CSI:Miami Road Trip #11: We Ain't Comin' Home

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  1. CSISDFlash

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    Oh lord talkin about a pick up artist! She those two deserve eachother! I think it would only be fitting that Tom should go out with Katie just to piss off Speed and Lori at the same time! Lol! Wait until speed gets aload of Tom & Lori finding Katie!

    Great update!
     
  2. racefh853629

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    ^^ You know, I've kinda always liked Tom... I think... haha

    Katie. I love how she can go through everything Lori listed, and still not change. It's just funny. :D I'm glad she's okay, though. :D

    Great update!
     
  3. Finch

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    Thanks so much for the reviews! Always a pleasure to read. :D *snuggles everyone*

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    Hospital, hallway

    Tom: *sips coffee*

    Lori: *walks over* I'm sorry about her. *looks down* You have your gear on.

    Tom: I'm officially on-duty now.

    Lori: *nods* Right.

    Speed: *walks over* Where is she?

    Lori: Hitting on the doctors in that room over there. *points*

    Speed: *looks at Tom* You get an initial statement?

    Tom: *hands over book*

    Speed: *opens book, looks down* Where was she?

    Tom: We're thinking Kendall-Tamiami Executive Airport. It seems to fit with your theory that a cop's the one doing the kidnapping. It's the central air base for the Miami-Dade Police Aerial Unit.

    Speed: How'd she find you?

    Lori: She literally rounded the corner and saw us. I was in Kendall with Tom.

    Speed: *lifts head* Why.

    Lori: I was packing.

    Speed: Why the hell were you packing at Carter's house?

    Lori: Because I was crashing there.

    Speed: With this piece of garbage?

    Tom: Piss off, Speedle.

    Speed: *looks at Tom* Where the hell do you get off talking to me like that?

    Tom: Gee, I've angered it. Surprise.

    Speed: *glares* Y-

    Lori: *places hand on Speed's chest* Why don't you go see Mom.

    Speed: *looks at Lori*

    Lori: Please.

    Speed: *walks away*

    Tom: *crosses arms*

    Nurse: Watch it!

    Cart tips

    Tom: *grabs Lori, pulls her backward*

    Cart crashes over, medical supplies scatter all over floor

    Nurse: I told you not to stack it like that!

    Intern: You told me to put the bags up there for you.

    Nurse: Clean this up.

    Lori: *staring at Tom*

    Tom: You okay?

    Lori: Yeah. *steps back, trips over medical supplies*

    Tom: *grabs Lori*

    Lori: *latches onto Tom*

    Tom: You gonna make it?

    Lori: *frowns, pushes Tom*

    Tom: *laughs*

    Lori: *bumps into cart, trips*

    Tom: You need to learn how to coordinate. This is like a bad slapstick comedy.

    Lori: They're all bad.

    Tom: Here, why don't you come over here away from the obstacles. *takes Lori's hand*

    Lori: *pushes Tom* I can do it. *jumps over debris*

    Tom: Just trying to help.

    Lori: I don't need your help.

    Speed: *walks over* Well your mother appears to be doing just fine.

    Lori: Yeah I figured that much in the car.

    Speed: We're going to check out the airport. Tom, I guess you can join us unless you have a problem with that.

    Tom: No, I'm fine with it. I'm the one that broke the case, afterall.

    Speed: Katie broke the case. She's the one who turned up alive, remember?

    Lori: *steps over bag, falls over plastic*

    Tom: *kneels, grabs Lori's arm*

    Lori: DAMNIT! COME ON! *pushes Tom* Stop it.

    Tom: *stands*

    Speed: *stares at Tom*

    Lori: *stands*

    Tom: You alright?

    Lori: Stop asking me that.

    Tom: You have some plastic in your hair. *reaches up, grabs plastic*

    Lori: *pushes Tom's hand* I'll get it.

    Tom: *nods, lowers head*

    Speed: *narrows eyes*

    Tom: I'll go start the car. *walks away*

    Lori: *dusts self off, looks back*

    Speed: *shakes head*

    Lori: See you later. *walks away*

    TBC.........................
     
