A NY Smex Story: Loosing Faith on Love

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  1. nattybatty55

    nattybatty55 Nadalaholic

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    We always want to see what happens! :lol:
     
  2. MacsLovlyAngl

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    In the morning Flack and Caroline left to go too her home for a change of clothes.

    "Would you like me to come in with you, sweetheart"?

    "No thanks, I'll be 2 minutes tops".

    Just before she exited the car, Flack pulled her back in and kissed her.

    Giggling she got out.

    "I'll be right back".

    Flack had never been this happy, just something about Caroline made his heart soar out of this world. As he watched her go up to her door and unlock it.....

    *KABOOM******* The whole explosion shook the street, as Flack screamed Nooooooooo!!!!

    Knowing she was already dead, Flack called it in.

    "This is Det.Flack, I need Fire and Rescue to 444 north side, bomb explosion, one female fatality".




    Meanwhile ......

    Mac heard the call out on the Police Scanner.

    "Christ"! said Mac, that was Flack". "Stella I'll be back love, stay put , and don't accept any packages".

    "I won't", take care Mac".

    "I will love", as he kissed her good-bye.

    When Mac arrived, he found Flack sitting on the ground.

    "Flack"? "What happened here"?

    "I brought Caroline home, to get some clothes and she blew up with her place".

    Mac was confussed, he couldn't understand why Flack looked lost.

    "Flack"! "Flack", called Mac. "Flack, are you listening to me"?

    When Flack looked up, Mac seen the tears in his eyes and that was when he caught on.

    "Oh christ Flack"!! "You got involved with the victim"?

    "It was more then that Mac, it was as if we had known each other for a liftime".

    "Did you sleep with her"?

    "No Mac". "I made love to her, there is a difference". "There was something special about her".
    "I could feel....." "we could feel the sparks, you know, the type that come along once in a lifetime".

    Mac understood, as he had felt the sparks for Stella, but chose to ignore them until Peyton died, then he realized what was right in front of him.

    "Why don't you go home Flack, let someone else finish this case".

    "No", I need to do this, I need you to understand".

    "I do Flack, if you need me, I'll be at home".
     
  3. nattybatty55

    nattybatty55 Nadalaholic

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    Ahh this is getting said- no more love life for flack! :)
     
  4. bringirl2001

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    awwwwww man- I was just getting into flack/caroline- I hate it for him but it does make good drama-- maybe he could meet another lady someday soon in one of your other fics(yeah i am already begging for MORE fics from you) this fic is just awesome and i LOVE smex and dl fluff too- great story- can't wait until they bring the crook to justice and our boys get home to their loves.
     
  5. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    On the way home, Mac called Danny, to let him know that Caroline had been killed.

    "How's Flack taking it"? asked Danny.

    "Not good, did you know about his involvment with the victim".

    "Not really, I had an idea, when he took her home, something was up".

    "Well he's a hell of a mess now"? "Listen Danny, I want you to check on him later".

    "Sure Mac, I can do that, as soon as I drop Lindsay off at your place".

    "Don't worry about that, I'm on my way home now, I'll stop by and grab Lindsay and DJ".

    "You sure Mac, I don't want to put you out".

    "I'm positive Danny, I really need you to check on Flack".


    Once Mac picked up Lindsay and DJ, he headed home to Stella.



    Meanwhile......


    Talking to himself....

    "There we go Edward, you timed that perfectly". "How you doing Auntie"? "Think they think you're dead"? Now tomorrow , I plant the car bombs, and everything will be complete".



    Meanwhile......

    Mac had just pulled up to the house, and got out with Lindsay.

    "Sweetheart, I'm home", and Lindsay's and DJ are with me".

    "Hey Lindsay, hi DJ, hey little buddy, come here to Auntie Stella".

    As Stella took DJ into her arms, she could hardly contain the joy, knowing soon, she would have Mac's third child.



    Meanwhile....

    Danny had just arrived on scene, when everything was almost processed and complete.

    "Flack"!! "How you doin man"?

    "How do you think I'm doing Danny"?

    "Look man I'm really sorry this happened to you, but you need to be strong Flack, the only thing you should be thinking about, is finding this Edward guy, before he kills somneone else".

    "You think I don't know that, but she was special, I know that may seem strange to you".

    At the moment the Bomb Squad walked up and said......

