CSI:Miami Road Trip 6: One Question. Are We There Yet?

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  1. Finch

    Finch Funnier in Enochian Super Moderator

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    Well you know, technically he didn't cheat because: (and here's where I start making lists)

    1. I didn't get into the details of what they actually did.
    2. He hadn't met Katie yet.
    3. She broke up with him anyway.
    4. Uh...The kid isn't his so no worries.

    :lol:

    SO anyway that's my list of events for the day! I'll have more chapters soon. And uh, if I'm getting into too many Speed storylines, just tell me to cut it out. :lol: ...Don't choke on anymore froot loops. :p
     
  2. Wyoming

    Wyoming Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    hmmmmmmmm Tim cheated again? When did this happen? lol I'm having timeline problems, I'm a little confused. But awww I love how Tim was all cute and......husband-like with Katie, then Lori had to go ruin it but YAY! she's going to school! Somehow I have a feeling that she's going to become a CSI when she grows up, which I think is cute! Taking after her mommy and dadddy lol. Teague is cute too, even if he doesn't like Speed and thinks he's stupid lol. I wonder how long it's going to be before he asks who his father is. We'll just have to wait and see! And poor Carly, she'll get her ring outta there soon enough lol. Great updates Geni, you always do such an amazing job :D
     
  3. Finch

    Finch Funnier in Enochian Super Moderator

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    *coughs* He didn't cheat. *cough* :p

    Love Is On The Run

    Hummerhome, CSI Garage, 2 days later

    Carly: What are you doing in here?

    Delko: Fixing the pipes.

    Carly: ..The pipes?

    Delko: The pipes.

    Carly: Why?

    Delko: Because they need to be fixed.

    Carly: Are we leaving or something?

    Delko: No.

    Carly: So you're fixing the pipes for nothing.

    Delko: Yeah I'm good at that kind of thing. That and plumbing.

    Carly: Oh really. I have a job for you.

    Delko: What is it?

    Carly: Anni dropped my ring down the toilet and flushed it.

    Delko: So?

    Carly: So I've been trying to get it out for two days.

    Delko: Call a plumber.

    Carly: That costs money.

    Delko: So does a new ring.

    Carly: Can you just help me?

    Delko: Sorry I have to get this done.

    Carly: We're not even going anywhere.

    Delko: Sorry.

    Carly: Ugh. *walks away*

    Jess: *runs out* Is she gone?

    Delko: Yeah.

    Jess: *pulls Delko into Hummerhome*

    Delko: *slams door*

    Trace lab

    Carly: *walks in, wraps arms around Speed* Hey brother-in-law.

    Speed: *doing paperwork* What do you want and how much is it going to cost?

    Carly: I need a favor.

    Speed: What kind of favor?

    Carly: You know how it's always gotta be the toilet?

    Speed: Yeah.

    Carly: I have a job for you.

    Speed: No.

    Carly: *lets go* Oh come on.

    Speed: No.

    Carly: If Josh finds out Anni lost my ring he'll kill me.

    Speed: No he won't.

    Carly: How would you know?

    Speed: *frowns*

    Carly: Okay fine. But please? I promise I won't ever ask for anything else.

    Speed: It's your problem. I'm not going to rip apart the women's washroom just because Anni's stupid.

    Carly: But you're...My favorite brother-in-law....

    Speed: I'm your only brother-in-law.

    Carly: Please Timmy? I won't ask for ANYTHING ever again.

    Speed: *sigh* Fine.

    Carly: *smiles* Thank you. *runs out*

    Atrium

    JC: Horatio.

    Horatio: *turns around*

    JC: I'm sorry I haven't been here in a few days.

    Horatio: It's okay.

    JC: I've just needed some time for myself.

    Horatio: Everything okay?

    JC: *smiles* It is now.

    Horatio: Good. I've been meaning to ask you to dinner but you weren't answering your phone.

    JC: I'm sorry.

    Horatio: No problem.