  4. racefh853629

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    Hmm... interesting...

    Does Speed hate Tom because Tom's the male version of Lori? :lol:

    I'm still glad Katie's okay... and Katie... hahaha.

    Great update! :)
     
  5. Anni Grey

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    I guess it's safe to say that Speed doesn't like Tom. Ha...considering that they are just one step away from each other, I find that rather ironic and hilarious. Cute though.

    What's more hilarious...Lori and her inability to stay upright and balanced. You could just sense the frustration building from Lori, which of course makes it even more hilarious!

    Great update!
     
  6. CSISDFlash

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    Damn Lori! first day on them new legs! lol! What the hell got her so damn flustered all of a sudden! Shes just a one woman reckin crew all of a sudden! And whats up with Speed not helping her out when shes falling all over the place! i guess hes gonna be a typical man and stand there and look at her while she mops the floor up with her body!

    I'm surprised he didn't have some smart ass remark for her! wonder why he didn't ask her if she was drunk or taking her meds. And why didn't she tell Speed she was leaving to go back to Scott in NY. The girls conflicted! She has issues!

    Good update!
     
  7. Finch

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    Thanks so much for the reviews. :D :D

    :lol:!

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    Kendall, house, 2pm

    Lori: *taping box* Can you stop pacing?

    Tom: *looks over* What?

    Lori: You're making me dizzy.

    Tom: Do you need any help?

    Lori: No, I got it. Why, you need something to do? I thought you were 'on-duty'.

    Tom: When are you leaving?

    Lori: Tomorrow.

    Tom: Why?

    Lori: Because that's when my flight leaves.

    Tom: When will I see you again?

    Lori: *lifts head* ...Okay this is getting creepy. Do you have a problem with me leaving?

    Tom: Yes.

    Lori: *walks around table* Tom...I realize that you haven't made many friends over the years and obviously we've grown closer but...I'm doing this. This is my last crack at having a family, a functional one. If I need to do it away from here, so be it. I'm sorry that our friendship has to suffer b-

    Tom: *kisses Lori*

    Lori: *lifts brows*

    Tom: *places hand on Lori's cheek*

    Lori: *closes eyes*

    Tom: *sighs, rests forehead on Lori's* ...I don't want you to go.

    Lori: *steps back* You'll be fine. *grabs tape*

    Tom: *stares at Lori* I've lost everything and now I'm going to lose you too?

    Lori: *lifts head* ...You haven't lost everything. You've gained your life back. Tom, heroin is...there's a reason I never touched the stuff. It's next to impossible to kick. You should be dead right now.

    Tom: *nods*

    Lori: Besides, I'm sure you'll find a great girl and you'll have a whole bunch of kids and in 20 years, you'll look back on this and it won't seem as hard you think it is now.

    Tom: Maybe you're right.

    Lori: *smiles* Of course I am. Now, I do need you to come to the shipping place with me, some of the boxes are a little beyond what my petite frame can handle. But we have to stop by the bank first, Scott set me up with his account info and he's paying for it.

    Tom: Sure.

    Lori: And uh...let's keep our lips to ourselves, yes?

    Tom: *nods*

    Lori: *walks away*

    Tom: *sigh*

    Bank of America, ATM area

    Lori: *places card into slot, presses buttons*

    Tom: *leans against wall*

    Lori: English. *presses button* Balance. *presses button* Display on screen. *presses button*

    Tom: Do you need to give a commentary?

    Lori: Shut up, Carter.

    Tom: *rolls eyes, crosses arms*

    Balance pops up

    Lori: HOLY SHIT!

    Tom: *looks at Lori*

    People look over

    Lori: *clears throat* Jesus, he could buy the Empire State Building. *presses buttons*

    Tom: *looks up at mirror*

    Guy: *opens trenchcoat, pulls out paper*

    Gun is in view

    Tom: *pulls out gun*

    Lori: *looks at Tom*

    Tom: *staring up at mirror*

    Guy: *walks over to counter*

    Tom: *walks away*

    Lori: *looks back* What the hell are you doing?