    "We've swept the house, but the oddest thing, we couldn't find any sign of a body", the house was clean".

    "What"? "Are you telling me no one was in there"?

    "That's right, it was empty". "The only thing we found was the trigger to the Bomb". "Are you sure she went in there"?

    "I think so", I know she opened the door, but then she disappeared, I just assumed she was inside".

    "What are you thinking Flack"? asked Danny.

    "I'm thinking she may still be alive, and Edward may have her".
     
  6. MacsGirlMel

    MacsGirlMel Mac's Personal Assistant

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    That's an interesting twist. More soon!
     
  7. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    Hey devoted readers, this is my only post till 7pm,Canadian time, work,work,work. Thanks again for all the awesome Feedback.

    I'm glad you enjoy my stories. I have more in the works.




    Meanwhile.....

    Edward was working on making his final bombs, as his Aunt Caroline tried to get out of her ropes, to warn Flack. As she pulled and twisted, she could feel the rope loosen.

    "How ya doing Auntie, I bet you never thought you'd end up here", did you"?

    Saying nothing, Caroline kept working on the knots.





    Meanwhile....

    Stella and Lindsay were just getting ready to go out when the phone rang.

    "Hello"! said Stella.

    "Hey Stella, Is Mac there"?

    "Yeah, just a minute okay"? "Mac"! "It's Danny.

    Okay love, I got it", said Mac as he picked up the upstairs phone.

    "Yeah Danny, what's up"?

    "It seems Caroline may still be alive".

    "What do you mean alive"? "She couldn't have survived that explosion Danny".

    "She could if she wasn't in it"?

    "Stop talking in damn riddles, and tell me what the hell is going on".

    The Bomb Squad said they found no sign of human remains inside Carolines house". "which means her Nephew may have kidnapped her before the explosion".

    "You know what tha means, don't you Danny"?

    "Yeah"! "It means we need to find her fast".

    "That's right, tell Flack, I'm very happy for him".

    "I will Mac, I'll keep you informed".




    Meanwhile.....

    Now that the Firemen had cleared the house, Flack decided to look inside , and see if he couldn't find any information , that may lead to Edwards Address.

    "Find anything Flack"? asked Danny.

    "Nothing yet", "I did find a locked case though". "I'm , trying to find the key".

    As they sifted through debris, they still had no luck with the key.

    "To hell with it , said Flack. "I'll use a knife".

    Popping it open, he found letter's, envelopes with return to sender on them.

    "Look at these Danny, they are from Edward to Caroline".

    "Huh!!! and look at the address". "It's at the Judge's house", said Danny.

    "I think we should check it out, how about you".

    "Sure let's go", said Danny.



    Meanwhile....

    Stella and Lindsay had left to go shopping, leaving Mac with 3 kids.

    "I must be getting soft in my old age, to agree too watch three kids", said Mac to himself.

    "Mackenzie, come here to Daddy, Come on Mackenzie".

    The twins, were walking now, and driving Mac crazy.

    "Come on love, don't you ever get tired"?

    Mackenzie looked back at her daddy and laughed. "Dada, dada".

    "Yes, me Dada, now come to Dada Mackenzie", come on".

    As Mac got close, she ran down the hall. He caught her and brought her back, kissing and blowing on her tummy, as she let out deep gurggling laugh's.

    Setting her back in the Playpen with Michael, Mac fed DJ and then put him down upstairs for a nap.
     
  8. nattybatty55

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    Like them I love them! :)
     
  9. MacsGirlMel

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    Awww he's so cute :) *snuggles MacDaddy*
     
  10. MacsLovlyAngl

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    Once Danny and Flack arrived at the Judge's home, they searched the outside of the premises first. Upon finding nothing they quietly approached the house.


    Meanwhile inside......

    Caroline was still trying to loosen her ropes with no success.

    "What's the matter Caroline"? "You look flustered, do you need to go too the washroom or something"?

    Caroline shook her head no, as she struggled against the ropes.

    "Well then ,I'll leave you Caroline, I need to go plant some bombs". "I'll be back soon".

    As Edward was heading out the door, he noticed Danny and Flack. Running back downstairs, he said ....

    "Looks like we have company Caroline, could get interseting and messy, stay put, I'll be back".

    Caroline faught harder against the ropes on her hands, because she knew if she didn't warn Flack and Danny, they would die. Fighting harder until her wrists started to bleed, she could finally feel them loosen.