    JC: *hugs Horatio*

    Horatio: *lifts brow* You sure you're alright?

    JC: Yeah. I've just missed you.

    Horatio: I've missed you too.

    JC: *hugs tighter*

    Miami, School, classroom

    Lori: *writing things down*

    Ash: *leans over* Hey you're new?

    Lori: Obviously.

    Ash: I'm Ashton.

    Lori: *frowns*

    Ash: ...Not Kutcher.

    Lori: I don't know who that is.

    Ash: *nods* And do you have a name?

    Lori: Yeah.

    Ash: What is it?

    Lori: I'm trying to listen to the teacher.

    Ash: Interesting name.

    Lori: I know you probably think you're very funny but I don't really care.

    Ash: Ouch. You don't seem like you give very many guys the time of day.

    Lori: *writing things down*

    Ash: You must not know a lot of people around here. Maybe at lunch I could give you a tour.

    Lori: *looks at Ash* Look, I'm trying to sit here and use my brain for something other than gossiping at dances and cheering at football games so please leave me alone.

    Ash: No problem. Sorry I asked.

    Lori: *rolls eyes*

    Girls at other side of the class look at Lori, and start giggling and whispering amongst each other

    Lori: *frowns*

    Jennifer: *whispers* Hey I heard you're from Columbia.

    Lori: Yeah.

    Jennifer: Did you guys have like Gaps and Versace stores there?

    Lori: What?

    Jennifer: Fashion.

    Lori: No.

    Jennifer: Whoa so you like lived in like the stone ages.

    Lori: Well um, we like at least had like, brains in the stone ages.

    Jennifer: Ugh. *goes back to gossiping*

    Bell rings

    Teacher: Tomorrow we're having a test so study tonight and don't forget to read pages 16 to 34.

    Halls

    Lori: *walks up to locker*

    Bill: *walks by* Hey new girl!

    Lori: *looks up*

    Bill: *knocks books out of Lori's hands*

    Lori: What's your problem!

    Bill: Go back to Combobia! *laughs walks away with a bunch of guys*

    Lori: *angry sigh*

    Jennifer: Hey girls, look it's the girl from the stone ages!

    Girls laugh

    Jennifer: I bet you find Miami really..Groovy.

    Lori: Do you realize you sound like an idiot or have you always been that way?

    Jennifer: Oh look how cute she is! Do. You. Speaky. English?

    Lori: I was just speaking english.

    Jennifer: Hey do you keep people as pets in Columbia?

    Lori: *shakes head* I have to go now.

    Jennifer: Oh lunch can wait. I mean, you must be really used to thousands of people in one place trying to find food. *laughs*

    Girls: *laugh*

    Lori: *glares*

    Jennifer: You should really wear something a little more...In. I mean, those jeans with that shirt? I'm sorry honey but no guy would ever be interested in datin' you. Come on girls, I'm starting to feel out of style just standing near her. *walks away*

    Girls: *follow*

    Lori: *bangs head on locker*

    Cafeteria. People everywhere, cheerleaders cheering, jocks throwing footballs at each other, nerds sitting alone, goths giving everyone death stares, teachers mingling amongst each other...

    Lori: *looks around*

    Bill: *smacks into Lori* WHOA! I didn't see ya there! You should be more careful where you walk, you could have killed me. *walks away*

    Lori: *frowns*

    Girl: *points* Look at her, she's so...Weird.

    Girl2: I know it's like she's some kind of animal.

    Girl3: Her teeth can't actually be that perfect. I bet she stole them off of a zebra or something.

    Girls: *laughs*

    Girl2: And I bet her hair's from the zebra too.

    Girl1: *slaps girl2* Zebras don't have blonde hair stupid. They have brown hair like all the other mammals.

    Lori: *looks down at hair*

    Girl3: I bet she cleans her clothes in the river.

    Girl2: A dirty river.

    Girl: With toads and leeches.

