to upset you, I swear its the last thing
    I wanted to do....I'm very sorry....'

    She pulled away, but only slightly, so they were still in the circle of each others
    arms, she slowly looked up in the eye, his soft with love, hers glistening with
    tears, and then finally she spoke.....

    'It's okay, their tears of happiness, I swear....She said softly...

    He felt giddy with joy... 'You look so beautiful right now..'

    She blushed... 'Stop it'

    'It's true.....'I hope that one day you'll come realize just how perfect you are when seen through my eyes...'

    'Sara, what happens to us in the future I just want you to know, everyday we are together is the greatest
    day of my life.....I will always be yours....'

    'Shhh, Sara gently silenced him...

    But he started again, 'I miss you when you're not around, every time you walk away from me,
    it breaks my heart a little.....'

    This time she silenced him with a kiss........
    A kiss that started off gentle and barely touching
    and then become more intense....
    She moved even closer and wound her arms around him,
    as he pulled her even closer.....



    And In That Moment Together, They Found Heaven.........




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  8. MacsGirlMel

    MacsGirlMel Mac's Personal Assistant

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    awwwww *hugs them*
     
  9. ilvelvegrissom

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    After what felt like Forever.... They pulled away, just to breath,
    both were breaming with Love....
    Happiness flowing from them....

    Sara spoke, her voice shaking with emotion....
    'I want the world to know just how adorable,
    loving and dependable
    you are...
    How strong yet fragile your heart is...
    How brave yet vulnerable...
    How wonderful a friend...
    You are the only person who can make me laugh
    or cry just by looking at me,
    and you make me feel like I could conquer the
    World, and for you I would....
    You are my knight in shining armor,
    my soul mate, my best friend and
    the most beautiful man I know.......'

    'You have something inside you,
    something beautiful and strong...
    Kindness, that's what I see when I look at you,
    that's what everyone sees, Kindness...
    You are the most forgiving and caring man I know.........
    God is with you, he must be,
    for you are the closest thing to an
    Angel I've ever seen......'
    Her voice, was a small bit stronger now
    but still soft and sweet........

    'It's impossible to grasp just how powerful love is,
    at the same time
    it can give you something to live for
    and something you'd die for,
    it can sustain us through trying times,
    or motivate us to do
    extraordinary things........

    When I think if you and all that love for you,
    you make me feel like I could do anything...
    And I would, do anything
    for you, My love...........'

    She smiled the most beautiful smile he'd ever seen.......

    'My precious darling, I love you so...
    I'm proud to know you,
    blessed to love you,
    unworthy to be loved by you,
    and to be your friend and lover,
    no words under Heaven could ever describe...........


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  10. SA_Kate_937

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    Aww, that is soo sweet! Thank you for updating for me!!

    I seriously could not handle the cliffhanger. But, I took a breath and waited patiently. :p

    I really loved the last two chapters, they were soo perfect....

    Keep up the great fic writing ilvelvegrissom, it seriously rocks.

    Kate. :)
     
  11. ilvelvegrissom

    ilvelvegrissom Hit and Run

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    *beams with pride*
    I'm so glad u like it..... :)

    No idea where to go with it now but
    hopefully I'll think of something.......!

    Oh I'm so happy you like it!!*does little happy dance*
    Thx!!

    XxxxxxxxxxX Shevs :)
     
  12. MacsGirlMel

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    *piles on more hugs* awwww :) *gets warm fuzzy*
     
  13. ilvelvegrissom

    ilvelvegrissom Hit and Run

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    awwww thank u so so so much!!!!

    you have no idea how happy I am
    that you like it so much!!!! *big bear hugs* XxxxX
     
  14. CSIWillows

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    WOW! You are like the World's best GSR fan fic writer EVER!!!! I absolutely love the story!!!!
     
  15. ilvelvegrissom

    ilvelvegrissom Hit and Run

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    Awwww thx! You're too sweet!!!*beams with pride*

    It's only cause I'm soooooo obsessed
    with them myself!!!!!!!!!! :) :)

    New season starts tomorrow!!!!!
    Yippieeeeeeeeee! Can.Not.Wait!!!!
    *starts hugging random strangers*

    XxxxxxxxxxxxxxxX
     

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