    Counter

    Guy: *steps up*

    Woman: *smiles* How can I help you?

    Guy: *places paper onto counter*

    Woman: *looks down at paper, smile fades*

    Tom: *steps up behind Guy*

    Woman: *looks at Tom*

    Tom: *nods*

    Woman: *looks down at badge* ...It'll just take a minute, sir. *opens drawer, grabs cash*

    Guy: *taps on counter*

    Woman: *fills bag*

    Guy: Hurry up.

    Woman: *nods, throws cash into bag*

    Guy: *looks around*

    Woman: *hands over bag*

    Tom: *lifts gun*

    Guy: *snatches bag* Thanks. *turns around, stops*

    Tom: Hi.

    Guy: *stares into barrel*

    Tom: Drop it.

    Guy: *drops bag*

    Lori: *staring at Tom*

    Tom: *reaches into coat, grabs gun* Get on the floor.

    Guy: *bolts sideways*

    Tom: *sticks out leg*

    Guy: *trips over leg, stumbles*

    Tom: *grabs Guy, slams butt of gun into his face*

    Guy: *falls into counter, drops to the floor, unconscious*

    Tom: *holsters gun*

    Everyone: *staring at Tom*

    Tom: *picks up bag, throws it onto counter*

    Woman: *grabs bag*

    Tom: *looks down* Oh yeah. Miami-Dade Police.

    Lori: *blinks*

    Tom: I keep forgetting that part. *walks over to Lori* You done?

    Lori: Uh...yeah.

    Tom: Great, let's get those boxes to New York then. *walks away*

    Lori: *lifts brow*

    Truck

    Lori: *gets in, shuts door* What the hell was that back there?

    Tom: A robbery in progress.

    Lori: Why did you intervene?

    Tom: ...It's what I get paid for.

    Lori: Were you doing it to impress me?

    Tom: Even if I could compete with your hot gazillionaire husband, I wouldn't risk my life to do it. So no. You pay your taxes so people like me can protect people like you from getting robbed and shot. Don't mention it though.

    Lori: Sorry. *turns key*

    Tom: *stares out window*

    Lori: *swings wheel*

    Miami Lab

    Speed: *staring through microscope*

    Katie: *trots over* Hi.

    Speed: You're supposed to be at home. In bed.

    Katie: How's the case going?

    Speed: You don't get to know.

    Katie: Did you identify that body?

    Speed: It's in autopsy.

    Katie: How come you were allowed to work my case?

    Speed: Because apparently conflict of interest is not in this lab's vocabulary.

    Katie: *smiles* Awww you're emotionally involved.

    Speed: *lifts head, looks down at folder*

    Katie: *walks over* It's okay. I love you too. *kisses Speed's cheek*

    Speed: *frowns* Get out. I'm working. *clicks pen, writes*

    Katie: On what?

    Speed: Evidence.

    Katie: What evidence?

    Speed: Trace evidence. This is the Trace Lab.

    Katie: *looks into microscope* This is the rope you recovered from the crate. It was used to tie my hands and legs.

    Speed: I sent DNA to Valera to see if she can isolate yours and the kidnapper's. Right now I'm working on the type of rope. Also, there was a stray fibre inside one of the knots that remained intact which means it fell there as the knot was being tied.

    Katie: Meaning it's from whoever did the tying.

    Speed: *nods* Yeah.

    Katie: So what kind of knot is it?

    Speed: *opens binder* It's a clove hitch knot. It's usually used for tying around trees. We could be looking at somebody with a military background.

    Katie: Cops with military backgrounds that also have access to the airport...shouldn't be too hard to narrow down.

    Speed: You don't remember anything about your kidnapper?

    Katie: If I did, I would tell you.

    Speed: Okay.

    Katie: I'm sorry I can't be more help.

    Speed: There's plenty of physical evidence. We'll get this guy.

    Katie: Thanks. *smirks* In all honesty, I wouldn't want to have anyone else on the case.