    Girl3: And look at those green eyes. Uh who does she think she's trying to be? Carmen Electra?

    Girl2: Carmen doesn't have green eyes.

    Girl3: Yes she does. I would know. She's my idol.

    Girl2: I still don't believe you.

    Girl3: *gasp* I cannot believe you just dissed Carmen.

    Jennifer: *spills soda all over Lori* OH no..

    Lori: *looks down at clothes*

    Jennifer: I'm sorry I must have tripped.

    People around start laughing

    Jennifer: *smiling*

    Lori: *looks around*

    Jennifer: I sure hope you can get that out. I wouldn't want to be responsible for ruining...That. *walks away*

    Lori: *swallows*

    Girl2: Aw is the baby gonna cry?

    Girl3: That is like sooo last season.

    Girl2: Yeah just like what she's wearing. *starts laughing*

    Girl3: *starts laughing*

    Lori: *runs away*

    Girl2: Look at her go. Just like the Zebra she was meant to be.

    Lockers

    Lori: *sitting on floor, crying*

    Ash: *walks over* Hey you're not in the cafeteria?

    Lori: What you going to make fun of me too?

    Ash: No. I was in the lab.

    Lori: Lab?

    Ash: Chemistry. I'm tutoring Juniors for extra credits.

    Lori: *nods*

    Ash: What happened?

    Lori: How do you survive here?

    Ash: Well it's kind of a jungle around here most of the time.

    Lori: *frowns*

    Ash: ...Sorry. Uh, you get used to it.

    Lori: I never did anything to them.

    Ash: I wouldn't take it personally. One day they'll all grow up too.

    Lori: I know that's supposed to make me feel better but it's not working.

    Ash: My mistake. Uh...I never got your name.

    Lori: *stands* Lori Speedle.

    Ash: Well, now that we've formally met. Would you like to grab some lunch?

    Lori: *lifts brow* You mean...Go back in there? I don't think so.

    Ash: You'll be fine.

    Lori: ...Okay.

    Ash: *smiles* Great. Come on.

    Lori: *nods*

    TBC.........
     
  4. speedmonkey2

    speedmonkey2 Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Awwwwww. Poor Lori. She's just trying to fit in at a new school and the snobs aren't making matters worse.

    HEY! *points finger* I can't help it that I have green eyes and it was the dominate gene! Ugh poor kid got the blonde hair to. I'm sorry lol.

    Teehee. Well I don't care if its him or not now I can't stop picturing Ashton Kutcher everytime I read his lines. lol. But I'm glad that Lori atleast found one friend. I went through...kind of the same thing on my first day of 6th grade and if I had atleast one friend I'm sure it would have been a heck of a lot easier.

    Poor Carly's going to everybody to try and get her ring out. And awww Timmy's going to do it. Hehe. He's such a great brother in law. lol.

    Update soon please
     
  5. Wyoming

    Wyoming Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    HAHAHAHAHHA OMG I laughed so hard lol. I wasn't expecting that, but I did wonder why he was fixing pipes so I guess I should have seen something like that coming. AWWWWWWWWWW Horatio and JC are so cute. It's just like Horatio to ask her out to dinner, always such the gentleman. teehee.

    WOW Those girls are bitches! Poor Lori didn't do anything to them, and she was even doing her work well. I like that Ash kid, he seems nice. It's good that Lori at least has one friend there for her. But man, every time I read a snotty remark I couldn't get Mean Girls out of my head lol. I really hope they get what's coming to them!

    Great update, as always Geni, update soon please!
     
  6. Finch

    Finch Funnier in Enochian Super Moderator

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    :D

    Under The Street Lights

    Cafeteria table

    Ash: This is Claire, and Emma. They're my friends.

    Lori: *smirks*

    Claire: I heard about you. South America must be a very diverse place to live.

    Lori: *nods*

    Emma: How long have you been in Miami?

    Lori: A few days.

    Ash: You haven't touched your food.

