Sleepless.

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  1. BlueDiamondStar

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    And with this you might want to shoot me though *gets shield ready*
    Aside this chapter there will be one more final chapter I'll add up today.
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    [CHAPTER 10]
    *some time later*
    What the hell had happened to him? He barely remembered what those guys had told him and now he felt something hot flowing down his face.
    Where he was? It wasn't his bed. No, it wasn't his house either. Was he outside? What he was doing out?
    Puzzled Ryan tried to move. It was painful but he barely could move at all. He tried to open his eyes. They didn't cooperate right away but after some fight fluttered open and he was blinded by sunlight. Before he could get to some thoughts another jolt of pain rushed through his spine, blowing off any coherent thought.
    He needed pretty good time to gain control over his body and reach for meds. Now he had to get home, wherever it was, and get a hold of his friend who was able to help.
    With that thought, adding hard concentration, he pulled himself up from the ground and started to walk home...
    ---
    BANG!
    His hands were shaking uncontrollably. His head spun. This was even worse than that day, back then he didn't even feel anything. But now it was just unbearable.
    BANG!
    Another bullet tore apart his body jolting him painfully. Or was there any pain left? He wasn't sure anymore. His hearing was muffled and mind clouded. Was that sun? A tiny coherent thought broke through this haze. He remembered sunset when he climbed up the stairs. He could see it through the huge window.
    Another flash of red. What was that? Everything was blurry.
    BANG!
    His world darkened for a second. He didn't feel anything anymore. Completely opposite. His vision cleared and he saw H standing at the railing. The sun glittered in his hair like a fire. It was so beautiful. He didn't feel his body, nothing. Like he wasn't there anymore. He saw himself moving towards the railing. His eyes glued to Horatio who dropped his gun and plunged towards falling Ryan...
    But he never made it.
    With a loud noise the railing broke off under Ryan's body and it all fell down...
    He never felt it coming.
    Never realised.
    But nevertheles he still knew who did this to him. He just never believed it was even possible. But it didn't matter anymore...
    The last thing he saw before his body hit the ground was H's flaming hair and incredibly beautiful crimson sunset....
    A silent tear rolled down his cheek shining in the last rays of sunlight...
    His soul was now safe...
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    Ok don't shoot me for this :)
    ENJOY!
     
  2. Kaunis Mies

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    ** cocks gun and fires three shots ** how could you kill Ryan?? ** another two bullets fired **
     
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    [EPILOGUE]

    "Over my shoulder...
    Running away...
    Feels like I'm falling...
    Loosing my day...
    Fog out my daylight...
    Feels like I'm falling...
    Far out of sight... "

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    "By the time I'm dreaming... And you've crept out on me sleeping... Busy in the blissful unaware...
    By the time I'm dreaming... And you've crept out on me sleeping... Tell me how am I suppose to care... "
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    "In any other world you could tell the difference...
    And let it all unfurl into broken remnants...
    Smile like you mean it and let yourself let go...
    Cause it's all in the hands of a bitter, bitter man...
    Say goodbye to the world you thought you lived in...
    Take a bow, play the part of a lonely, lonely heart...
    Say goodbye to the world you thought you lived in...
    I tried to live alone but lonely is so lonely alone...
    So human as I am, I had to give up my defenses...
    So I smiled and tried to mean it, to let myself let go...
    Cause it's all in the hands of a bitter, bitter man...
    Say goodbye to the world you thought you lived in...
    Take a bow, play the part of a lonely, lonely heart...
    Say goodbye to the world you thought you lived in... "
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    A THANK YOU NOTE
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    With this I finish this heart-breaking story.
    I know you didn't expect this but as I warned you before, I think I did, that you might want to shoot me about this.
    Yup and this is my second "Ryan death" but as we all know- who knows....

    Also I dedicate this story to a friend, and also a great writer, Kaunis Mies, who inspired me to give it a try, and as I stated before, revoked some long forgotten ideas I had before I gave a try to my very first fic.
    Also I wanna say huge THANKS to everyone who took their time to read this drabble at all :)
    Hope you all liked.
    So, thanks again and see ya in my next story, Hurricane, which I plan to finish soon.
    Bye!
     
  4. Kaunis Mies

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    Kiitos and i can help you with further fics if you like
     
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    ^_^

    Oh that would be nice:)
    I predict an upcoming fic pretty soon;) Not sure what it'll be like but will see. It depends on my mood and songs that I catch on the way. Right now I'll concentrate on Hurricane. Will see how my phone will act and whether I'll get into school (if that'll roll as planned I'll get myself mini laptop and later new phone) and whether I'll get a new phone (whichever happens first).
     
  6. Kaunis Mies

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    Yeah and i could proof read chapters and edit them for you if you like? You can see by my own stuff how good i am
     
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    Oh yeah.
    That would be just awesome.
    And it alre reminds me that I need to check inbox on ff.net I fear they've already deleted everything due to maintenance.
     
  8. Kaunis Mies

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    Yeah and you can learn from me on that and be as good as me
     
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    Yup
     
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    Niice one
     

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