Mac's Trip

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  1. MacTaylor333

    MacTaylor333 Hit and Run

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    This is a fanfic I wrote and I hope you like it.

    Chapter 1
    Mac Taylor came into the Crime Lab, surprisingly happy, unlike the rest of the week when he was depressed. Flack noticed Mac was depressed, so he decided to do something nice...
    "Hmmmmm..." Mac hummed, walking into his office.
    "So you heard already" Flack said, entering his office.
    "Heard what?" he asked, looking confused.
    "About me putting you on Marine Training," he answerd, proudly.
    "What?" Mac yelled, giving him a look.
    A few hours later in Mac's apartment...
    "Anyone home?" Stella's voice asked, as her head popped through the door.
    "Yeah, I'm in the bedroom," Mac answered.
    Stella walked to the back of the apartment. She saw him packing.
    "What are you doing?" she asked, helping him with the suitcase.
    "Packing," he answered, trying to close it.
    "Why?" she asked, as she jumped up on the suit case.
    "Flack signed me up to train Marine Rookies," Mac answered, zipping the case closed.
    "What? No! You can't,"she yelled, jumping off.
    "I have to," he said, grabbing her hands in his.
    "What if you're not back in time?" she said, tears filling her eyes.
    "Don't worry I will be," he answered,wiping her tears away.
    "What if you aren't?" she said, pulling way from him.
    "Stella! Honey! Enough with the questions," he said, walking over and hugging her by the waist,"Okay?"
    "Alright," she said, hugging him back.
     
  2. Enhinti

    Enhinti Rookie

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    Nice!
    Is this a SMac story?
    Can't wait to find out why Mac was really smiling!
     
  3. Axelsonfire

    Axelsonfire Pathologist

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    Oh you're posting it here?? :)

    Well, you know my feelings on this story: :adore::adore::adore:
     
  4. MacsGirlMel

    MacsGirlMel Mac's Personal Assistant

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    is it also at FF.net? I wanna read ahead lol
     
  5. Ghawazee

    Ghawazee CSI Level Three

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    I was looking for this fic and i didn't realized i didn't refresh the page LOL

    Please more MT i need read MORE! It was so sweet they are finally together :D
     
  6. Remke79

    Remke79 Witness

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    i hope there comes more, i like this.
     
  7. MacTaylor333

    MacTaylor333 Hit and Run

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    This story is also on fanfiction too.

    Mac and Stella Walked into the lab, Stella went to see Sheldon about a body and
    Mac went to see Lindsay.
    "Hey, Mac" Lindsay said, as he walked through the doors.
    "Hi Lindsay," he answered "I just came to tell you that I won't be here for awhile"
    "Oh really, Where are you going?" she asked, surprisingly calm.
    "To sea" he replied,getting a stare.
    "What is anyone going with you?" she asked, quickly. (guess who she's thinking about)
    "What?No!" he answered, giving her a look.
    "Oh!Uh!Got to go!" she scrambled out the door.
    Mac walked to his office, but he stopped in his tracks. He saw Flack sitting
    on his desk, so he took a detour through the didn't realize Stella in
    there with Sheldon and Sid.
    "Oh Hi" he said, looking at the three.
    "Hey Mac" Sid said, "I hear you're going to sea"
    Mac gave Stella a glance, she just turned around.
    "Yeah, I see why it Impacts Stella the most!" Sheldon said, Stella and Mac gave each other
    worried glances.
    "Why is that?" Stella asked, hoping the answer was wrong.
    "Your pregnant!" the morgue boys said, together like they shared a brain.
    "What?" Stella and Mac said, knowing what the real answer was.
    "Just kidding!" Sid said, Stella let out her breath.
    "I'm not!" Sheldon said, giving the two CSI's a serious glance.
    "Okay, your right!" Stella gave in." Just stop that face."
    "Works always!" Sheldon said, going back to a smile.
    "We were right?" Sid asked, confused.
    'Yes you were right" Mac answered, walking forward."Just keep it quite".
    "Alright," they agreed.


    hope you enjoy.


    MT333
     
  8. MacsGirlMel

    MacsGirlMel Mac's Personal Assistant

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    OK Cool, will check later.
     

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