    Lori: I don't know what it is.

    Ash: ...Fries and ketchup.

    Lori: And you call that lunch?

    Ash: *laughs*

    Claire: You're very pretty, Lori.

    Lori: Thank you.

    Claire: And don't worry about anything, you'll fit in just fine.

    Lori: Yeah.

    Emma: Hey where's Evan and Patrick?

    Ash: They're at basketball practice.

    Emma: Pat has my geometry homework and I need it. Excuse me. *leaves*

    Claire: So what was your other school like?

    Lori: Me? I've never had another school.

    Claire: This is your first school?

    Lori: Unfortunately.

    Claire: I guess we didn't exactly give the best impression huh.

    Lori: Not quite.

    Ash: Well ladies I have a basketball team to captain. I'll see you two later. *leaves*

    Lori: *watches*

    Claire: *frowns* Let's get one thing clear. Ashton's going to take me to the dance. Not you. Just because you're new and pretty doesn't mean you have a chance.

    Lori: I don't understand.

    Claire: You will. *leaves*

    Lori: *looks down at food*

    Lab, woman's washroom

    Carly: Do you have it? Do you have it?

    Speed: *stands* Yeah.

    Carly: Oh thank God. Thank you so much.

    Speed: You do know you have to pay for the damage right? *hands ring to Carly*

    Carly: I do.

    Speed: *lifts brow*

    Carly: *stares at Speed*

    Speed: *clears throat* Good. I'm going to go...Away now. *leaves*

    Carly: *puts ring on* I am never letting this thing out of my sight ever again.

    Hummerhome

    Jess: *walks out* You think anyone knew we were gone?

    Delko: Nah.

    Jess: Um...We're probably going to have to clean up in there again.

    Delko: *sigh* Yeah.

    4 pm, restauraunt

    JC: This is pretty expensive, even for you.

    Horatio: You deserve it.

    JC: *smirks*

    Horatio: We've been...Together for a long time.

    JC: Yeah, and I've been really patient for a long time.

    Horatio: *laughs*

    JC: *smiles*

    Horatio: Can I ask you a question?

    JC: Sure.

    Horatio: You don't have cancer do you?

    JC: ...Not that I know of.

    Horatio: And you don't have any family that works at the lab right?

    JC: No.

    Horatio: ...You don't have any hits out on you?

    JC: *shakes head*

    Horatio: Not worrying about dying anytime soon?

    JC: No.

    Horatio: Good. Will you marry me?

    JC: *blank stare*

    Horatio: ...

    JC: Uh....You're just full of surprises aren't you?

    Horatio: *tilts head*

    JC: Okay, yes.

    Horatio: Really?

    JC: *laughs* Yes.

    House, 4:30 pm

    Lori: *walks in*

    Katie: Hey how was school?

    Lori: *throws bag on couch*

    Katie: What happened to your shirt?

    Lori: A soda machine fell on me and now I'm dead. Goodnight. *walks away*

    Katie: Whoa, where are you going?

    Lori: To sleep.

    Katie: You're not going to tell me about your day?

    Lori: No.

    Katie: You didn't have a good day?

    Lori: I just kind of don't want to talk to anyone right now.

    Katie: Were people mean?

    Lori: That's an understatement.

    Katie: Oh Lori, are you alright?

    Lori: I'm fine.

    Katie: Well dinner's almost finished being cooked. *walks to kitchen*

    Lori: ...Great.

    Speed: *walks in, looking down at mail* Hey Katie our phone bill is massive.

    Lori: *hugs Speed*

    Speed: *drops mail* Oof.

    Lori: *hugs tighter*

    Speed: It's nice to see you too.

    Katie: She had a bad day.

    Speed: Well that would explain being attacked by the Jaws of Life.

    Lori: *lets go* Sorry.

    Speed: You okay?

    Lori: *nods*

    Speed: What happened to your clothes?

