Ooh the suspense! Rest assured Crumbs we'll still be here waiting for the next story no matter how long it takes, it's better off done well rather than rushed and sloppy.:thumbsup:
Aww poor Greggo! Tense stuff Crumbs. I like the bit of poking fun at Starbucks, with them having excessive amounts of locations and the non-sensical gibberish their staff spout out!:thumbsup:
Welcome back Crumbs. As ever I'm liking the nods to previous cases and the beginning is certainly intriguing (a bit like certain parts of London at the moment, though obviously it's unintentional and in context to the story). I look forward to the next chapter!:cool:
Damn you cliffhangers! Just kidding.;) But honestly, making us wait two weeks on a cliffhanger is genius and it's a move employed by the professionals that make the CSI series and many others (probably the worst kept secret in Hollywood for keeping your viewers hooked to the series).:thumbsup...
Gripping stuff as always Crumbs, but a couple of bits don't make sense:
"You know what Sandra," Brass spoke up. "Take yourself outside have a rest. Me and Jimbo will sort the rest of it out."
Is this Brass speaking or Juan? Seems odd unless Brass is imitating Juan.
"That is correct and he led...
Poor old Nicky getting a banged up nose and good references to what has gone before. This one's shaping up to be a corker! One niggly detail though: when Nick goes up the stairs, you've said his gun was raised - noone who has been professionally trained to use a firearm would ever raise their...
Re: Season 8 Spoiler Discussion - There's Nothing You Can't Do In New
Holy Christ! What are tptb thinking of?! If this spoiler is accurate, then it sounds like the whole show is being butchered!:scream: I'm a patient person (heck I found even the worst of Star Trek: Voyager or Enterprise to be...
Really good Crumbs, incredibly emotional and I'm loving the continued references to older cases from the show; it's giving things, especially the characters, a little extra depth.:cool: However there is one bit that is confusing me:
'A sudden realisation hit her that many of the children...
Wow, intense stuff Crumbs. Waiting for the next part will be pretty much unbearable, I just hope Nick doesn't get in trouble. Also nice references to 'Overload', 'Gum Drops' and 'A Thousand Days on Earth'. Tomorrow can't come fast enough.
Well we now know who's replacing Laurence Fishburne as lead in Las Vegas. It'll be interesting to see what sort of character Ted Danson will bring to the series. What are your thoughts on this Crumbs?
Hmm, keeping us guessing with Greg aren't you?;) I think you made the right choice with the Nick/Vega interrogation scene; I could picture it like on the show where the scene swaps back and forth between the two rooms and you managed to keep the conversation flowing naturally too.:thumbsup: On...