    "Come on Caroline", you can do it", she said to herself. Sure enough she managed to get her wrists free and pull the gag from her mouth, as she screamed

    "FLACK"!!!!! "Watch out for Edward, she screamed.

    Mac and Danny entered with full force when they heard Caroline scream.

    *BANG, BANG*, two shots straight through the heart, as Edward went down.

    Running down the stairs Flack found Caroline, untied her legs and Gripped her tightly in his arms.

    "Oh God, I thought I lost you Caroline, Thank God you're okay".

    Caroline was being smothered by Flack as she squeeked out,

    "I can't breathe Flack, loosen up your hold".

    "Sorry love, said Flack as he kissed her over and over.

    Danny picked up his cell and called Mac.

    "Mac, it's Danny, we've caught him, well I should say we shot him, he's dead".

    "How's Caroline"? asked Mac.

    "She's fine, Flack is with her". "I'll be there shortly to pick up DJ".

    "No problem, take your time, I'll see you soon". "Good job Danny".

    "Thanks Mac", bye".


    Meanwhile.....

    The girls were having a riot, it was wonderful that htey didn't have to worry about the kids for once.

    "Come on Stella, let's go get our nails done".

    "You're kidding right"? I'm not into that".

    "Why not"? Come on, pamper yourself", said Lindsay.

    After some coaxing , she got Stella to agree.


    Meanwhile....

    Danny arrived at Mac''s to pick up DJ.

    "Come on in" , said Mac.

    "Hey Mac, where is DJ"?

    "He's still sleeping upstairs in the Nursery".

    Danny looked on the table and seen a basket full of peanut butter items.

    "Stella, on the peanut thing again"?

    "Yeah"!! "I love it, she hates the stuff, and it makes her nuts ,because she craves it when she's pregnant".

    Danny laughed, he could remember Stella robbing the Snack Machine at work for the peanut butter cups.

    "Too funny said Danny".

    At that moment, DJ woke up crying.

    "I'll get him Mac" , said Danny as he headed upstairs.

    "Hey son, how you doing pal"? "How's daddy's little guy"? said Danny, as he kissed his son.



    Meanwhile.....

    Flack had taken Caroline back to his place.

    "How are you love, said Flack as he grabbed the antibiotic cream and cloths.

    "I'm fine Flack, don't worry".

    Looking into Caroline's eyes Flack said, "I'll always worry sweetheart".

    Taking her wrist, he dabbed it with the cream as she flinched in pain.

    "Sorry sweetheart", "But I need to clean it".

    Once Flack was done dressing her wrists, he sat down and just held her for the longest time.



    Next on Loosing Faith the Series

    Murder and Mayham along with....

    Stella and Mac sharing their new baby, Danny and Lindsay enjoying Parenthood, and Flack and Caroline get engaged.
     
  11. MacsLovlyAngl

    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    6months later......

    Stella was just about ready to give birth, the doctor informed Mac that she could go at any time.

    "Mac, I need your help to get up please". "God I'll be glad when this is over".

    "Quiet love, you'll wake the twins".

    "Don't tell me to be quiet, this is all your fault, you're the one that couldn't keep Mr.Jolly contained".

    "Yeah right Stella", "I never heard you complaining between ooh's!!! and Auh"s", said Mac.

    After he pulled her up, she looked into his eyes and said......

    "I'm sorry Mac, It's just I feel so fat and awkward".

    "You're not fat love, you're pregnant, and beautiful, and I love you".

    "Flatter"! said Stella as she kissed him.


    Meanwhile...

    Danny and Lindsay were having fun, DJ had just turned 6 months and they were getting ready for his little birthday party.

    "I feel silly Danny, he's not even a year yet and we are having a half year birthday party".

    "I think it's a wonderful idea, and Stella seemed excited about having the twins attend their first party".

    *Giggling* "I know, she practically jumped for joy, when I told her".

    "She shouldn't be jumping anywhere, she looks twice the size, as she was with the twins", said Danny.

    "I know, you think she was carrying three", laughed Lindsay.

    "Stop that love, she doesn't need you teasing her when she gets here". "Though she is huge", "Isn't she".



    Meanwhile.....

    "Flack"!! "what time is the Birthday party at Danny's"?

    "Three pm love", why"?

    "Just wondering", do you have the gift ready"?