    Lori: Nothing. Look, I'm going to go get changed and then try to lower my IQ so when I get to school tomorrow, I'm fully prepared. *walks away*

    Katie: *shrugs*

    Speed: Anyway, how was your day?

    Katie: I dropped Holly off at her friend's house again. They have a school project to do.

    Speed: I thought we agreed no one goes out on school nights.

    Katie: ..God I feel old.

    Speed: Ah to hell with school nights.

    Katie: *laughs*

    TBC.............
     
  7. speedmonkey2

    speedmonkey2 Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    I told you those things were evil! God I one last year broke my finger. *looks around* Its wasn't my fault it gave me two sodas and I was trying to be nice by only talking the one I paid for.....*clears throat*

    Anyway! Awwwww JC and Horatio are engaged.

    Hhahahaha oh man I COULD NOT stop laughing when I read that. Teehee. Cancer. Hahaha the bullet will get HER FIRST! lol. I'm kidding. I kid.

    And awww Ashton seems really nice. But hmm..that Claire person is going to be a problem.


    Awww poor Lori didn't know what it was. *sniff* Thats so...cute and sad at the same time. And Hey! I call it lunch every once in a while thank you. lol.

    Awwww I feel old and Speedy cracked me up. lol. Teehee. Ok Geni you've made me hyper. lol. Update soon please!
     
  8. Finch

    Finch Funnier in Enochian Super Moderator

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    :lol: Poor...Speedle family. They're such born losers. :p ...Okay not really but oh well.

    Na Na Na Na Na :p

    School, next day

    lockers

    Emma: Hey Lori.

    Lori: Hey.

    Emma: *opens locker* What's your next class?

    Lori: Uh...History I think.

    Emma: Hey we're in the same class.

    Lori: Wow.

    Emma: I think Ash has History too.

    Lori: Good for him.

    Emma: Claire's been going after him for like three years. Between you and me, I think she only wants to be with him because he's popular.

    Lori: I don't really like gossip.

    Emma: Then what do you do on your spare time?

    Lori: ...Homework.

    Emma: That's boring.

    Lori: Yeah. It's too bad it's kind of a requirement to being here.

    Emma: You know, you're really funny.

    Lori: Thanks...I think.

    Emma: And I really love your hair. It's very pretty.

    Lori: Do you need something?

    Emma: Why?

    Lori: You're complimenting me.

    Emma: I was just making conversation. I'm sorry.

    Lori: It's okay, don't worry about it.

    Ash: *walks over* Hey we're going to be late.

    Emma: I was just talking about you.

    Ash: Oh nothing bad I hope.

    Emma: That's impossible.

    Ash: How sweet of you Em.

    Emma: Well I'm going to get out of y'alls hair and grab a seat at the back of the class. I hate it when the teacher spits. *leaves*

    Ash: You look great today.

    Lori: *smiles*

    Ash: She smiles.

    Lori: *closes locker* You're in my way.

    Ash: *laughs* Well sorry. I didn't know you were in such a hurry.

    Lori: You're still in my way.

    Ash: *moves* Happy?

    Lori: See you in class. *walks away*

    Ash: *sigh* What a pistol.

    TBC............

    Eh, short chapter for a short attention span. :p
     
  9. speedmonkey2

    speedmonkey2 Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Awwww she's a pistol. lol. And the whole funny traits definatley learned it from her father. lol. When she gets drunk and DOESN'T beat up a kid we'll talk about something she's gotten from me. lol. But awww do I see Lori's first boyfriend coming up soon? Teehee. *sighs* I remember like it was yesterday when she was holding a cup with two hands. *sniff* Update soon please!
     
  10. carole

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    Awwwwwwwwwwww poor little Lori she discovered the jungle!!! :)
    Those kind of girls and boys they just diserve... I don't even find a word :p

    And YAY Horatio ask THE question to JC she is so a lucky girl :p

    And Speed help Carly to find her ring :D

    Great update and update soon please :)
     
  11. Finch

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    :lol: Ah highschool...Such a jungle. :p

    Sorry To Say

    Trace lab, next day

    Delko: Hey.