    Speed: *looks at Katie*

    Katie: *walks away*

    Speed: *slides microscope over*

    Brooklyn, New York, bedroom, 3 days later

    Steph: *jumps into bed* MOMMA! DADDY!

    Lori: *frowns*

    Scott: *looks over* Yes, sweetheart?

    Steph: BWEAKFAST!

    Scott: *looks at watch*

    Lori: Please tell me it's not morning.

    Scott: 7:30.

    Lori: *covers face with pillow*

    Steph: *tugs on pillow* Momma, get up.

    Lori: Mom's sleeping. Bug Dad.

    Steph: *crawls onto Scott, tugs his hair* Food.

    Scott: Stephanie...

    Steph: *frowns* Daddy.

    Scott: Okay. *sits up*

    Steph: *slides down onto bed*

    Scott: *scoops Steph into arms, stands*

    TBC............................
     
  8. CSISDFlash

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    Well Tha was interesting! What was up with Tom? Did he suddenly come to life and remeber he was a cop, and the training automaticly kicked in, or was he really trying to prove to Lori that he could be just as mocho and Heroic as Scott! Did he think that she would just jump into his arms to be carried away by him! Well at least she made it to Ny. we'll see how long she can stay away from him!

    What going on with Speed & Katie! How long is he gonna keep doing this fine line Tango that he does with her! I honestly think hes torn between his love for Katie and His love for Anni and that he really doesn't know which one he really wants! As for now he is tring to have his cake and eat it to as long as they will let him. I feel like hes going to end up letting katie break him down again so she can get what she wants, he will get what he wants to!

    Great update Geni!
     
  9. Anni Grey

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    Oh awwww...I feel so bad for Tom right now. He's losing the only woman who cared for him. That's so heartbreaking especially now that he's found his way. Ack..but was he trying to get himself killed or something? I get that he's a cop, but what a way to show how good he was... Lori should've smacked him for that. Loved the kiss though. It's the stuff unrequitted love stories are made of...

    Aww...Lori and Scott...together...with Stephanie...Now that's the stuff that real LOVE stories are made of. It would be really cool if they could just exist like that...Seriously...

    Awesome update, Geni!
     
  10. Finch

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    Thanks muchly for the lovely reviews. :) They make my night.

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    Miami Lab

    Speed: *writing*

    Tom: *walks in* Got an ID on your Jane Doe. Tina Abrams.

    Speed: *lifts head* Didn't you and Horatio work that case?

    Tom: Yeah. Same story too. Highway disappearance, cellphone left on the seat dead, no trace of the victim. Except our second victim survived and escaped.

    Speed: We don't know if there were more before the first.

    Tom: Serial killer cop. Interesting. Do we have any suspects?

    Speed: Not yet. I was just about to call you so you could run some information for me.

    Tom: What kind of information?

    Speed: I need you to search up officers who also have a military background.

    Tom: Including detectives?

    Speed: Everyone.

    Tom: *nods* You don't think that'll cause a bit of a problem? I mean, that's why you guys couldn't get to the car treads. Too much red tape.

    Speed: The killer could be a dentist or a junkie, it doesn't matter. We're going to work this just as hard as any other case, red tape and department opinion be damned.

    Tom: There's that...tone.

    Speed: Excuse me?

    Tom: Nothing.

    Speed: If you want to say something, say it.

    Tom: That's how Lori sounds when she's chastising me for something.

    Speed: *frowns*

    Tom: *scratches head*

    Speed: You need to find some other friends to 'hang out' with.

    Tom: Doesn't really matter. Lori left for New York 3 days ago.

    Speed: *lifts brow* What?

    Tom: Yeah. She's living with Scott and her kid.

    Speed: *stares at Tom*

    Tom: She didn't tell her own father?

    Speed: Get on the information, Carter.

    Tom: *walks away*

    Condo, 11pm

    Anni: *sips wine* Oh hey, this is the good stuff.

    Speed: Yeah you seem to be enjoying it.