    "That I do my love", said Flack.

    Flack and Caroline have been dating for six month's and were still going strong, which surprised Flack, for he alway's had trouble keeping a relationship.

    Walking into the room, Flack found Caroline sitting on the bed brushing her long hair.

    "Let me do that love", said Flack.

    "Are you sure"?

    "I'm positive sweetheart, I love your hair, it's very beautiful, just like you".

    Handing over the brush to Flack, she closed her eyes as he ran the brush down her hair.

    "God Caroline, you are so beautiful and pure", said Flack as he kissed her neck.

    *Whispering* "FLACK"!! "Don't stop", begged Caroline.

    Flack put down the brush and caressed his hands through her hair moving it to the side as he stroked his tongue down her neck and shoulder. As she purred, Flack could see Goosebumps, forming on her flesh. Fully turning her towards him, he looked into her eyes and said.....

    "Caroline, I think I'm falling in love with you".

    "That's okay Flack, because I'm already there", "I love you".
     
  12. MacsGirlMel

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    awww I can't wait for the next baby :)
     
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    MacsLovlyAngl Head of the Graveyard Shift

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    "Once Mac and Stella had the twins in their car seats, they headed over to DJ's party. Just as they were nearing the corner of their street, Stella went into labor.

    "Owww!!! "Oh God Mac"! "The baby's coming, my water just broke".

    "Okay love, hold on said Mac, as he turned the car around and sped towards the Hospital.

    "Huff, huff,huff,hiss,hiss,hiss, panted Stella. "Come on Mac, can't you drive any faster, for Christ sake".

    "I'm getting there as fast as I can, just breathe love, that's it, deep breathing like we practiced".

    Mac knew he needed to get there quickly, for the last time Stella went into labor, he ended up having to deliver his twins, and he was not looking forward to repeat of that night a little over year ago.

    "Mac, yelled Stella, I can feel the baby coming, Mac!!!! "It's not going to wait".

    Mac knew he had no choice but to stop the car and deliver his next child into the world, once again.

    "I'm telling you Stella, you have a knack for going into labor in all the wrong places", said Mac as he picked up the phone and called for EMS.

    Getting a clean blanket from the back, he put it over Stella's lower half and took off her pants. Once again he could see the crown of the baby.

    "Okay love, on my count I want you to push and bare down". "Huff,huff,hiss,hiss, PUSH", that's it love, hold it and release".

    After two more pushes, out slid a beautiful healthy baby girl. Mac could here the Ambulance in the distance.

    "It's a girl sweetheart, another beautiful baby girl" , cried Mac.



    Meanwhile ......

    Everyone had arrived for DJ's 6month birthday party, everyone except Mac and Stella.

    "Did you try calling them Danny"? asked Lindsay.

    "Yes love, there was no answer at the house". "I'm just getting ready to try their cell".

    As Danny called Mac's cell, he got no response.

    "Still no luck"? , said Flack.

    "No I don't get it"! they should be here by now".

    It was at that moment they got the call.

    "Hello"! said Danny.

    "Danny, it's Mac". "We're not going to be able to make it".

    "Why not"? asked Danny.

    "Stella decided to go into labor in the car".

    "Are you serious"? "She picks the oddest places to go into labor", said Danny.

    "Tell me bout it, I'm becoming a pro at delivering babies, maybe I should change my profession", laughed Mac. "Anyways we had a girl, a beautiful baby girl".

    "Well congrats once again Daddy", said Danny. "We'll be there shortly".


    Meanwhile.....

    Stella was holding the baby when Mac walked back into the room.

    "Were they upset Mac"? because we couldn't be there.

    "No, in fact they said, they were on their way here".

    Mac walked over and sat down beside his wife and their new baby.

    "Have you thought of a name yet"? asked Mac.

    "Not really", have you"?

    "Well I was kind of leaning towards Madison Elizabeth Taylor".

    Stella rolled the name on her tongue a few times. "I like that Mac, it works nicely", said Stella.

    "Great"! said Mac, I'll let the nurse know".

    As Mac left the room, Stella whispered....."Welcome to the Taylor family Madison".
     
  14. MacsGirlMel

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    awwww :) Poor Mac, keeps finding himself in these situations lol
     
  15. nattybatty55

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    Aaaww that's so sweet, Mac is going to become the lab's personal midwife!!
     

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