    Speed: Hey.

    Delko: I have a question.

    Speed: So ask it.

    Delko: You know Sara Piper?

    Speed: ...Your point?

    Delko: I'm on her case. You know, her kid was abducted.

    Speed: Well have fun with that.

    Delko: I was wondering if you could run some trace for me.

    Speed: Sorry Eric, I'm hands off.

    Delko: I'm pretty sure you can remain professional in this.

    Speed: And I'm pretty sure I just said I was hands off.

    Delko: So who's supposed to run the trace?

    Speed: You're a big boy. Do it yourself.

    Delko: But you'll be watching me and then if I make a mistake, you'll either get angry at me or laugh at me.

    Speed: Don't worry I won't laugh.

    Delko: ...But you'll get angry at me?

    Speed: That depends how much you screw up.

    Delko: How about you just leave the room or something.

    Speed: I can't. I'm supposed to be working in here.

    Delko: Go work in Horatio's office. He's never in there.

    Speed: I don't want to take his office.

    Delko: He'll never know.

    Speed: This is a crime lab. He'll know.

    Delko: It's not like he'll print his office so that he can find out who moved the piece of paper sitting on his desk.

    Speed: Yeah he would.

    Delko: No he wouldn't. He doesn't do that stuff anymore.

    Speed: Eric, just process the trace yourself and stop worrying about me.

    Calleigh: *walks in* Tim, can you come here for a minute?

    Speed: What's wrong with just telling me here?

    Calleigh: It's about Teague.

    Speed: Good for him.

    Calleigh: *frowns*

    Speed: *sigh* Fine. Eric, if you break anything I'll murder you.

    Delko: Wow now my confidence is so much higher.

    Halls

    Calleigh: He got into a fight at school.

    Speed: So? Punish him.

    Calleigh: I have to go meet his teacher today about it.

    Speed: It's not like he murdered anyone, he's nine.

    Calleigh: Do you know what that other little boy said to him?

    Speed: I'm not psychic, Cal.

    Calleigh: The topic of the class today was what their dads did for a living. Teague said he didn't have one and so another little boy said he was a bastard.

    Speed: That's rough.

    Calleigh: Go talk to him.

    Speed: Why?

    Calleigh: Because he has a father.

    Speed: Uh, he doesn't like me.

    Calleigh: Fine. You go talk to the teacher because I'm not really in the mood to deal with them.

    Speed: What am I supposed to say?

    Calleigh: Think of something. *walks away*

    Speed: *rolls eyes*

    Highschool

    Lockers

    Jennifer: Hey it's stone ages girl!

    Lori: *turns around*

    Jennifer: Oh look at the pretty hair and makeup. Turning over a new leaf?

    Lori: I actually looked like this before. And had you been able to see two feet past your own face, you would have noticed. *walks away*

    Jennifer: *blank stare*

    Stairs

    Ash: *runs up* HEY! Speedle I've been looking for you.

    Lori: *turns around* Why?

    Ash: I'm setting up some things in the gym for the dance, and I need your help with something.

    Lori: I wouldn't know anything about dances.

    Ash: It doesn't matter, I just need a female eye.

    Lori: Why don't you just ask Claire?

    Ash: Because I don't like her.

    Lori: And you've known me for what...Three days?

    Ash: Come on. *grabs Lori*

    Lori: *sigh* Fine.

    Gym

    Ash: Okay.

    Lori: *looks around* Well I see you have everything under control. I'll get out of your way.

    Ash: *laughs* Wait, wait. I wanted to test a couple of the songs.

    Lori: Why?

    Ash: Well every dance has songs.

    Lori: *frowns* I know that.

    Ash: Yeah but the important part of the dance is the slow songs.

    Lori: So?

    Ash: So I need your opinion on them.

    Lori: I don't know much about music.