    Anni: *smiles, slaps Speed* Oh please. I am not drunk. I simply appreciate a good wine.

    Speed: I believe you.

    Anni: *smiling, leans closer, strokes Speed's cheek* Okay, maybe I'm a little buzzed.

    Speed: *smiles* It's fine, I'm drunk too.

    Anni: *laughs* Wow, should I be filming this so I can remember what a smile looks like on you?

    Speed: I think you've made enough films while intoxicated.

    Anni: *snorts, laughs*

    Speed: *smiling, kisses Anni*

    Anni: *grabs Speed's hair*

    Speed: *lifts Anni's shirt*

    Anni: *climbs into Speed's lap*

    Doorbell rings

    Anni: *blinks*

    Speed: ...Please tell me I hallucinated that.

    Doorbell rings

    Anni: Not unless we're having the same repetitive hallucinations.

    Speed: Geez, I'm not Eric.

    Anni: *smiles, slides off couch, staggers sideways* Whoa.

    Speed: *stands*

    Anni: *staggers over to door*

    Speed: *walks around couch*

    Anni: *opens door, leans on it*

    Katie: *standing in doorway*

    Anni: *smiles* Katie. What's a place like you doing in a girl like here?

    Katie: Um...remember how I lent you my house keys so you could pick up your DVDs and stuff while I was at work?

    Anni: Yeah.

    Katie: Well I need to get into my house.

    Anni: Great.

    Katie: ...I need my keys.

    Anni: *gasp* Who has your keys!

    Katie: You do.

    Anni: *looks around, pats pockets* ...Nnnno, I don't have them. HEY TIMMY!

    Speed: *walks over* Yes?

    Anni: Katie wants her house keys.

    Speed: Then she's at the wrong house.

    Anni: *bursts into giggles*

    Katie: Okay, ha ha game's over. Keys.

    Anni: The Keys? That's like 50 miles thatta way.

    Katie: Stop pissing around. I need them.

    Speed: *wraps arms around Anni's waist, kisses her shoulder*

    Anni: *closes eyes*

    Katie: *looks at Speed* HEY! *snaps fingers* Important conversation here!

    Speed: *glances at Katie* You're still here?

    Katie: *frowns* I want my god damned house keys.

    Speed: Sleep on the front lawn, you're an outdoor type slut.

    Katie: *staring at Speed*

    Anni: *laughs* Outdoor slut, that's a good one.

    Speed: *smiles*

    Anni: Hey Katie, want a drink?

    Katie: I want my house keys.

    Anni: Pish posh. Fish frosh. Mish mosh. Wait...what was I talking about again?

    Speed: Moshes.

    Anni: RIGHT. What's a mosh?

    Speed: Sounds like a type of lake.

    Anni: That's a marsh, honey.

    Speed: *shrugs* There's a lot of weird shit in Florida.

    Katie: I expect this from Anni but not from you.

    Speed: You're seriously killing the mood. I don't think you realize how beer affects men so I have a time limit here.

    Katie: *crosses arms* MY KEYS.

    Speed: *slams door*

    Anni: *leans against door, smiles*

    Speed: *kisses Anni*

    Banging on door is heard

    Speed: *looks at watch* Who would be calling at this hour? It's 79 o'clock.

    Anni: *opens door*

    Katie: Keys.

    Speed: *squints* I'm not buying what you're selling. Unless you're selling vacuum cleaners because we need a new one. OH you can clean our place! Not only are you good on your hands and knees but you never lose suction.

    Katie: *frowning*

    Anni: *laughing* HANDS!

    Speed: *staggers sideways, grabs onto wall*

    Anni: *latches onto Speed, nibbles his ear*

    Speed: *leans head against wall* You should stand straighter. Your posture is terrible, it's even doubled.

    Katie: Anni, just tell me where my keys are. I can get them myself.

    Anni: *unzips jeans* Come get 'em.

    Speed: Oh a fishing expedition. *looks back at Anni* Excellent way to incorporate Floridian culture into our lives.

    Anni: Thank you. I always think of the little people.

    Katie: My keys are not down your pants.