    Ash: Then bear with me.

    Lori: *angry sigh*

    Ash: *turns on music*

    Lori: *lifts brow* What in the hell is that?

    Ash: Music.

    Lori: I don't think you want to use that song. It's too droopy.

    Ash: *laughs* Alright. *stops music* Hey you want to see the new lights we just bought? Evan thinks they're a little weird but I think they're okay.

    Lori: *rolls eyes* Fine.

    Ash: *turns off lights, turns on dance lights*

    Lori: ...Don't people get dizzy?

    Ash: Nah. *turns on music*

    Lori: ....Well this song is okay.

    Ash: High praise coming from you.

    Lori: Don't you have a class to be in?

    Ash: I've got plenty of time.

    Lori: *crosses arms*

    Ash: You look so stiff.

    Lori: Loud noises bother me.

    Ash: Funny. *extends hand*

    Lori: What are you doing?

    Ash: We have to test out the dance floor.

    Lori: Have fun.

    Ash: *laughs* You're coming with me.

    Lori: No I'm not.

    Ash: Afraid you can't dance?

    Lori: No I know I can't dance.

    Ash: It's alright, no one's perfect.

    Lori: Don't you have a million girls just lined up to dance with you?

    Ash: It's not a million.

    Lori: *frowns*

    Ash: Come on, what are you afraid of?

    Lori: Nothing.

    Ash: I find that hard to believe.

    Lori: You wouldn't be the first person who didn't believe me.

    Ash: *grabs Lori's hand* Come on.

    Lori: Ugh.

    Dance floor

    Ash: Why are you so far away?

    Lori: I didn't know there was a distance rule.

    Ash: *smiles* You're supposed to be closer. *pulls Lori*

    Lori: *looks around*

    Ash: There's no one else here, just us.

    Lori: I'm not blind.

    Ash: No. You're beautiful.

    Lori: *looks at Ash*

    TBC...........
     
  12. speedmonkey2

    speedmonkey2 Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Awwww! I can't stop saying awww! lol. Teehee. Ash is so cute I just hope my constant pessimistic side is wrong and he's really a nice boy. ....Ok now i really do sounds old and i'm not! lol. And hmmm Teague got into a fight at school. Awww poor thing. I can understand why they didn't tell him Tim was his father but in all honesty I think they should have. But of course thats just my opinion. Silly Delko couldn't run trace because Timmy was in there and I don't even want to think about what Horatio would do if he caught Speed in his office. But hmmm....Sara Pipers kid was really kidnapped...interesting. Can't wait to see what happens with all of these storylines. Update soon please!
     
  13. CSI_Trainee

    CSI_Trainee CSI Level One

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    awww someone at school likes lori thats so cute but what about that other guy Ben? LOL and Horatio asked me to marry him I had to supress the sqeal i was about to let loose but i don't want my family knowing i am hapyy lol. Anyway great updates Geni and I can't wait for more lol
     
  14. carole

    carole Prime Suspect

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    I loved the little "anymore" :p I can just imagine H processing and printing his office :lol:

    And awwwwww Lori dance with Ash it's sooooo cute :)

    Teague had a fight at school...poor little boy it's not fair to call him "bastard". Kids at this age are really really mean!!!

    Anyway great update Geni and update soon please :)
     
  15. carlz31

    carlz31 Coroner

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    Ok, sorry I haven't been on very much lately, so lets see what I can remember...

    Delko and Jess...AWWWW YAY! for Jess...poor Missy though *hugs* I'm sure it'll be ok...

    Awww, Anni flushed my ring down the toilet, but good on Speedy for helping me find it :D

    Yikes, high school kids are jerks...but that Ash seems nice...so naturally he'll turn out to a complete psycho ;)

    Yikes, primary school kids are jerks too...poor little Teague :(

    and YAY! for JC! I agree with Katie, I could not stop laughing when H was asking all those questions about her dying and stuff...ah H :lol:

    please update soon
     
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