    Anni: Fine, I know someone who won't mind a little investigation.

    Speed: *smiles*

    Katie: *rolls eyes*

    TBC...............................
     
  11. Anni Grey

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    Well, the cat's out of the bag. Scott and Lori are living it up in NY and Poor Tom's having emo memories about her *wipes tear* I do feel bad for him, seriously...

    And the evening at Speed and Anni's house! WHOOO HOOO talk about potenital hotness! And Speed's even drunk! And he calls Katie and outdoors slut...classic line...really! Who knew they were so frisky? :) Poor Katie and her keys. She can do either one or two things.
    A) Wait patiently outside for them to finish- which in all likely manners, they'll pass out , forgetting all about her. or....

    B) She could go and scavange for them, all the while listening to them...

    I think choice A's a bit better...lol but hey, that's just me.


    Awesome update, Geni!
     
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    Well Looks like Anni's gonna be trying out that popill pocket fisherman with Speed tonught and Speed may get to top the night off check out the sucktion on Miss Hoover if he can get her drunk and on all 4s before she finds her keys and leaves!

    great Update Geni!
     
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    :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

    Holy crap the drunk couple is hilarious! I feel bad for Katie, though, trying to deal with them... haha.

    And I'm happy that the family is together again! :D

    Great updates! :)
     
  14. Finch

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    Thanks for the reviews. :D *hugs*

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    Condo, 12am

    Katie: *leaning against counter* Keep searching.

    Speed: *dangling keys* How come keys aren't musical instruments? They're very musical.

    Katie: Those are your house keys.

    Speed: *drops keys into drawer, digs around* There has to be a thousand here.

    Katie: There's 10 sets.

    Speed: *blinks* How 'bout these ones? *lifts keys*

    Katie: Those are yours again.

    Speed: *drops keys, reaches into drawer* How about this?

    Katie: That's your badge.

    Speed: *belch* Pretty good for getting me were I need to go.

    Katie: Well unfortunately, your badge is not going to get me into my house.

    Speed: Have you tried getting a warrant? They help.

    Katie: I need my KEYS! Not a warrant!

    Speed: Chill out. You don't want to deflate your boob job.

    Katie: *frowns*

    Speed: These yours?

    Katie: That's a pencil.

    Speed: *looks down at pencil*

    Katie: Where the hell did Anni go?

    Speed: *points*

    Katie: *looks into living room*

    Anni: *lying on top of couch, flailing* I'M SWIMMING! SHARK ATTACK!

    Katie: *sigh*

    Speed: *drinks beer, rummages through drawer*

    Katie: I thought you weren't drinking anymore.

    Speed: *picks up keys* These yours?

    Katie: Those are plastic.

    Speed: *looks down at keys* Oh. I guess Lori had Steph over here at some point.

    Katie: You know she went to New York to live with Scott, right?

    Speed: *looks at Katie*

    Katie: You think she'll screw it up?

    Speed: Oh hell no. Lori's a good kid. *digs through drawer*

    Katie: *lifts brow* She is?

    Speed: Yup. *lifts keys* These yours?

    Katie: FINALLY. *snatches keys* Geez.

    Speed: *slamming drawer into counter*

    Katie: *grabs drawer* I'll get it.

    Speed: *staggers into fridge, drinks beer*

    Anni: *runs over, slides into counter, falls over*

    Katie: *looks down at floor* You okay, hon?

    Anni: *giggling*

    Speed: *starts to laugh*

    Anni: *laughing* KABOOM!

    Katie: You're both morons.

    Speed: *staggers over, falls onto floor*

    Anni: Hey! Joinin' me on the floor!

    Speed: It's where all the cool people hang out.

    Anni: *crawls over* You're definitely cool enough to hang out with the likes of me. *kisses Speed*

    Speed: *smiles* I love you.

    Anni: *leans forehead against Speed, smiling* Well I wubbles you too.

    Katie: I'm leaving, guys.

    Anni: *giggling*

    Speed: *staring at Anni, smiling*

    Katie: HELLO! I'm going! *waves arms*

    Anni: Do you hear something?

    Speed: Only you.

    Katie: Ugh. *walks away*

    Miami Lab, 8am next day

    Speed: *putting on latex gloves*

    Delko: *walks in* Hey man, why are the lights off? *turns on lights*

    Speed: N-...*angry sigh, rubs eyes*

    Delko: *laughs* You look terrible.

    Speed: Thank you.

    Delko: Rough night?

    Speed: If I could remember it, I'd be able to tell you.

    Delko: I missed a party?

    Speed: No.

    Delko: Working on the killer cop case, huh.

    Speed: Yeah but I still don't have a suspect pool. Carter was supposed to get me a list but I haven't heard from him.

    Delko: You know...I was just in PD talking to Tripp and he told me that Carter's father was a cop back in New York around the same time your father was involved in all of that mob stuff.

    Speed: Yeah, so?

    Delko: Well before he was a cop and got into drugs pretty bad, he was in the navy.

    Speed: *stares at Eric* Yeah. And?

    Delko: Doesn't the evidence say that the killer probably has a military background?

    Speed: You think Carter's dad is killing people?

    Delko: No, he died of an overdose 10 years ago.

    Speed: *frowns* Then stop wasting my t...*frown fades*

    Delko: *smiles*

    Speed: *pulls off gloves* Process his car, I need to talk to him. *walks away*

    Delko: *nods*

    Interview room, 2 hours later

    Speed: *sits*

    Tom: *leaning back in chair* Doesn't the lab have a layout room or something where you people meet to discuss cases?

    Speed: I'm not here to discuss the case with you. At least not as a CSI. *slides folder over*

    Tom: *opens folder*

    Speed: Your father was in the navy for 12 years.

    Tom: *lifts head* What the hell does that have to do with anything?

    Speed: Did he ever teach you survival skills? How to tie knots, maybe?

    Tom: I was his only son.

    Speed: I'll take that as a yes. You own a 2000 Impala, correct?

    Tom: Am I a suspect?

    Speed: Answer the question.

    Tom: *frowns* Yeah.

    Speed: You were also the last person to see Tina Abrams alive.

    Tom: I responded to a shots fired call. She was the head of the branch, it would stand to reason that she was in the building.

    Speed: You live only miles away from the airport.

    Tom: I'd never even been to that airport until this case started. Do you have my DNA? A witness? Because as far as I'm concerned, this is all coincidental. I didn't kidnap your ex-wife.

    Speed: *nods*

    Tom: You're just pissed off at me because I slept with your daughter.

    Speed: *stares at Tom*

    Tom: She wanted it. It's not like I forced her onto the bed. I can't help that your daughter's a slut.

    Speed: *shoves table into Tom*

    Tom: AGH! *falls backwards*

    Speed: *walks around table, grabs Tom by the collar*

    Tom: HEY! HEY!

    Speed: *slams fist into Tom's face*

    Tom: UGH! *falls over onto table*

    Speed: *kicks table*

    Table slides away, Tom falls to the floor

    Tom: *holding face*

    Speed: Get up.

    Tom: *stands*

    Speed: You're off the case.

    Tom: No kidding. Do I get to hit you next?

    Speed: *walks away*

    Tom: Guess not. *pushes on jaw*

    TBC..........................
     
  15. Anni Grey

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    So...fantastic! Love the fact that they were drunk together, and laughing at the fact that Katie couldn't find her keys. Speed going through the drawer was cute, he picked up everything but her keys. And...they got really lovey dovey at the very end. I suppose being the third wheel kinda got to Katie...lol...

    ...And Speed pays for his night of fun with his wife and a case of beer. I thought it was cute that he was in a darkened room...oh the joys of a hangover..Wonder how Anni's doing ...

    So...Tom's a suspect...That's surprising...extremely surprising. What's even more, he called Lori a slut and had the audacity to tell her father that he slept with her. Simply not the Tom I grew to like...Losing Lori must've been really hard on him...

    Excellent update@
     
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